Tanahai ka alam ~

by BeNam on April 04, 2006, 02:37:38 AM

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BeNam

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«Reply #30 on: April 07, 2006, 02:36:27 AM »

Jeet & Gesu Thanks! Good going Chitra and Jeet and Gesu you are cool!

Kuchh sujhata nahi kya likhu,
Tanahai alfaz chura gayi!
Kuchh aur tadapana hai nasib main,
Judai ka farman suna gayi!


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~~~~ Tanahai ka alam ~~~~~

«Reply #31 on: April 07, 2006, 09:43:04 AM »

Nice work everyone !!! Usual Smile


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«Reply #32 on: April 08, 2006, 08:37:37 AM »

Hai Tanhai ka Alam Kuch aaisa
Har chehre mein tujhe Doond raha hoon
Na jaene kabh khatam honge yeh raaste
Main toh bus chale ja raha hoon...!!!


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«Reply #33 on: April 08, 2006, 09:22:54 AM »

gud one jeet...

Chalte chalte yoon hi kisi modh per hum tumhe mill jayenge,
Dekhoge gaur se apni parchhayi ko to hamein bhi saath paaoge,
Jeena marna hai ab sung tere hamein tum bin sanam hum kidhar jaayenge...

gesu's koshish!!!!!!


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«Reply #34 on: April 08, 2006, 09:42:36 AM »

Kya baat hai bahut khob Gesu and Jeet


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«Reply #35 on: April 08, 2006, 09:50:23 AM »

thanks badnaam ji...


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«Reply #36 on: April 11, 2006, 11:27:26 PM »

Tanhai main saaz ki kami hai,
Wadiyon main mausam ki nami hai,
Arman hai tujhe gale lagaya jaye,
Per Dil-e-ashana ko mehboob teri kami hai!


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«Reply #37 on: April 12, 2006, 04:03:44 AM »

wah wah benam ji.. bahut khoob....


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«Reply #38 on: April 12, 2006, 04:18:08 AM »

Quote from: "BeNam"

Tanhai main saaz ki kami hai,
Wadiyon main mausam ki nami hai,
Arman hai tujhe gale lagaya jaye,
Per Dil-e-ashana ko mehboob teri kami hai!

Tanhaayiyon ke sannaatey mujhe daraatey hai,
Shamshaan sa lage chaaro ore usmein ek zinda laash se jiye jaate hai,
Kabhi tadpey teri nishaaniyon se kabhi yaadon mein khoye rehte hai,
Aankhon mein ashqo ko dil mein khoon-e-armaano ko hum sahe jaate hai,
Tumhari kami jaise ke saansein atkey hawa na honey per,
Ek baar bus pehloo mein tere sir rakh ke is duniya se jaana chahtey hai...

gesu's koshish!!!!!


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«Reply #39 on: April 12, 2006, 04:51:56 AM »

wah kiya khoob likha hai....good job...benaam, burning desire and gesu...aise hee likhte raheye.........


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~~~~ Tanahai ka alam ~~~~~

«Reply #40 on: April 13, 2006, 02:51:43 AM »

Well said every one!

Tanha her safar, Tanha her manzil,
Tanha her nazar, Tanha her mehfil,
Tujh bin hai tanha her raat,
Satati hai her waqt bus yahi ek baat!

--- BENAM ----
Khaish hai tujhe apana banane ki,
Tere labon pe naam apana likh jane ki!