tang dili (gul)

by gulzargul on October 16, 2008, 11:54:30 AM
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tang gliyaan bata rahee hain tang dili insaan ki
zameen ki hawas main rasty bhi khaa gay

gul
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«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2008, 12:29:29 PM »
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Waah Bahoot Achhe Lines Share Liye Hain,.
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«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2008, 12:31:53 PM »
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tang gliyaan bata rahee hain tang dili insaan ki
zameen ki hawas main rasty bhi khaa gay

gul

Tang Galiyaan Hain To Kya, Meri Dil Ki Duniya Aabaad Hai,.
Kaid Main Hoon Main Uske Shehar Mein, Lekin Meri Soch To Aazaad Hai,.

___________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #3 on: October 16, 2008, 12:36:13 PM »
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nice lines jaanasheen ji

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«Reply #4 on: October 16, 2008, 12:38:31 PM »
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Bohat khoob gul ji

Bohat khoob bhai
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«Reply #5 on: October 16, 2008, 12:40:09 PM »
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Shukriya,./
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«Reply #6 on: October 16, 2008, 01:01:43 PM »
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BOHAT BOHAT KHOOB, BOHAT BEHTAREEN GUL JI!...... Applause Applause


VERY NICE REPLY JAANASHEEN JI........ Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 16, 2008, 01:28:57 PM »
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BAAD MARNE KE MERE DOSTO NE KI YEH BAIMANI
BANAYA MERA MAZAR TO MINAR KHA GAYE

                              -SG-  (INSPIRED BY SOME OTHER SHER)
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«Reply #8 on: October 16, 2008, 01:39:47 PM »
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thank u tanha ji

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«Reply #9 on: October 16, 2008, 01:42:11 PM »
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nice lines sajid ji


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«Reply #10 on: October 16, 2008, 02:08:03 PM »
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thank u honey ji
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«Reply #11 on: October 16, 2008, 02:13:23 PM »
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tang gliyaan bata rahee hain tang dili insaan ki
zameen ki hawas main rasty bhi khaa gay

gul
ACCHA LIKHA HAI GULZAAR SAHAB  Clapping Smiley

Tang Galiyaan Hain To Kya, Meri Dil Ki Duniya Aabaad Hai,.
Kaid Main Hoon Main Uske Shehar Mein, Lekin Meri Soch To Aazaad Hai,.

___________________________________________-Jaanasheen-

BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AZEEM  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: October 16, 2008, 09:22:43 PM »
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very good g.mahashay

do shabdo ka khel he
per hota nahi mel he
sanghersh ker na sake
ishk se nahi uska talmel he

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«Reply #13 on: October 16, 2008, 09:28:43 PM »
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nice lines Kanta!!
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«Reply #14 on: October 16, 2008, 09:37:24 PM »
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do u like? thanks pooja
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