tanha chand

by chitralsony on February 12, 2009, 07:09:48 PM
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   mairi treh kitna akayla hay adi raat ka pora chand
   apni kahani mujko sunata hay adi raat ka pora chand
   door falak pay rehta hay,phir bi apna sa lagta hay
   mujko tari yad dilata hay adi raat ka pora chand
   tu jo hr nata tor giya bech bhanwer may chor giya
   tairi raah wo daikhta hay adi raat ka pora chand
   tum bin mairi halat daikh kay wo sitmgr hansta hay
   mujko pagal kehta hay adi raat ka pora chand
   tairi yaad kay lamhay drd jub mujko daitay hain
   drd wo mairay sang sehta hay adi raat ka pora chand
   jub may osko daikhti hun os may tairi surat pati hun
   wo kyun tum sa lagta hay adi raat ka pora chand
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aaina
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2009, 10:47:18 AM »
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bhut khoob chital ji/
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2009, 11:16:24 AM »
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   mairi treh kitna akayla hay adi raat ka pora chand
   apni kahani mujko sunata hay adi raat ka pora chand
   door falak pay rehta hay,phir bi apna sa lagta hay
   mujko tari yad dilata hay adi raat ka pora chand
   tu jo hr nata tor giya bech bhanwer may chor giya
   tairi raah wo daikhta hay adi raat ka pora chand
   tum bin mairi halat daikh kay wo sitmgr hansta hay
   mujko pagal kehta hay adi raat ka pora chand
   tairi yaad kay lamhay drd jub mujko daitay hain
   drd wo mairay sang sehta hay adi raat ka pora chand
   jub may osko daikhti hun os may tairi surat pati hun
   wo kyun tum sa lagta hay adi raat ka pora chand


bahoot umda bahut hi accha likha hai aapne chitralsony ji
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2009, 04:55:22 PM »
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Wah kya khoob Likha hai Taiba ji.. Bahoot Khoob
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2009, 02:51:16 AM »
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   mairi treh kitna akayla hay adi raat ka pora chand
   apni kahani mujko sunata hay adi raat ka pora chand
   door falak pay rehta hay,phir bi apna sa lagta hay
   mujko tari yad dilata hay adi raat ka pora chand
   tu jo hr nata tor giya bech bhanwer may chor giya
   tairi raah wo daikhta hay adi raat ka pora chand
   tum bin mairi halat daikh kay wo sitmgr hansta hay
   mujko pagal kehta hay adi raat ka pora chand
   tairi yaad kay lamhay drd jub mujko daitay hain
   drd wo mairay sang sehta hay adi raat ka pora chand
   jub may osko daikhti hun os may tairi surat pati hun
   wo kyun tum sa lagta hay adi raat ka pora chand

Wah wah .... Bahut khoob bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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vitasta
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2009, 03:49:42 AM »
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very nice chitralsony ji!
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chitralsony
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2009, 05:33:04 PM »
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very nice chitralsony ji!
thank u so much vitasta ji
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