~~~Tarsao mujhe...~~~

by vitasta on May 22, 2009, 10:35:45 AM
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han jao mujhse chhipa ke khudko jalao mujhe
hosh jaye mera saara itna aake sataao mujhe

tarranum mein tassavur to main leke ghoomun
toot ke na jab tak bhikhar jaun aazmao mujhe

katra katra aab ko main meelon chalun, kuch
is tarah se tamaam umr, 'Noor,' tarsao mujhe

chhalak uthna dastoor ho chala 'Viti,' pyale ka
adhron se khaali aaj bezaar yun kar jao mujhe
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«Reply #1 on: May 22, 2009, 10:37:17 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai
too good
Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 22, 2009, 10:39:01 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Viti Ji, Applause  Applause

Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: May 22, 2009, 10:54:07 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai
too good
Applause Applause

thanks a lot diya ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2009, 10:54:56 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Viti Ji, Applause  Applause

Shally.

shukriya shally ji! Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 22, 2009, 02:57:25 PM »
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Bahoot khoob Vitasta.. Gud Work!
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vitasta
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2009, 02:59:19 PM »
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shukriya sophi ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2009, 03:01:22 PM »
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han jao mujhse chhipa ke khudko jalao mujhe
hosh jaye mera saara itna aake sataao mujhe

tarranum mein tassavur to main leke ghoomun
toot ke na jab tak bhikhar jaun aazmao mujhe

katra katra aab ko main meelon chalun, kuch
is tarah se tamaam umr, 'Noor,' tarsao mujhe

chhalak uthna dastoor ho chala 'Viti,' pyale ka
adhron se khaali aaj bezaar yun kar jao mujhe

Wah yaar kamal ka likhti hai aap Vitiiiii dear
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«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2009, 03:08:49 PM »
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Wah yaar kamal ka likhti hai aap Vitiiiii dear

haha bahut bahut shukriya roja ji!  Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: October 20, 2013, 05:16:15 PM »
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kya baat hai bahut achha likha hai
aapne nice
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