tasveer kharaab karu'n

by arifuddin on August 20, 2010, 09:54:36 PM
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mai ye chahu'n k tujhe Gulaab karu'n,
tujhe likhu'n aur dilki band kitaab karu'n ,

tu mujhme miljaye aur gum ho jaye
kuch yu'n teri tasveer ko kharaab karu'n,

tere Zulfo'n se Guzarti hava ko sanso me band kiya
aur kitna mai in paigamo'n ka hisaab karu'n

wo kehti meri tasveer to tere dilme basgayi
ab bata Kaise me tujhse hijaab karu'n

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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2010, 01:02:34 AM »
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wah Arif ji wah... kin shabdon me aapki taarif karun is kavita ke liye samajh hi nahi aa raha hai... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut hi umda...!!!

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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2010, 03:44:34 AM »
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hayeeeeeee........last stanza to mastam hai......

bht hi pyari gazal kahi h aapne.......
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2010, 03:51:27 PM »
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wah Arif ji wah... kin shabdon me aapki taarif karun is kavita ke liye samajh hi nahi aa raha hai... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut hi umda...!!!

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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2010, 03:54:14 PM »
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hayeeeeeee........last stanza to mastam hai......

bht hi pyari gazal kahi h aapne.......

anu ji bohat bohat shukriya Qushi huvi k aapko pasand aaya ye nacheez ka kalaam  read2
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2010, 01:06:59 PM »
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Very very Impressive ..... very touching....very nice creation.... !
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