"tera ahsas-e-mohabbat"...............tanowar

by Tanowar Jahan on July 19, 2012, 01:45:24 PM
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TERA AHSAS-E-MOHABBAT AAJ BHI IN SANSO ME HAI.
TU BEWAFA HI SAHI, PAR TERI JHALAK AAJ BHI IN ANKHO ME HAI..

TERI ZINDAGI KA HISSA MAIN NAHI, PAR NA JANE KYU AISA LAGATA HAI.
MERE JISM KA HISSA TU AAJ BHI HAI..

TADAP KAR RO DETI HAI YE ANKHE,TERI JUDAI ME, KYU K TERE BEDARD MOHBBAT KE ANSU AAJ BHI IN ANKHO ME HAI..

TU KHUSH HAI MUJHE BHULA KAR YE YAKEEN NAHI HOTA,
KYU K TERE AHSAS KA KUCH LAMHA AAJ BHI IN SANSO ME HAI..
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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2012, 02:02:39 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Tanowar ji....!!! Bahut din baad aapko padha achcha laga...!!! yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!

tumne ye kaise soch liya tumse juda ho ke main khush ho sakta hoon,
tumhaare aankhon me nami ho main chain ki neend kaise so sakta hoon,

ye sach nahi hai ki tumse duur reh ke maine bhulaa diya hai tumko,
saath nahi ho tum, tumhaari yaadon ke saaye me tadap to sakta hoon,

kabhi socha nahi tha ki ek din is tarha tanha chhod jaaoge tum mujhe,
khush raho tum, us upar waale se tumhaare liye dua kar to sakta hoon...
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«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2012, 02:07:14 PM »
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bohat bohat khoob tanowar ji bohat khoob kaha aapne..... Applause Applause Applause


hriday ji bohat khoob likha hai aapne. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2012, 02:11:21 PM »
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Bemishaal..vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
maan gaye..kya ehsaas hain..javaab nahee
ek ek shabda..jaise kuch kahna chahta hai..
bahut umda...yun hi likhte rahiye..
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«Reply #4 on: July 19, 2012, 02:12:04 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Saurabh ji...!!!


hriday ji bohat khoob likha hai aapne. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 19, 2012, 02:20:12 PM »
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u alws welcome hriday ji. aap to likhte hi bohat khoob hain.. notworthy
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«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2012, 02:23:27 PM »
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Usual Smile

u alws welcome hriday ji. aap to likhte hi bohat khoob hain.. notworthy
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«Reply #7 on: July 19, 2012, 04:04:25 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: July 19, 2012, 06:54:08 PM »
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wah tanowar ji kya khoob pyare pyare ehsas hai... Usual Smile

 Applause Applause
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