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ab to har ek naam ke saath teraa hi naam aataa hai
sitaaraon pe sawaar hoke teraa har paigaam aataa hai
karti hai tu mujhe deewaanaa apni nashili adaaon se
aur mujhpe har baar badtameezi kaa ilzaam aataa hai
tu hi bataa kaise rahe hum qaabu me tujhe dekh ke
tere chehre pe humein pyaar subah shaam aataa hai
hum kar guzarte hain kuch bhi haddon ko paar karke
aur har baar hamaare naam ke saath badnaam aataa hai
pilaa de apne hothon se kabhi tu prem kaa pyaalaaa
kyun har baar haathon me sirf beras sa jaam aata hai
mil letaa hoon tujhse to din meraa guzar jaaataa hai
naa milun tujhse to dil me toofaan saa aa jaataa hai |
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2012, 07:28:06 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2012, 10:20:21 AM » |
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2012, 12:45:52 PM » |
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ab to har ek naam ke saath teraa hi naam aataa hai
sitaaraon pe sawaar hoke teraa har paigaam aataa hai
karti hai tu mujhe deewaanaa apni nashili adaaon se
aur mujhpe har baar badtameezi kaa ilzaam aataa hai
tu hi bataa kaise rahe hum qaabu me tujhe dekh ke
tere chehre pe humein pyaar subah shaam aataa hai
hum kar guzarte hain kuch bhi haddon ko paar karke
aur har baar hamaare naam ke saath badnaam aataa hai
pilaa de apne hothon se kabhi tu prem kaa pyaalaaa
kyun har baar haathon me sirf beras sa jaam aata hai
mil letaa hoon tujhse to din meraa guzar jaaataa hai
naa milun tujhse to dil me toofaan saa aa jaataa hai
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«Reply #8 on: October 20, 2012, 05:13:43 PM » |
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Bahut khoob hriday jee
wah wah wah wah
sach me aapne behad umda likha hai.
aur kasak ji ne bhi.
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«Reply #9 on: October 20, 2012, 05:15:49 PM » |
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«Reply #10 on: October 21, 2012, 08:21:14 AM » |
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parwaz ji.... aapki hausla afzaai aur tareef ki to main hamesha wait karti rehti hun... ur words means alot to me.... thnx ji....
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«Reply #11 on: October 21, 2012, 08:22:13 AM » |
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mkv ji thnx alot ji.... itne din baad likhe mere tute fute kalaam ko bhi aapne pasand kiya aur saraha bhi... bahot khushi hui aur likhne ka hausla bhi hua... yunhi sath dete rahiyega
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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2012, 01:22:28 PM » |
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ab to har ek naam ke saath teraa hi naam aataa hai
sitaaraon pe sawaar hoke teraa har paigaam aataa hai
karti hai tu mujhe deewaanaa apni nashili adaaon se
aur mujhpe har baar badtameezi kaa ilzaam aataa hai
tu hi bataa kaise rahe hum qaabu me tujhe dekh ke
tere chehre pe humein pyaar subah shaam aataa hai
hum kar guzarte hain kuch bhi haddon ko paar karke
aur har baar hamaare naam ke saath badnaam aataa hai
pilaa de apne hothon se kabhi tu prem kaa pyaalaaa
kyun har baar haathon me sirf beras sa jaam aata hai
mil letaa hoon tujhse to din meraa guzar jaaataa hai
naa milun tujhse to dil me toofaan saa aa jaataa hai bahut badiya Hriday jee |
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«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2012, 01:23:24 PM » |
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