Teray naam

by Brijinder on July 06, 2010, 09:05:29 PM
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Teray naam

Jab tu meri aagosh maiN hoti hai
Teri admundhi aankhain
Teray laraztay huay hoNt
Daitay hain bahut si ankahi baatoN ka pataa
Teray jism ki haraarat
UnglioN ki shraarat
NihaaN jaanay kitnay maikhaanoN ka nashaa

Jhatak kar khol daiti ho
Jab tum ghanay syaah gaisu
Aur bar jataa hai un paloN ka khumaar
Phir shiddat say woh jazba
Hai rooh tak mehsoos hotaa
Kartay hain jism jab us pyaar ka izhaar

Purmaaeni ho jaati hai meri hayaat
Hoti hai beshak mukhtsar si hamari mulakaat

Jab tu meri aagosh maiN hoti hai!Sach!
Meri zad maiN hoti hai jaisay saari qaaynaat

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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2010, 09:23:18 PM »
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BaRi Ramantic takhleeq hai bhai ! Bohot kgoob. Haseen khyaalaat ke maalik haiN aap. Meri taraf se daad qubool kareN bhai
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«Reply #2 on: July 07, 2010, 01:23:25 AM »
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Teray naam

Jab tu meri aagosh maiN hoti hai
Teri admundhi aankhain
Teray laraztay huay hoNt
Daitay hain bahut si ankahi baatoN ka pataa
Teray jism ki haraarat
UnglioN ki shraarat
NihaaN jaanay kitnay maikhaanoN ka nashaa

Jhatak kar khol daiti ho
Jab tum ghanay syaah gaisu
Aur bar jataa hai un paloN ka khumaar
Phir shiddat say woh jazba
Hai rooh tak mehsoos hotaa
Kartay hain jism jab us pyaar ka izhaar

Purmaaeni ho jaati hai meri hayaat
Hoti hai beshak mukhtsar si hamari mulakaat

Jab tu meri aagosh maiN hoti hai!Sach!
Meri zad maiN hoti hai jaisay saari qaaynaat

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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2010, 07:56:12 PM »
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I am thankful to both of you for the kind words.
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2010, 05:58:52 AM »
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Badi mast rachna hai aapki Brij-ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2010, 08:49:39 PM »
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Thanks a lot for the kind words.I hope this poem lingers in your mind for some time.
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