Tere Bin kuchh na dil ko bhaaye !

by Rishi on October 18, 2004, 02:55:27 PM
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This too is for my *Sweetheart*.
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ye suhana mausam, ye baarish ki boondein,
kuchh bhi na tere bin sanam dil ko lubhaaye,
koyal kooke, naache mayur,sara aalam jhoome,
aise mein tujh se ye durri hum ko tadpaaye,
chali aa jaan-e-mann yun meri baahon mein,
jaise ke saagar mein sarita simat jaaye,
har tamanna ho jaaye mohabbat ki muqabil,
mann ke aangan jo tere pyaar ka saawan baras jaaye....
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immi
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2004, 07:33:44 PM »
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kiya khoob,
Rishiji, aap song kiyon nahi likhte ? I think u should try.
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Rishi
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2004, 07:53:19 PM »
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Thanx Immi !
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jaldi hi dilwali meri gharwali ban jaayegi,
phir aur kahin dhyaan kaise lagaoonga,
kavita likhne ko waqt mushkil se milta hai,
geet likhne ke liye waqt kahaan selaoonga....
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immi
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2004, 08:13:59 PM »
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Kiya khub hai,
sirf itna kahoonga
"waqt insaan pe aisa bhi kabhi aata hai
raah mein chod kar saya bhi chala jata hai"
"din bhi niklega kabhi raat ke aane pe na jaa"
geeto ki taraf dhiyaan de kavitao ke piche na ja.
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2004, 08:43:30 PM »
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nice one Immi !
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geet, kavita, sher-o-shayari sab bhool jaayenge,
dilbar mere jab apni nashili ankhon se pilaayenge,
auron ki to boli baat bhi na sunayi degi humko,
uska halka sa ishara bhi hum samajh jaayenge....
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Suhas
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2004, 05:55:24 AM »
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Wow...Bahoot khoob, Rishi ji & immi ji
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Neelam
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2004, 07:11:26 AM »
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nice rishi........
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Rishi
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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2004, 03:43:33 PM »
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Thanx Suhas & Neelam !
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nishita
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«Reply #8 on: October 20, 2004, 06:53:04 AM »
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good one rishi too good
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Rishi
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«Reply #9 on: October 20, 2004, 03:26:17 PM »
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Thanx Nishita !
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: October 20, 2004, 03:36:20 PM »
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wah!!!! bahoot khoob Rishi!!!!!

Na kavitao mai, na hi gazalo mai
Mere humdam samaty hai
jab bhi un per likhana chahu
har Geet adhura sa lagy hai muje
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«Reply #11 on: October 20, 2004, 03:38:19 PM »
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bandh saku jo unko mai
kisi geet ya najamo mai
aise shabado ko laou kaha se
unki har ek ada se so so najam banati hai
itani adao ko ek sath sunau kaise
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Rishi
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«Reply #12 on: October 20, 2004, 03:45:48 PM »
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Thanx Pooja & nice words !
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mehbooba ke baare mein jo bhi likha jaye wo kam lagta hai,
dil se jaan meri tera khayaal ek pal ko bhi kahan nikalata hai,
aap ki surat ke siwa ankhon ko kuchh aur kahaan nazar aata hai,
isi liye to aajkal aapka dilbar kuchh aur nahi likh paata hai....
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«Reply #13 on: October 20, 2004, 03:55:35 PM »
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wah!!!! nice Rishi....

Likhane ko likh de hum sari kaynaat
magar wo phir bhi tuj si na hogi
bas ankho mai mere base rahna tum
tum si koi aor is jahan mai na hogi
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Rishi
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«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2004, 06:13:01 PM »
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Thanx Pooja !
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mere ye saare nazaare tumhaare,
ye aasmaan, ye chaand-sitare tumhaare,
chaho to mujh se ye jaan maang lo,
dil bhi tumhaara, hum bhi tumhaare....
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