tere bin--Designed and written- "Abhi"

by AbhiTamrakar on August 05, 2010, 06:52:01 AM
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2010, 09:55:09 AM »
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too good abhi ji... Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

ek suggestion dena chahungi aap image thodi choti rakha sakte he taki padhne me aasani rahe.... bura laga ho to sorryy....
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2010, 10:07:16 AM »
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are nahi ji bur5a kyu lagega actually jab mene ye post ki to mujhe forum display lmit ka pat nahi tha...isiliye ye galti ho gayi ..kchhma kijiyega..
age nahi hoga..

shukriya ki apko pasand aya~
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2010, 10:14:52 AM »
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sukriya abhi ji....
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2010, 12:15:05 PM »
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Sabdo me dum ho tou sajaavat ki jarurat nahi hoti
Chera sunder ho tou make up ki jaroorat nahi hoti
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2010, 07:02:27 AM »
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koyal ji...chaliye apne shanbdo me keheta hun~


dil se likha or sapno se sajaya he
chehre ko to bhagwan bhi nahi samjha paya he
make up karke dhaka karte log apne dil ko
warna khuda ne to sabko nek dil banaya he~
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2010, 01:49:15 PM »
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ABHI tum abhi-abhi tou aaye ho...
Abhi kahaan hui teri nek dilo se pehchaan..

Bagwaan ne hi tou chere banaaye hain
Hum insaan hi pehchaan nahi paaye hain...

Tere bin sooni ho jaayegi ye mehfil
Es baat ka ABHI tu abhimaan mat kar

Es mehfil mein roshan kayi shamaayen bhi hain
Aur fanaa hone ko beshumaar parwaane bhi hain
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2010, 05:02:05 AM »
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mastam post abhi....bht pyari design ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2010, 06:01:46 AM »
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very nice poem with beautiful design... Abhi Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2010, 07:24:33 AM »
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Waah Abhi Ji Waah Kya Likha He ……..Sidhey  Dil Me Utar Gaya………Apki Kalam Ki Daad Dete He………Bahot Khub……….

For U And Ur Shayari

Teri Kalam Per Khuda Bhi Meharbaan Lagta He
Hum He Zamin Tu Aasmaan Lagta He

Kya Khub Kiya He Zikr-E-Mahbub Tune
Mahfil – E - Shayri Ko Sajana Tera Kaam Lagta

He Fakrrr Hume Ki “Abhi” Ki Kalam Ab Tak He Zinda
Sach Kahu Tujme Ek Zinda Dil Insaan Lagta He
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2010, 08:37:21 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 06, 2010, 01:49:15 PM
ABHI tum abhi-abhi tou aaye ho...
Abhi kahaan hui teri nek dilo se pehchaan..

Bagwaan ne hi tou chere banaaye hain
Hum insaan hi pehchaan nahi paaye hain...

Tere bin sooni ho jaayegi ye mehfil
Es baat ka ABHI tu abhimaan mat kar

Es mehfil mein roshan kayi shamaayen bhi hain
Aur fanaa hone ko beshumaar parwaane bhi hain

koyal ji ...hmm

aji zameen ka insaan hu asmaan se mera kya vasta,
shama jalata hu parwano ka mujhse kya vasta,
mere bin sooni hone ko nahi bani ye duniya,
mehfil me 'Abhi" nahi to "Abhi" ka naam to ayega,
abhimaan anhi mujhe mehfil me shaamil hone ka,
ki me to boond hu chhoti si mera sagar se kya vaasta...
 
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«Reply #11 on: August 07, 2010, 08:43:09 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on August 07, 2010, 07:24:33 AM
Waah Abhi Ji Waah Kya Likha He ……..Sidhey  Dil Me Utar Gaya………Apki Kalam Ki Daad Dete He………Bahot Khub……….

For U And Ur Shayari

Teri Kalam Per Khuda Bhi Meharbaan Lagta He
Hum He Zamin Tu Aasmaan Lagta He

Kya Khub Kiya He Zikr-E-Mahbub Tune
Mahfil – E - Shayri Ko Sajana Tera Kaam Lagta

He Fakrrr Hume Ki “Abhi” Ki Kalam Ab Tak He Zinda
Sach Kahu Tujme Ek Zinda Dil Insaan Lagta He
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shukriya dost...

apki kalam ke liye bhi daad kuool kijiye~~

me zinda hu zinda rahuga apne shabdo se
hamesha shareer ko zinda kaun rakh paya he
zinda dil kehene ko mil jate he kai mere yar
zinda koi dil seene me kaha koi rakh paya he
khuda se to meri barso ki ladai he kya kahu
hamesha khuda ki meherbani kaun rakh paya he~
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2010, 08:43:57 AM »
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thnx anu ji and rancho
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