tere hotho par

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«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2010, 10:03:24 PM »
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VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2010, 06:12:31 AM »
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shukriya neelgold jiii...
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2010, 06:55:59 AM »
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Gud hai reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye mausam kya  badla, tera bhi ABHI rang hai badla
Yo ka manch hai thoda sobar tu jara kalam ko kabu me rakhna
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2010, 08:15:36 AM »
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shukriya jiii.....kalam ko kabu rakhen k kya jarurat he jiii..yo ke manch ki tarh ham bhi sobar hi likhte he~
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2010, 09:09:30 AM »
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Bahut khoob Abhi ji...!!!

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shukriya apka kapil jiiii~
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shukriya jiii
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«Reply #9 on: September 23, 2010, 10:20:46 AM »
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shukriya shihab sahab~
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Wow Abhi ji bahut khoob,mindblowing and very romantic creation,Koyal sis aapne bhi khoob saath diya,excellent,hatts off icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 24, 2010, 06:21:02 AM »
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shukriya jiii madhu jiii~
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«Reply #12 on: September 24, 2010, 07:52:44 AM »
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Wow... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob  !!!

Bahoot Hi khooobsoorati se present bhi kiya hai..

akasar aisi shayariya mujhe rula deti hai...

Bahoot Khoob!!

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«Reply #13 on: September 24, 2010, 08:47:54 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on September 24, 2010, 07:52:44 AM
Wow... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob  !!!

Bahoot Hi khooobsoorati se present bhi kiya hai..

akasar aisi shayariya mujhe rula deti hai...

Bahoot Khoob!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukriya jiii apko pasand aayi...maaf kijiyega hame pata hota ki koi royega to ham likhte hi nahi~
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«Reply #14 on: October 05, 2010, 07:07:38 PM »
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ek aur zabardast post by zabardast abhi....as usual mastam and differnt design...jo mujhse kabhi nahin bani..ise bhi banane ki bht try ki maine..par failed...tuition kab shuru karrahe ho aap...

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Mere hathon ko thaam k jo aj tune mujhe apnaya hai
Mere jweewan me rang suhera tu leke aaya hai

Kho k meri ghani julf k inn andheron me tune
Ek anjana sa ankaha kaise ye sukh paaya hai

Ye dhaani chunar odhake mere sir pe sanam
Tune mujhe aaj apni dulhan banaya hai

Chhuke mere hothon ko apne inn labon se
Mujhe chahut ka hare k sur sikhaya hai

Ab na karma durr mujhe khudse ee sanam
Tere bin jeene ka sapna bhi meri maut leke aaya hai…!!!
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