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ranjana
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Ab tere liye mera deewanapan
Isse zyada aur kya hoga
Dekhate hain jis khat par tera naam
Sochti hun tera yeh paigaam mere liye hi hoga
Tere geet teri nazm mein pada hai jab bhi pyaar ke shabado ko
Kyu yeh lagta hai ki tune yeh mere liye hi likha hoga
Jab bhi dhalka hai shaam ka aanchal jo kahi
Mujhe kyu lagata hai ki tu kahi intazaar mera karta hoga
Chuma hai jab bhi bhaware ne kisi kali ko muskara ke
Kyu laga mujhe ki tune khayalo mein mere labo ko chuma hoga
Jab bhi barsa hai badal jhum ke dharati per kabhi
Kyu laga mujhe ki tune mujhe apni bahaon mein sameta hoga
Dharka hai jab bhi mera dil jor se kabhi ya le hain maine hichkiyan
Raha mere di ko yehi ehasas ki tune dil ki geharyion se yaad mujhe kiya hoga
Yeh mera diwanpan kahi aur diwaana na kar de mujhko
Ab isse jayda teri mohabbat ka nasha aur kya hoga………..
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«Reply #2 on: July 18, 2006, 01:50:01 PM » |
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Ranju
Kya baat hai ! =D> =D> =D>
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«Reply #3 on: July 18, 2006, 02:37:16 PM » |
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fantastic ranju. bahut hii khoob.......
maza aagaya.......
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«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2006, 02:53:25 PM » |
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Ab tere liye mera deewanapan
Isse zyada aur kya hoga
Dekhate hain jis khat par tera naam
Sochti hun tera yeh paigaam mere liye hi hoga
Tere geet teri nazm mein pada hai jab bhi pyaar ke shabado ko
Kyu yeh lagta hai ki tune yeh mere liye hi likha hoga
Jab bhi dhalka hai shaam ka aanchal jo kahi
Mujhe kyu lagata hai ki tu kahi intazaar mera karta hoga
Chuma hai jab bhi bhaware ne kisi kali ko muskara ke
Kyu laga mujhe ki tune khayalo mein mere labo ko chuma hoga
Jab bhi barsa hai badal jhum ke dharati per kabhi
Kyu laga mujhe ki tune mujhe apni bahaon mein sameta hoga
Dharka hai jab bhi mera dil jor se kabhi ya le hain maine hichkiyan
Raha mere di ko yehi ehasas ki tune dil ki geharyion se yaad mujhe kiya hoga
Yeh mera diwanpan kahi aur diwaana na kar de mujhko
Ab isse jayda teri mohabbat ka nasha aur kya hoga……….. wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah........aare wah wah karte haat rukhi nahi rahii :D ...too good ranz-na! Har jo baat kaha aagar teri dil ki gehraii se niklii hai
To ustak ja jaroor pohochegii teri ye dewanapan
Kohda nahi be-daer ke teri siskiya ki awaz ustak na pohochye
Khud ba khud tere samne hazir karlayegii usko....
Ja chaha har murad hogii teri puri
Bas haat uthake dil se mang dua k pura hojaye teri ye sapna aadhurii |
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«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2006, 04:41:22 PM » |
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Tareef ke liye ab Shabd nahi bache Ranju.....and Shahid
Aaj jab hua Saamna Pari se......
Toh Dil ne khud ko bekaboo tha paya......
Ek Pal Chaha Dil ne Choom loon lab unke......
Par aankhon se kahin door tha mera Shamiyaana.....
Woh Adaa unki hume dekhne ki......
Aur woh unka mand mand muskurana......
Dheere se kehna hume kuch bhari bheed me......
Aur baad me apni Baat se mukar jaana......
Mushkil hai Bayaan karna kuch.....
Unke saath likha woh ek Payara sa Safarnaama.......!!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2006, 05:46:33 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya ......Gesu , gesu ne apni koshish nahi ki ....  kyu? Rajbir... ..thanks ....bahut dino baad apna likha hua aacha laga... :wink: Vikas ji......dhanyavaad......aapne ise pasand kiya ... my dear friends ...Shahid and Gaurav ....kya baat hai bahut hi sunder likha...... :D |
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«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2006, 05:52:45 PM » |
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hame yun aksar chandani raato mein unki yaad aati hai
jaise koi kasak si dil mein badati ghatati si jaati hai..
kar deti hai jab hawae.n kuch nadaaniyaa.n
unki baate hame yaad aa aa ke tadpaati hain
yeh woh yaade hain pyaar ke us beete hue suhaane pal ki
aksar aaj bhi hum mein ek aag si bhar jaati hain ...
tadap uthati hai ek huk si dil mein mere milne ki
kyu chandani raato mein hi aksar unki hame yaad aati hai
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2006, 06:01:19 PM » |
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Thnx Ranju
Aaj phir karte hai ek Wada......
Aye Sanam tumko na bhool payenge......
Khade rahenge harr Raah tere Intezaar me.....
Tera harr Manzar par Saath nibhayenge......
Sochta hu Gul kahoon ya Gulaab tumhe......
Tumsa toh koi hum Saat Janmo tak na Dhoond payenge......
Ek Saaz hai jo aaj Dil me use ek GhaZal ban jaane do.....
Bas ab Thaam ke haath tumhara dekhna hum Jannat bhi ruksat kar jayenge......!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2006, 06:54:07 PM » |
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hame yun aksar chandani raato mein unki yaad aati hai
jaise koi kasak si dil mein badati ghatati si jaati hai..
kar deti hai jab hawae.n kuch nadaaniyaa.n
unki baate hame yaad aa aa ke tadpaati hain
yeh woh yaade hain pyaar ke us beete hue suhaane pal ki
aksar aaj bhi hum mein ek aag si bhar jaati hain ...
tadap uthati hai ek huk si dil mein mere milne ki
kyu chandani raato mein hi aksar unki hame yaad aati hai Kya baat hai Chand aaj Chandani barsaye toh kya karein...haye ree Mahobbat tujhpar Dil aye toh kya karein... :wink: |
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2006, 07:02:25 PM » |
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Dil khush hai aaj unse MulaQaat ho gayi......
Kuch der ki sahi par aaj unse baat ho gayi.....
NOor sa Chehra tha unka Ruhani Awaaj thi.....
Irani Ghazal jaise unki harr Baat thi.....
Unki Sanson ki Khusboo se mehkta tha Samaa.......
Unke hee aftaab se tha Roshan aaj ka Asmaan......
Unke HUssan ko dekh maloom padta ki.....
Shabnam se bhar diye ho baag Gulab ke......
Dil karta hai keh doon Dil apna Cheer ke.......
Lo aaj hum ho gaye sirf aur sirf aapke.........!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2006, 03:18:08 AM » |
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bahut khoob gaurav ..... |
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«Reply #12 on: July 19, 2006, 03:21:07 AM » |
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ranjana
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«Reply #13 on: July 19, 2006, 03:24:13 AM » |
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chhodavi.n ke chand ke saaye mein sanam
jo tu mujhse milne kabhi aa jaaye
ho jaaye raat gulo si mehekti hui
aur mere rukhsaaro per laali chhaa jaaye
mehek jaaye yeh sama rangeen ho kar pyaar se
jo tu meri bahaon mein aa kar behak jaaye
hai yeh surmaee si raat ka jaadu
ki koi pathar dil bhi ho toh mere pyaar se pighal jaaye
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«Reply #14 on: July 19, 2006, 03:25:43 AM » |
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shukriya AW .......tumhara itne pyaar se padna mujhe bhi bahut pyaara lagata hai....... :D |
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