"tere khato.n ko padta ja rha hu.n" -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

aaina

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«Reply #15 on: July 10, 2009, 04:30:37 PM »

Quote from: Shayara on July 09, 2009, 04:20:21 PM

Aaina Ji,

Khoobsurat ghazal

bhut shukriya shayra ji


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aaina

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Re: "tere khato.n ko padta ja rha hu.n"

«Reply #16 on: July 10, 2009, 04:42:17 PM »

Quote from: javedarshad on July 09, 2009, 05:25:56 PM

Tere khato.n ko padhta ja raha hu.n - Tere khutoot jo padhta ja raha hun main
Mutawatir muskurata ja raha hu.n - Jaise aik nayee zindage pa raha hun main

Jo tune meri khatir khoon e dil se likhe- apne lahu se jinko sawara hai tune
Mein un lafzo.n ko chume ja raha hu.n- apne labon se unko jila de raha hun main

Kya koi itna kisi pe marta hai?
Ye sochun to main ghabra ja raha hu.n- yehi sooch ker jiye ja raha hun main

Wo meri dhadkano ko chu raha hai - jo bangaye hain dhadkanain dil ki mere
Zakhmi ho na jaye darta ja raha hu.n - khushi mer na jaun der raha hun main

Raaton ko aur kabhi din main bhi aksar- rat ho din ho saher ho ke shaam
Usi ke khaab daikha ja raha hu.n - tere hi khuwaab dekh raha hun main

Satata hai mujhe wo akhri pehro.n
Main un lutfo mai duba ja raha hu.n

Mana leta hu.n usko jo rooth ke aslam
Qareeb utna main hota ja raha hu.n[/size][/b][/center]

bahut khoob

just as u ask , I write few ashar for your advice

tx

javed

javed sahab bhut bhut shukriya in zarra nawaazi aur mohabbat ka, javed sahab ek baat poochna chahta hun ye jo maine ghazal kahi hai aur aapne jo islah ki hai isme qafiye ka farq kyun hai mere 5 aashar aapne durust kye hain baaqi ke do shayad aapko bhut ahcy lage islyn rehne diye plzz thoda sa mujhay samjhaiye mai samjh nhi pa rha hun ki ye jo aapne sher durust kye hain inme radeef aur qaiya kya hai, hosla afzaai ka bhut bhut shukriya shayd hum sabko is discussion se bhut kuch seekhne ko mile


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aaina

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Re: "tere khato.n ko padta ja rha hu.n"

«Reply #17 on: July 10, 2009, 04:43:25 PM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on July 10, 2009, 08:15:42 AM

bahut achche aslam bhai ..........dil khush ho gaya aapki poem padkar......kya lajawaab peshkash hai ishq kii chaasni main doobi huyi

bhut bhut shukriya saahil is hosla afzaai ka dost[/b/


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aaina

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Re: "tere khato.n ko padta ja rha hu.n"

«Reply #18 on: July 10, 2009, 04:44:41 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 10, 2009, 09:11:42 AM

Nice one Aslam Ji

bhut shukriya rajesh sahab ke aapko ghazal achi lagi nawaazish


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aaina

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Re: "tere khato.n ko padta ja rha hu.n"

«Reply #19 on: July 10, 2009, 04:47:54 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on July 09, 2009, 11:41:33 AM

Bohot bohot khoob Aslam Ji...bohot hi haseen ghazal...aur khaas kar ye asha'ar behad achche hain :

Kya koi itna kisi pe marta hai?
Ye sochun to main ghabra ja raha hu.n

Wo meri dhadkano ko chu raha hai
Zakhmi ho na jaye darta ja raha hu.n

Mashallah kya kamal hai aapki qalam main...Allah is ki kashish yunhi barqarar rakhe, ameen.

thnxxx so much talat, inte khoobsurat alfaazon ke liyn apka tahe dil se mamnoo hu.n is hosla afzaaii ka bhut bhut shukriya talat god bless u


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javedarshad

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Re: "tere khato.n ko padta ja rha hu.n"

«Reply #20 on: July 10, 2009, 09:39:33 PM »

nahin maine durust nahin kiye hain na islah

bas mera maqsad aap ko batana tha ke , jo ger aap ko pasand aaye
to thoda raddo badal ker likh diya mager alfaaz aap ke hain
maine to aap ne poocha tha to apni taraf se kuch likh diya hai islah kerni hooti to main badalta kaise
jaise ke ooper likha hai few ashaar for advice. no islah

tx

javed


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aaina

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Re: "tere khato.n ko padta ja rha hu.n"

«Reply #21 on: July 14, 2009, 05:40:31 PM »

Quote from: javedarshad on July 10, 2009, 09:39:33 PM

javed sahab aapki advice sar aankho par


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khushi4pari

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Re: "tere khato.n ko padta ja rha hu.n"

«Reply #22 on: July 30, 2009, 11:13:14 PM »

wah wah bohat khoob its sooo nice Applause


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javedarshad

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Re: "tere khato.n ko padta ja rha hu.n"

«Reply #23 on: August 01, 2009, 11:00:35 PM »

Aaina Sb
adaab
pata nahin mujhko yun likhna chahiye tha ke nahin

bas aap ne shayed kuch kaha tha ya poocha tha mujhko yaad nahin usi wajah se shayed likha tha
ger nagawar ho to nikal deta hun

tx

javed


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aaina

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Re: "tere khato.n ko padta ja rha hu.n"

«Reply #24 on: August 08, 2009, 07:43:51 PM »

Quote from: khushi4pari on July 30, 2009, 11:13:14 PM

wah wah bohat khoob its sooo nice Applause

thnxxxxx so much pari


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aaina

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Re: "tere khato.n ko padta ja rha hu.n"

«Reply #25 on: August 08, 2009, 07:49:07 PM »

Quote from: javedarshad on August 01, 2009, 11:00:35 PM

javed sahab kyun sharminda kar rhe hain aisa keh kar meine aapse pehle bhi arz kya hai ki aapki advoice sar aankho par zahe naseeb ki aap meri post par aapni raaye se mujhay nawaaze.n


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