Tere khayal me "Parwaaz" mazar se uske

by ParwaaZ on February 23, 2011, 02:46:25 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 23, 2011, 01:46:44 AM »
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Good Job Parwaaz Ji
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«Reply #16 on: May 12, 2011, 06:56:07 AM »
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bahut khub Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #17 on: June 02, 2011, 08:51:21 AM »
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Woh tere sabra ki khushboo, kharar ki khushboo
Abhi tak hai pas mere tere pyar ki khushboo

Ke jab bhi taszkera mazi ka chedta hai koi
To aane lagti hai ek khushgawarsi khushboo

Dilo nigah me mere, khayal me mere
Basi hui hai tere itebarki khushboo

Woh jab bhi khawab me aati hai mudaton gharme
Mahekti rahti hai sondhisi yaar ki khushboo

Tere khayal me "Parwaaz" mazar se uske
Nikal rahi hai kisi ghamsar ki khushboo






naaaaaaaaaaice one parwaaz sb
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«Reply #18 on: December 24, 2011, 01:01:51 PM »
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khushboo se bhare alfaaz,
kare aksar zehan mein parwaaz...............!!!


Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

IS khubsurat tareefana sher par hazaaroN daad ..
aur houNslaa afzaai ke liye tahe dil se mamnoon
hai.. Usual Smile

Aage bhi saath banaaye rakhiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: December 24, 2011, 01:03:14 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah.. Kya baat hai Parwaaz ji,,, bahoot Umda aur itne Khoobsoorati se likha hai.. Lajawaab.. bahoot Umda !! Applause Applause Applause Applause


Sophi Jee Aadaab!


HouNsla aafzai aur tareef ke liye tahe dil se shukriyaa.
Aage bhi houNsla bakhte rahiye.. aate rahiye..

Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: December 24, 2011, 01:04:35 PM »
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bahut khub Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab kalaam ko pasand karne
waa houNsla afzai karne ka.. Usual Smile

Apna saath banaaye rakhiye..Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: December 24, 2011, 01:05:48 PM »
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naaaaaaaaaaice one parwaaz sb


Khamosh Sahaab Aadab!

Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab kalaam ko saraahne ke liye..
Aage bhi saath banaaye rakhiye.. Khush O aabad rahiye..


Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: December 24, 2011, 01:24:29 PM »
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boht khoob parwaz ji apka
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«Reply #23 on: September 04, 2012, 08:54:05 AM »
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boht khoob parwaz ji apka

Sahil Jee Aadaab!

bahut bahut shukriyaa Sahil jee... aage bhi apna saath
banaaye rakhiye...

Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile 

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«Reply #24 on: September 04, 2012, 05:36:09 PM »
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Woh tere sabra ki khushboo, kharar ki khushboo
Abhi tak hai pas mere tere pyar ki khushboo

Ke jab bhi taszkera mazi ka chedta hai koi
To aane lagti hai ek khushgawarsi khushboo

Dilo nigah me mere, khayal me mere
Basi hui hai tere itebarki khushboo

Woh jab bhi khawab me aati hai mudaton gharme
Mahekti rahti hai sondhisi yaar ki khushboo

Tere khayal me "Parwaaz" mazar se uske
Nikal rahi hai kisi ghamsar ki khushboo




bohat khoob ashaar kahe aap ne parwaz sahib...matla or maqta bht acha likha aap ne ...matle mein sabr lafz or.....maqte mein ghamgusar lafz hy isse theek kr lijjiye gar bura na lage....
yoohi likhte rahiye...
 khoosh rahiye.....
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«Reply #25 on: September 05, 2012, 12:22:42 AM »
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Woh tere sabra ki khushboo, kharar ki khushboo
Abhi tak hai pas mere tere pyar ki khushboo

Ke jab bhi taszkera mazi ka chedta hai koi
To aane lagti hai ek khushgawarsi khushboo

Dilo nigah me mere, khayal me mere
Basi hui hai tere itebarki khushboo

Woh jab bhi khawab me aati hai mudaton gharme
Mahekti rahti hai sondhisi yaar ki khushboo

Tere khayal me "Parwaaz" mazar se uske
Nikal rahi hai kisi ghamsar ki khushboo



bahut bahut khoob likha hai Parwaaz jee.. Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #26 on: January 23, 2013, 01:10:35 PM »
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bohat khoob ashaar kahe aap ne parwaz sahib...matla or maqta bht acha likha aap ne ...matle mein sabr lafz or.....maqte mein ghamgusar lafz hy isse theek kr lijjiye gar bura na lage....
yoohi likhte rahiye...
 khoosh rahiye.....


Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Bahut bahut shukriyaa jee is paazirai aur hoNsla afzai ke liye... Usual Smile
Aapki tanqeed par humne edit kar diyaa hai... Usual Smile

Aur sahiN raah dikhaana koi gunaaH nahi hai jee.. aage bhi aapki
raai ka intezar raheNga... Usual Smile

Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: January 23, 2013, 01:11:44 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai Parwaaz jee.. Applause Applause Thumbs UP

Suman Jee Aadaab!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa jee... aage bhi apna kimti waqt humari kalaamoN par
dete rahiye.. yehi duaa hai... Usual Smile

Aate rahiye... Shad O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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