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AbhiTamrakar
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Tu meri thi mai keh nahi paya
bas apne dil ko maine dii sajaye thi
tere sath ek kadam mai rakh nahi paya
tere liye samet rakhi fizaaye thi~
Tu dayre me thi mai bahen bheench nahi paya
tere liye mere dil ki sari sadaye thi
tum thi to annsuu koi gir nahi paya
tumse hi meri sari duayee thi~
Wo keh raha hu jo pehle e kash kaha hota
tumse din maine tumse hi apni raate sajayi thi
kya karu us pal ka jo me sahej nahi paya
jis pal se mene tere liye kynat banayi thi~
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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2011, 09:01:33 AM » |
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wah abhi ji--
baht gahre jazbaat bayan kie aapne
bht khub ji
daad aur mubarakbaad kubul karen humari taraf se
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2011, 12:19:17 PM » |
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abhi ji kya kahun bht kuch chhipi feelings samne aa gai is post se..bht taklifdeh feelings ko bht sidhe saade shabdon me bht gehrai se pesh kiya hai aapne...wo majbur aur tadap saaf nazar aati hai apke shabdon me.....bht mast creation abhi...
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2011, 12:29:32 PM » |
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thnx killbill ji.....
shukriya apka
or anu ji
apko to mujhe bahut bada thnx kehna haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
thnxxxxxxxxxx
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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2011, 01:10:51 PM » |
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ye thnx kipotli na main tumhare sir pe hi rakhke leke ghumungi mujhe koi problm nahin jitna chhaiye thnsx bol abhiiiiiiiiii
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2011, 02:16:39 PM » |
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bht khoob abhi ji.....
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2011, 05:46:22 PM » |
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superb....khatti-mitthi bhawnaaye...jo dard bhi de aur khushi bhi....ya phir....
behtrin abhi ji...
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2011, 10:51:28 AM » |
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Bahut khoob abhi bahut khoob..
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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2011, 07:43:20 AM » |
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bht khoob abhi ji.....
shukriya priya.... eise hi sath raho.... |
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2011, 07:47:16 AM » |
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superb....khatti-mitthi bhawnaaye...jo dard bhi de aur khushi bhi....ya phir....
behtrin abhi ji...
thnx nikhaar ji.....eise hi hosla badhate rahiyeee.... |
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«Reply #12 on: August 08, 2011, 07:50:57 AM » |
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Abhi Jee Aadaab!
kem che Bhai?
tame bahuj saras lakhyu chhe. Tamari aa kavita
na badhaa shabdo dil maa utari gaya. Ketali gaheraai
chhe tamaara shabdo ma ane ketali saraltaa thi tame
mann ni badhi vaat vyakt kari didhi..... 
aamaj lakhata rahva. aate rahva
Khush Rahva
khuda Hafez adaab parwaaz bhai...... kaise hain.. bahut bahjut shukriya apka ... apne apna keemati waqt nazr kiya hamari tooti footi peshkash ko.. or ise saraha ...yun to gujrati nahi aati mujhe par aapne badi saralta se likha jo mujhe samajh a gaya... seekh jauga dhere dheere.. yunhi sath rahiye...or hosla badhate rahiye... |
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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2011, 07:52:35 AM » |
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Bahut khoob abhi bahut khoob..
bahut bahut shukriya geet di.. |
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«Reply #14 on: August 08, 2011, 07:53:52 AM » |
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Saral Seedhe Lafzon Me Bahut Gehari Baat Kaha Di Abhi Bhai.. Umda Peshkash Hai.. Jo Seedhe Dil Pe Asar Kar Gai.. Daad Kubool karen... 
**~** Mann **~**
man sahab bahut bajhut shukriya ...ap sab ki hosla afzai hi hame is kadar likhte rehene ko prerit karti hee... yunhi sath rahiye... |
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