tere naino ko (nam)

by poonamA on July 22, 2013, 01:33:23 PM
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tere naino ko chupke se choom lungi mai
aankho me base sapno ko apna bana lungi mai

battein jo ankahi hai  tere laboo ki
apne laboo se aaj chura lungi mai

tej hoti teri sansoon me mere jonam
apni sannson ko aaj mila dungi mai

kho jana tu meri zulfoon tale
bin  badal kali ghata chaa  dungi mai

kah dungi tere kano me pyar ke mithe bole
tere dil ki dhadkanoo ko aaj badha dungi mai

bhar lega jab tu mujhe apni bahoo me
apne daaman me tujhko lipta lungi mai
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2013, 01:38:41 PM »
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good creation with good presentation
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kosish ahchi hai muhtarma, yuNhi mashq zaari rakheN... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2013, 02:42:52 PM »
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good 1 poonam ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2013, 03:21:12 PM »
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achchi koshish rahi poonama ji. dheroooooooon daaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2013, 05:31:52 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2013, 05:32:16 PM »
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very nice Poonam ji..
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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2013, 05:59:30 PM »
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 Applause Clapping Smiley Applause waaaah waah
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«Reply #8 on: July 22, 2013, 07:07:53 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah bahut sundar rachna, bahut achchaa likha hai aapne Poonam ji....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 22, 2013, 10:58:05 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2013, 12:22:11 AM »
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thx sainijee
Quote from: sksaini4 on July 22, 2013, 01:38:41 PM
good creation with good presentation
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«Reply #11 on: July 23, 2013, 12:23:15 AM »
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shukriya Janaab .... Usual Smile
Quote from: Taish on July 22, 2013, 01:40:16 PM
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thx kasak
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 22, 2013, 02:42:52 PM
good 1 poonam ji
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achchi koshish rahi poonama ji. dheroooooooon daaaaaaaaad...
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