Tere pyaar ka asar hai !

by Rishi on October 18, 2004, 02:43:43 PM
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This one is for my *Sweetheart* !
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tere pyaar ka asar hai jo bechain hai mera mann,
mere dil ki zubaan ko samajhti hai teri dhadkan,
khil jaayengi kaliyaan, mehak jaayega dil ka chaman,
kar do khawaab sab pure jo dekhte hain mere nayan,
aa jaao jaana baahon mein tod ke ye saare bandhan,
sanwaar do ye jeewan mera, ban jaao meri dulhan....
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immi
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2004, 07:36:47 PM »
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Excellent !!
kaas hum bhi kuch is tarah se apni dilbar ko kehsakte.
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Suhas
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2004, 05:52:12 AM »
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wow.... nice work Rishi ji.
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Neelam
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2004, 07:12:18 AM »
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toh kahen na immi jee apko kiss ne roka hai?
hehehe!
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Rishi
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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2004, 03:41:13 PM »
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Thanx everyone !
nd U r right Neelam !
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pyaar ke chaar akshar hi kaafi hain izhaar ko,
jaroori nahi ke koi kavita hi unko sunayi jaaye,
dilbar to samajh lete hain nazron ki zubaan,
jaroori nahi ke har baat bol ke bataayi jaaye....
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Rishi
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2004, 03:21:04 PM »
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No Replies..... :cry:
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2004, 04:03:59 PM »
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payar mai Ikraar to najare karati hai
bhir bhi tamana hai ki Ijhaar roj kiya jai
Dil ko yakin to kab se tha tera
Magar tamanaao ka bhi kuch khayal kiya jai
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Rishi
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«Reply #7 on: October 20, 2004, 04:16:11 PM »
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Nice words Pooja !
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: October 20, 2004, 04:19:46 PM »
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Thanks Rishi!!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #9 on: October 21, 2004, 03:07:01 AM »
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wo kehte hain iqraar karne ko
ankhon se parh kyun nahi lete
sharm ne roke hain lab ye mere
wo khud hi samajh kyun nahi lete
ye gulnar chehra ye neechi nigahen
yahi lafz ban gaye hain mere izhar ke!!
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Rishi
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«Reply #10 on: October 21, 2004, 05:29:38 PM »
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U r welcome Pooja !
nice one Talat !
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ankhein jhooki hain sharam se tumhaari,
kaise padh loon sanam nazron se dil ki baat,
ya to apne gulaabi labon se haal-e-dil kaho,
ya palkein utha ke nazron se samjhao dil ki baat....
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«Reply #11 on: October 21, 2004, 05:35:17 PM »
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wowow!!! Nice Talat!!!! Good Answer Rishi.....bahoot khoob!!!!!

Ankhy jo uthai to najar tumhari jhuk jayegi
Lub jo hilaye to yah kaynnat ruk jayegi
Hosh hum kho de, isse pahle sambhalo hume
saanse na kahi ruk jai, kahin bitha do hume......
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immi
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«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2004, 05:39:15 PM »
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Bahot achchay Talatji, Rishiji aur Poojaji
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Rishi
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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2004, 07:15:01 PM »
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Thanx Pooja & Immi !
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tere chehre ki shokhi aur wo sharmana,
wo pyaaari batein, wo tere haseen sitam,
har rang juda hai ,har adaa bemisaal hai,
yun hi to nahin hain hum tere deewane sanam....
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«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2004, 07:18:48 PM »
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kahty hai wo khud ko deewana
jo hume deewana banai bathy hai
ghar ke bahar kadam kaise rakhy
wo subah se samne ayye bathy hai.......
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