Tere Saath...

by daljeet_faqeer on September 05, 2008, 05:38:47 PM
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Tere saath dil ki duniya basaenge,
Hum har waada wafa se nibhaenge.

Koi gham humein na kabhie choo payega,
Hum khushi ko is tarah ghar layenge.

Teri rahon ko chaand taaron se karenge roshan,
Tujhe har pal jannat ki saer karayenge.

Koi humein na kar paaye kabhie judaa,
Khusboo bankar teri saason mein bas jayenge.

Is tarah se likhenge ishq ki dastaan "faqeer",
Marne ke baad log humein yaad kar payenge.

                        Daljeet"faqeer"
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2008, 09:23:12 PM »
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Very simple words, yet full of emotions...Very nice Daljeet Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2008, 05:11:21 AM »
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daljeet ji good creation
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Muhammed
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2008, 06:25:53 AM »
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Tere saath dil ki duniya basaenge,
Hum har waada wafa se nibhaenge.

Koi gham humein na kabhie choo payega,
Hum khushi ko is tarah ghar layenge.

Teri rahon ko chaand taaron se karenge roshan,
Tujhe har pal jannat ki saer karayenge.

Koi humein na kar paaye kabhie judaa,
Khusboo bankar teri saason mein bas jayenge.

Is tarah se likhenge ishq ki dastaan "faqeer",
Marne ke baad log humein yaad kar payenge.

                        Daljeet"faqeer"

Daljeet " Faqeer " Sahab....Kaafi Dino K baad aap k Kalaam Se Roo-b-roo Karwaayaa hai aapne
Jee Kahaan The aap ?
Aur Ye Nazm Saada va Suffaf Lafzon me Likha Hai Aap ne Bahot hi badhiya Likhi hein.
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