Tere Seene Se Lag Kar, Teri Aarzu Ban Jaon..!!..Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on November 23, 2012, 10:57:58 AM
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Tere Seene Se Lag Kar, Teri Aarzu Ban Jaon,
Teri Saanson Se Mil Kar, Teri Khusbu Ban Jaon..!!

Faasle Na Rahe Koi Hum Dono Ke Darmiyaan,
Main, Main Na Rahoon, Bas Tu Hi Tu Ban Jaon..!!

Suni Raaton Ki Tanhaiyaan Jab Satayegi Tujhe,
Teri Un Khamoshiyon Ki Main Guftgu Ban Jaon..!!

Jaise Dilbar Ki Ho Tujh Ko Tamanna Jaana,
Khuda Kare, Main Waisi Hu-Ba-Hu Ban Jaon..!!

Gustakh Dil Ki Mere Bas Itni Si Hai Khwaish,
Teri Dhadkano Ki, Main Hi Justuju Ban Jaon..!!

Shireen Hakani
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«Reply #1 on: November 23, 2012, 12:00:21 PM »
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2nd one is the best
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Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Behad Pyaari Aur Behad Khubsurat Rachna Shireen Hakani Ji..

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«Reply #4 on: November 23, 2012, 12:39:43 PM »
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Bahot khoob Shireen ji. Aapki poem se inspired ek sher pesh hai.

Lag jaaun seene se tere hai aarzu meri
Tujh pe tamaam hoti hai har justju meri
(Riyaz Ashna)
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«Reply #5 on: November 23, 2012, 01:04:58 PM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on November 23, 2012, 10:57:58 AM
Tere Seene Se Lag Kar, Teri Aarzu Ban Jaon,
Teri Saanson Se Mil Kar, Teri Khusbu Ban Jaon..!!

Faasle Na Rahe Koi Hum Dono Ke Darmiyaan,
Main, Main Na Rahoon, Bas Tu Hi Tu Ban Jaon..!!

Suni Raaton Ki Tanhaiyaan Jab Satayegi Tujhe,
Teri Un Khamoshiyon Ki Main Guftgu Ban Jaon..!!

Jaise Dilbar Ki Ho Tujh Ko Tamanna Jaana,
Khuda Kare, Main Waisi Hu-Ba-Hu Ban Jaon..!!

Gustakh Dil Ki Mere Bas Itni Si Hai Khwaish,
Teri Dhadkano Ki, Main Hi Justuju Ban Jaon..!!

Shireen Hakani


gr8 composition, ma'am
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«Reply #7 on: November 23, 2012, 02:13:28 PM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on November 23, 2012, 10:57:58 AM
Tere Seene Se Lag Kar, Teri Aarzu Ban Jaon,
Teri Saanson Se Mil Kar, Teri Khusbu Ban Jaon..!!

Faasle Na Rahe Koi Hum Dono Ke Darmiyaan,
Main, Main Na Rahoon, Bas Tu Hi Tu Ban Jaon..!!

Suni Raaton Ki Tanhaiyaan Jab Satayegi Tujhe,
Teri Un Khamoshiyon Ki Main Guftgu Ban Jaon..!!

Jaise Dilbar Ki Ho Tujh Ko Tamanna Jaana,
Khuda Kare, Main Waisi Hu-Ba-Hu Ban Jaon..!!

Gustakh Dil Ki Mere Bas Itni Si Hai Khwaish,
Teri Dhadkano Ki, Main Hi Justuju Ban Jaon..!!

Shireen Hakani



Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooob Shireen Ji...

Kya Kehne Aapke... Umda Peshkash..Bahutttt Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat
Khaas Taur Par Inn 2 A'shaar Par Hazaaro Daad..

Suni Raaton Ki Tanhaiyaan Jab Satayegi Tujhe,
Teri Un Khamoshiyon Ki Main Guftgu Ban Jaon..!!

Jaise Dilbar Ki Ho Tujh Ko Tamanna Jaana,
Khuda Kare, Main Waisi Hu-Ba-Hu Ban Jaon..!!

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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on November 23, 2012, 10:57:58 AM
Tere Seene Se Lag Kar, Teri Aarzu Ban Jaon,
Teri Saanson Se Mil Kar, Teri Khusbu Ban Jaon..!!

Faasle Na Rahe Koi Hum Dono Ke Darmiyaan,
Main, Main Na Rahoon, Bas Tu Hi Tu Ban Jaon..!!

Suni Raaton Ki Tanhaiyaan Jab Satayegi Tujhe,
Teri Un Khamoshiyon Ki Main Guftgu Ban Jaon..!!

Jaise Dilbar Ki Ho Tujh Ko Tamanna Jaana,
Khuda Kare, Main Waisi Hu-Ba-Hu Ban Jaon..!!

Gustakh Dil Ki Mere Bas Itni Si Hai Khwaish,
Teri Dhadkano Ki, Main Hi Justuju Ban Jaon..!!

Shireen Hakani

wah wahh shireen bahut umda peshkash  Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: November 24, 2012, 03:20:03 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: November 25, 2012, 10:17:51 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on November 23, 2012, 02:13:28 PM


Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooob Shireen Ji...

Kya Kehne Aapke... Umda Peshkash..Bahutttt Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat
Khaas Taur Par Inn 2 A'shaar Par Hazaaro Daad..

Suni Raaton Ki Tanhaiyaan Jab Satayegi Tujhe,
Teri Un Khamoshiyon Ki Main Guftgu Ban Jaon..!!

Jaise Dilbar Ki Ho Tujh Ko Tamanna Jaana,
Khuda Kare, Main Waisi Hu-Ba-Hu Ban Jaon..!!

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Shukriya Khwaish Jee!!!
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shireen saahibaa, bas mazaa aa gaya ise padh ke, meri nazar me 4th sher haasil-e-ghazal raha, bahut umda bayaani rahi, bas aage v aap yuNhi apni rangat bazm me failaati rahiye...
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Quote from: Taish on November 25, 2012, 10:22:07 AM
shireen saahibaa, bas mazaa aa gaya ise padh ke, meri nazar me 4th sher haasil-e-ghazal raha, bahut umda bayaani rahi, bas aage v aap yuNhi apni rangat bazm me failaati rahiye...

Thanq so much Taish Jee!!!
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