Tere uthne se pahle

by Pooja on April 06, 2009, 10:33:46 PM
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Sharart nahi yah dil ki lagi hai
Sota tujhe dekh kar, ek hasrat jagi hai

Choom kar tere lubo ko, chup jaaya jaaye
Adhkhuli teri ankhon main, sawal jagaya jaaye

Dhundein teri ankhia, aor hum najar na aye
So jaao jab tum, phir tumko sataya jaaye

Kuch is kadar her baar tujhe uthaya jaaye
Tere uthne se pahle, khud ko teri bahon main chupaya jaaye!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2009, 01:51:08 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 06, 2009, 10:33:46 PM
Sharart nahi yah dil ki lagi hai
Sota tujhe dekh kar, ek hasrat jagi hai

Choom kar tere lubo ko, chup jaaya jaaye
Adhkhuli teri ankhon main, sawal jagaya jaaye

Dhundein teri ankhia, aor hum najar na aye
So jaao jab tum, phir tumko sataya jaaye

Kuch is kadar her baar tujhe uthaya jaaye
Tere uthne se pahle, khud ko teri bahon main chupaya jaaye!!


Wow lovely ... Applause Applause


Aankhein khulti nahi, khubhar mein doobi hai hayat
Ye kaun nasha woh dil ko piglaye jaa raha hai..

Mai kaun hu uska khud mujhe nahi hai pata
Ek paraya ko dil ne apna banaye jaa raha hai..

Jano zindagi luta du unke naam per mai
Vo itna pyar mujhper lutaye jaa raha hai..

Ye kaisi ada hai unki koyi toh bataye,
Ki dhur ho kar bhi dil mein bechaini badaye jaa raha hai..

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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2009, 02:19:10 AM »
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Good poetry by both of U, well done

"Chaand se achha sitaara koi nahi,
Rista hamara aapka jassa koi nahi.
Saari duniya dhoond li humne,
Puri kaynaat me aap jaisa pyaara koi nahi"
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2009, 02:34:18 AM »
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nice lines Persant Roy ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2009, 02:35:38 AM »
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Thanks Roja ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2009, 03:22:46 AM »
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wow really lovly lines
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2009, 03:45:04 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 07, 2009, 01:51:08 AM
Wow lovely ... Applause Applause


Aankhein khulti nahi, khubhar mein doobi hai hayat
Ye kaun nasha woh dil ko piglaye jaa raha hai..

Mai kaun hu uska khud mujhe nahi hai pata
Ek paraya ko dil ne apna banaye jaa raha hai..

Jano zindagi luta du unke naam per mai
Vo itna pyar mujhper lutaye jaa raha hai..

Ye kaisi ada hai unki koyi toh bataye,
Ki dhur ho kar bhi dil mein bechaini badaye jaa raha hai..

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wah kaya baat hai bahoot khob Roja
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2009, 03:45:43 AM »
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Quote from: Persant Roy on April 07, 2009, 02:19:10 AM
Good poetry by both of U, well done

"Chaand se achha sitaara koi nahi,
Rista hamara aapka jassa koi nahi.
Saari duniya dhoond li humne,
Puri kaynaat me aap jaisa pyaara koi nahi"


Nice lines Roy ji!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2009, 03:46:27 AM »
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Quote from: chitralsony on April 07, 2009, 03:22:46 AM
wow really lovly lines

pata nahi apko kis ki lines achi lagi hai.... but shukaria dear!!
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2009, 07:07:36 AM »
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wow very nice,
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2009, 07:10:48 AM »
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Wah pooja wah yeh hui na baat, shayri ho to aisi koi jhijhak nahi. Jab andaze bayaan itna khoobsurat ho to jhijhak kaisi. Bohat dil ho raha hain sawaal jaisa hi jawab du.....Once again good work  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2009, 08:41:02 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 06, 2009, 10:33:46 PM
Sharart nahi yah dil ki lagi hai
Sota tujhe dekh kar, ek hasrat jagi hai

Choom kar tere lubo ko, chup jaaya jaaye
Adhkhuli teri ankhon main, sawal jagaya jaaye

Dhundein teri ankhia, aor hum najar na aye
So jaao jab tum, phir tumko sataya jaaye

Kuch is kadar her baar tujhe uthaya jaaye
Tere uthne se pahle, khud ko teri bahon main chupaya jaaye!!


wah wah, kya ajdaaz bayaan kia hai, wah wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2009, 08:42:07 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 07, 2009, 01:51:08 AM
Wow lovely ... Applause Applause


Aankhein khulti nahi, khubhar mein doobi hai hayat
Ye kaun nasha woh dil ko piglaye jaa raha hai..

Mai kaun hu uska khud mujhe nahi hai pata
Ek paraya ko dil ne apna banaye jaa raha hai..

Jano zindagi luta du unke naam per mai
Vo itna pyar mujhper lutaye jaa raha hai..

Ye kaisi ada hai unki koyi toh bataye,
Ki dhur ho kar bhi dil mein bechaini badaye jaa raha hai..

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wah ROJA, bahut khoob

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2009, 08:42:41 AM »
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Quote from: Persant Roy on April 07, 2009, 02:19:10 AM
Good poetry by both of U, well done

"Chaand se achha sitaara koi nahi,
Rista hamara aapka jassa koi nahi.
Saari duniya dhoond li humne,
Puri kaynaat me aap jaisa pyaara koi nahi"


very nice parsant

jasbir singh
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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2009, 03:53:28 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 06, 2009, 10:33:46 PM
Sharart nahi yah dil ki lagi hai
Sota tujhe dekh kar, ek hasrat jagi hai

Choom kar tere lubo ko, chup jaaya jaaye
Adhkhuli teri ankhon main, sawal jagaya jaaye

Dhundein teri ankhia, aor hum najar na aye
So jaao jab tum, phir tumko sataya jaaye

Kuch is kadar her baar tujhe uthaya jaaye
Tere uthne se pahle, khud ko teri bahon main chupaya jaaye!!


Wah Pooja ji bohaat khoob...apka izhar pard ke mere mann mein ek shikayat si jagi hai imagination ke roop mein... neend se hai yeh meri shikayat... kayun mujhe itni jaldi neend nahi aati.... jo payar mujhe apne mehboob se milna hota hai,, kayun nahi mujhe woh lene deti

issi ko dhayan mein rakhte huye.. meri yeh kavita

haye ri neend tu itne intezar ke baat kyu aayi hai
dekh teri raah mein meri sajni,palkein beechai hai

likhein hain betabi bhare shabd mere liye usne
kitni tadap meri jaan ne aaj tujh se paayi hai

sooraj dhalte hi mujhe apni agosh mein le lena
der na karna,meri humdum anchal ko lehrai hai

kar yeh vaada "Arjun" se tu bas sirf itna sa
aaj meri yeh tujhse min'nat bhari aarjai hai
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