~Teri Ak Nazar~

by deepika_divya on August 13, 2009, 04:00:25 PM
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KABHI SHABANABI RAAT KI CHANDANI SE
AK CHAMCHAMATI , MADMATI KIRAN NIKLE
HALKE SE CHU KAR GUJRE TERE AKS SE
AUR MUJHE TERI CHAHT SE SARABHOR KAR DE !!

MEHAK UTTE MERA PYARA AASHIYANA JAB
TERA KARWAAN MERE GHAR KI AUR SE NIKLE
TERI AK NAZAR PADE MUJH PAR AK BAAR SANAM
BHALE HI WOH MERE DIL KO TAR TAR KAR DE  !!

KHA KAR KASAM KETEIN HAI, PYAR SIRF TUMSE KARENGE
HO KAR AK BAAR TUMARI, CHAHE PHIR JAAN HI KYUN NA NIKLE
JAANTE HAI KI TUM BHI HAMEIN BEHAD CHAHATE HO
INTZAAR KISKA HAI, AB TUM BHI MUJHSE IZHAAR KAR DE !!

DIvYA

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«Reply #1 on: August 13, 2009, 04:38:28 PM »
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oye hoye.....kya baat hai Sophi ji.......bahut pyaara likha hai aapne
bahut khubsurat..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2009, 04:40:06 PM »
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bahut Khooob Sophi..

Bhaut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: August 13, 2009, 04:42:41 PM »
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Intzaar kis ka hai... wow !!! too Good Sophi!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot achi kavita likhi hai apne..

Najar teri ka war ajj bhi chalta hai
janati hu yah dekh kar dil tera aor khilta hai

bahoot ho chuki najar se najaro ki baatein
ab to tere Ikraar per, haq mera banta hai
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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2009, 05:34:33 PM »
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Wow Kya Baaat hai Sophi.. Bahut Hi Mohabbat se Sarabor Lafzon se Sajaaya hai aapne Is Rachna Ko.!! icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Bahut Hi Umda aur Lajawab aur Dil Ko Chhoo Jane wali Aur Khubsoorat Aur Masha-Allah Behad Haseen Aurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr........................ ab Kya Kahun..?  Grin Taareef Ke liye Lafz Khatam ho gaye hain.... Applause Applause


Phir Mohabbat-e-Nazar Ek, Mera Dil Chura Gai,
Phir Ishq-e-Fiza Mujhe, Uska Deewana Bana Gai....

Chaahte To The Hum Bhi Pyaar Ka Izhaar Karna,
Par Uski Ek Jhukti Nazar, Apna Kamaal Dikha Gai....

Shabnami Si Hansi Thi, Sidoori se Labon Pe Uske,
Meri Chaahat Thi Choone Ki, Par wo Zara Sharma Gai....

Mili Nazar To Bas Uski Aankhon Me Hi Doob Gaya,
Bas Meri Ek Nigaah, Dil Ki Har Kahaani Suna Gai..!!



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«Reply #5 on: August 13, 2009, 05:40:24 PM »
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Intzaar kis ka hai... wow !!! too Good Sophi!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot achi kavita likhi hai apne..

Najar teri ka war ajj bhi chalta hai
janati hu yah dekh kar dil tera aor khilta hai

bahoot ho chuki najar se najaro ki baatein
ab to tere Ikraar per, haq mera banta hai


Wow Pooja Ji.. Bahut Hi Pyaara likha hai aapne.. Last Line Bahut Hi Pyaari Lagi.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #6 on: August 13, 2009, 06:03:11 PM »
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KABHI SHABANABI RAAT KI CHANDANI SE
AK CHAMCHAMATI , MADMATI KIRAN NIKLE
HALKE SE CHU KAR GUJRE TERE AKS SE
AUR MUJHE TERI CHAHT SE SARABHOR KAR DE !!

MEHAK UTTE MERA PYARA AASHIYANA JAB
TERA KARWAAN MERE GHAR KI AUR SE NIKLE
TERI AK NAZAR PADE MUJH PAR AK BAAR SANAM
BHALE HI WOH MERE DIL KO TAR TAR KAR DE  !!

KHA KAR KASAM KETEIN HAI, PYAR SIRF TUMSE KARENGE
HO KAR AK BAAR TUMARI, CHAHE PHIR JAAN HI KYUN NA NIKLE
JAANTE HAI KI TUM BHI HAMEIN BEHAD CHAHATE HO
INTZAAR KISKA HAI, AB TU BHI MUJHSE IZHAAR KAR DE !!

DIvYA



Waah Divs ....Bohot hi pyara likha hai  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 13, 2009, 06:05:59 PM »
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Wow Kya Baaat hai Sophi.. Bahut Hi Mohabbat se Sarabor Lafzon se Sajaaya hai aapne Is Rachna Ko.!! icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Bahut Hi Umda aur Lajawab aur Dil Ko Chhoo Jane wali Aur Khubsoorat Aur Masha-Allah Behad Haseen Aurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr........................ ab Kya Kahun..?  Grin Taareef Ke liye Lafz Khatam ho gaye hain.... Applause Applause


Phir Mohabbat-e-Nazar Ek, Mera Dil Chura Gai,
Phir Ishq-e-Fiza Mujhe, Uska Deewana Bana Gai....

Chaahte To The Hum Bhi Pyaar Ka Izhaar Karna,
Par Uski Ek Jhukti Nazar, Apna Kamaal Dikha Gai....

Shabnami Si Hansi Thi, Sidoori se Labon Pe Uske,
Meri Chaahat Thi Choone Ki, Par wo Zara Sharma Gai....

Mili Nazar To Bas Uski Aankhon Me Hi Doob Gaya,
Bas Meri Ek Nigaah, Dil Ki Har Kahaani Suna Gai..!!



**~** Mann **~**

Very niec reply Mann Ji  icon_thumleft Bohot khoob....
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«Reply #8 on: August 13, 2009, 06:10:39 PM »
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Intzaar kis ka hai... wow !!! too Good Sophi!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot achi kavita likhi hai apne..

Najar teri ka war ajj bhi chalta hai
janati hu yah dekh kar dil tera aor khilta hai

bahoot ho chuki najar se najaro ki baatein
ab to tere Ikraar per, haq mera banta hai


Nice one Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: August 13, 2009, 06:53:05 PM »
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wah sophi ji, pooja ji and mann ji... wah wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #10 on: August 13, 2009, 06:54:48 PM »
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Wow Pooja Ji.. Bahut Hi Pyaara likha hai aapne.. Last Line Bahut Hi Pyaari Lagi.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

shukaria janab... app ne bhi kamaal ka likha hai Mann ji!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: August 13, 2009, 06:55:08 PM »
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Nice one Pooja

Thanks Celmira!!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2009, 06:55:41 PM »
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wah sophi ji, pooja ji and mann ji... wah wah

jasbir singh

Thanks Dear@@
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«Reply #13 on: August 13, 2009, 09:36:42 PM »
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Sophi ji,Pooja ji,Mann ji.bahut khoob.mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap
excellent:
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«Reply #14 on: August 13, 2009, 10:29:01 PM »
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bahut hi accha likha hai Sophi ji Applause
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