teri dulhan ka ruup. . .

by tinda on August 02, 2005, 09:49:29 AM
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shaam dhale tanhai se
tere khwabo ki parchayi se
jee bhar ke baten karte hai
hum apni tanhai se

jab tanhai bolne lagti hai
sab raaz kholne lagti hai
hum chupke se samjhaate hai
apne dil ko kuch is tareh behlate hai

bas kuchh dino kii baat hai yeh
janmo ka saath hai yeh
abhi duur sahi
majbuur sahi

magar us pal ka intzar rahega
main teri dulhan bake aa na saki to kya
lekin teri dulhan banke jaungi
bas harjanam me bhindy ko,
tindey ka hi intzar rahega

first time ever bhindy has written something, wanted to share with u all
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amrita
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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2005, 05:59:24 PM »
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bhindy writes well............better than you.....(just kidding)
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nikki
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2005, 06:16:04 PM »
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wow...kamaal ka likha hai Bhindi ne.......wonderfull ...
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tinda
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2005, 06:58:46 AM »
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you are right amrita, bhindy writes well... but we don't write better than you. . .thanx. . .(i am not kidding)

jab tanhayi mein gauzarti hain raatein
tab khayalon mein aati hai sirf teri hi baaten
kaise kahe kaise samjhate hai apne dil ko
har lamha tere bin har pal kaise kaaten
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tinda
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2005, 07:00:40 AM »
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thanx nikki for your appreciation. . . . .  :wink:
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amrita
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2005, 10:39:54 AM »
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thank you thank you thank you......i m feeling elated..!!so sweet of u to say that tinda but i write ok ok not good..

guzarti hain raatein gin ke taare
har lamha yeh dil tujhe pukare..

apne dil ka haal ab bataye kisko
tum batao baki ki zindagi ab kaise guzare..??
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tinda
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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2005, 11:14:35 AM »
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you have to accept that u write well amrita..thanx..here is reply to your..??

guzarti hai zindagi bas tere hi khyalon se
puchhta hun dhero sawal tere sawalon se
dil panchhi ban udkar ana chahata hai tere paas
lekin pagal mann ruk jata hai uske isharon se
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2005, 05:50:55 PM »
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ok i accept it...thank you..!!

khwaab-o-khayal hogaye meri khushi ke din
kis aasre par kate koi zindagi ke din..
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tinda
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2005, 11:18:07 AM »
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:lol:

kaise ho sakti hai tum bin zindagi haseen
chhu kar dekhlo mujhko aur kar lo yakeen. . .
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