Teri ho jaau~~~~~

by Pankhuri2 on June 19, 2006, 04:57:42 AM
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Pooja
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«Reply #30 on: June 20, 2006, 02:40:04 PM »
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Thanks Ranju, PJAG and Jeet, app sabhi ne bahoot acha likha hai....
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #31 on: June 20, 2006, 04:19:51 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai sabne
arz kiya hai..........
                             
                              main jo aankhon me teri khwab hun bankar rahti
                              aaj tu jaan le maine bhi tujhe chaha hai
                              meri aakhon ki kisi kajal ki zarurat kab hai
                              ye teri yaad se sharma ke jo jhuk jaati hain
                              mere haathon me jaane kyun na rachati hai hina
                              ke tere haathon ki garmi se ye hain surkh bahut
                              maine aanchal bhi to chere pe bar bar dala
                              par tujhe dekh ke ud jata hai baadal ki tarah
                              mere hamdam ye bata konsa singar karun
                              mujhko milne ki hai jaldi kya intezaar karun
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #32 on: June 21, 2006, 07:04:27 AM »
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sukriya & very nice all of u ............

 saja rakhi hai ishq-e-mehfil mere dil ne aaj bhi
  ki meri nazar ko sanjna  intzaar tera aaj bhi hai.

...............@fahi@...................
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #33 on: June 21, 2006, 02:31:11 PM »
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nice all of you

nazar se door hain barson se phir bhi aas to hai
ki dil  ko unka faqat intezaar  aaj  bhi  hai
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #34 on: June 22, 2006, 10:25:17 AM »
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Vicky ji apka apna hi ek mast andaz hai likhane ka... bahoot acha likhte hai app ne.

nahi hai kuch bhi maine pilaya
tere sharati deemag mai na jane ajj kaya hai ayya

tere chehre per yah kaya nikhar ayya
humko bhi sanm ek bas tuj per payaar ayya

haya ka prda to rehega hamesha bich hamare
yah kaya kah ker apne hai mujko bulaya

nahi badal sakte app apni yah ek adat
dekho phir hai ser-e-am, muje per ilzaam lagaya


shukriya POOJA JI aur BAHUT KHOOB.........

Husn ki bijli mujh par is kadar giraati jati ho,
na-na karte bhi, aankhon se apni pila jati ho......

phir nazron se shararat kar bahakaati mujhko,
aur pee ke bahakne ka ilzaam mujh pe laga jati ho......

haya ke is parde ka yun, bahana bana ke sanam,
aankhon se chala ke teer, ghayal mujhe kar jati ho....

is aadat ko badalna ab kahan mere bas me e-huzoor,
ilzaam ke bahane tum humse, mohabbat to jata-ti ho.....
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Shikha12
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«Reply #35 on: June 22, 2006, 10:39:44 AM »
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=D>  =D>  Very Nice all of u.....
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #36 on: June 22, 2006, 11:24:00 AM »
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very nice viccky ji,majid ji & tabassum ji.........

  intzaar ki ghadiya bhi tal jayengi
  ek na ek din tu mujhe mil jayegi
  hogi har lamha mai khusi ki saugaate
  tanhayi meri zindagi se nikal jayegi

...............@fahi@...................
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #37 on: June 22, 2006, 11:58:31 AM »
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thanx  shikha and fahi aur bahut khoob aap sabne likha hai.........

dhadkan kuchh badh jaati hai soch ke aisi baaton ko
lambi judai hamne sahi hai roe hain ham raaton  ko
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #38 on: June 22, 2006, 12:07:38 PM »
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sahi kaha...........

   meri aankhon ne apne saare sailaab bhula diye
    pal bhar ko uska deedar karne ki tamanna mai

.................@fahi@................
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #39 on: June 22, 2006, 12:42:29 PM »
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nice one........ab kya likhun .........

sari tamanna isi tamnna me
kaash is shaam vo bhi aajaen
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Pooja
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«Reply #40 on: June 23, 2006, 04:43:12 PM »
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her tamana mai tera naam
tera naam ban jaaye ab meri pahchan
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ranjana
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«Reply #41 on: June 23, 2006, 04:47:55 PM »
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mera akas unki pechaan mein dhal gaya
aaj unka naam mera naam ban gaya.
dkeha na jaane unhone kin nazaro se hame
ki bhari mehfil mein sabka dil jal gaya
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Pooja
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«Reply #42 on: June 23, 2006, 04:53:39 PM »
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wahkaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob!!! Ranju app bahoot acha likhatihai.. apko padna hamesha bahoot acha lagt ahai
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #43 on: June 23, 2006, 05:00:42 PM »
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ek tamanna  tere liye hai
tujhko khushiyan mil jaaen
jo kuchh bhi jaisa bhi hai
ham ko uski aadat hai
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ranjana
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«Reply #44 on: June 23, 2006, 05:08:38 PM »
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SHUKRIYA POOJA................. :oops:  Usual Smile

meri khushiyan aap  ke dam se hain
mere jajbaat sab tere pyaar ke rang se hain
tum ho toh duniya meri hasti hain
tumahre begair meri bhi kya hasti hai
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