TERI IBADUT KARTE HAIN

by ~~~NOOR786~~~ on March 23, 2006, 12:09:23 PM
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Kabhi shikayut, to kabhi mohabbat,
Aur kabhi shararat karte hai.
Per khuda se pahle, aye sanam,
Hum teri ibadut karte hai.

Khuli ankho may bhi hum,
soye-soye se rahte hai.
Teri yaadon may kuch is tarah,
Khoye-khoye se rahtey hai.

Tere sanso ki dor se,
Juri apni jindagani hai.
Tere bina yeah jindagi meri,
Bemutlab aur bemani hai.

Tere yaadon may khoye is dil ki,
Itni si bus kahani hai.
Kabhi labo per muskan khili to,
Kabhi ankhon may pani hai.

Janey kaya baat hai tere intejar may,
Jo bechaini bhi mithi lagti hai.
Mere yaar ke sadke maano ,
Chandni bhi fiki lagti hai.

Tu khush rahey humesha,
Bus yeahi chahat karte hai.
Khuda se pahle, aye sanam,
Hum teri ibadut karte hai.
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2006, 04:30:33 PM »
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wah wah ...........  itni  acchi  post  kisi ne  bhi  reply nahi  diya......  ur  welcome  to  Yoindia ....keep  writing...............
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2006, 04:42:10 PM »
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bohot achhey...kya flow hai..i loved reading it!
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2006, 10:15:44 PM »
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Noor Bravo! Just too Good Man! I loved it! Seriously Waheed bhai, I just happen to read it once, Sidhe dil main uter gayi!

Noor you are one of the gifted ones! Please keep writing and Welcome to Yoindia!

Dil se dil tak pahunchana mushkil hai bahot,
Ek nahi hazar koshish karate hai bahot,
Aaj bhi dil ko chhu jati hai sachhi chahat,
Kash her dil main ho bus itani hi mahobbaat!

Aabad raho Noor!

---BENAM---
Khuda jis per naaz kare aisi hai mahobaat teri,
Kya tariff kare benam, makmmal mahobat hai teri!
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2006, 11:34:09 PM »
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bahoot khoob Noor and Good one BeNam ji!!
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«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2006, 11:42:40 PM »
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bahut acche Noor Ji ... !! and benam ji .. !!
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2006, 03:41:08 AM »
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good one noor ..

Aapki ibaadat ka khuda zaroor sila dega.
chand ke is "NOOR" ko chandni se mila dega.
her pal hum bhi karenge aapper ibaadat.
mil jaaye aapko bhi uski bepanah chahat.
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2006, 04:32:08 AM »
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Marvalous Work by Noor and Bhondu...........Keep Writing......!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 28, 2006, 04:41:44 PM »
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Quote from: "BeNam"

Dil se dil tak pahunchana mushkil hai bahot,
Ek nahi hazar koshish karate hai bahot,
Aaj bhi dil ko chhu jati hai sachhi chahat,
Kash her dil main ho bus itani hi mahobbaat!


mohabbat ke raste mein bahut khusiyan hai... bahut gum hai.
koi mahfil mein hasn raha hai, kisi ki tanhayee mein ankhe num hai.
aapne pass dekhker humko khusi sharma gayi.
us din se gum meri zindgani mein aa gayi.
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«Reply #9 on: March 28, 2006, 08:38:47 PM »
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Good stuff mate...
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«Reply #10 on: March 30, 2006, 02:45:13 PM »
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waheed bhai, sanya,benam,pooja,tosha,bhondu aur shayar dildar............ aap sabhi ka bahot bahot shukriya aapki tarifo ke liye n isliye bhi ek aap logo ne hume apni mehfil may shamil karne ke layuk samjha.... lakin hum nato itne achche shayar hai ki apni her baat her jasbaat shayari ke tarannum pe piro ke kah sake n net per bhi thore kum hi atey hai to agar jawab dene may hume thori der lag jaye to hume apni mehfil se begana na kar dena................ n haa khumare ishq may dard ki dastan sunane ke liye mafi chahunga lekin hume laga ki yeah dono shayari ek dusre se kisi na kisi roop may jure huwe hai to iski sahi jagah shayad yeahi ho.......... n benam n bhondu ji aap dono bhi bahot achcha likhte hai.. sidha dil se dil tuk... :D
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«Reply #11 on: March 30, 2006, 02:50:25 PM »
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ki ibadut pure dil se, jis khudai ki humne,
aaj ban baithe hai kyun,kafir uske hi majar pe,
huwe hai humare pith jakhmi,
apno ke hi chalaye khanjar se,
 
warna maidane jung may pith dikhaye,
itne bhi hum koi kayar na they,
sikha gayi hai waqt hume, lafjo se iun khelna,
warna hum kabhi koi shayar na they.
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«Reply #12 on: March 30, 2006, 03:01:28 PM »
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Quote from: "BHONDU"
good one noor ..

Aapki ibaadat ka khuda zaroor sila dega.
chand ke is "NOOR" ko chandni se mila dega.
her pal hum bhi karenge aapper ibaadat.
mil jaaye aapko bhi uski bepanah chahat.


bhondu tere duwao ke liye shukriya...., magar,

chand ki chandni bhi yaar, kho gaye hai badlo ki aar may,
baki ab to bas yahan, kali amawas ki raat hai,
jab se hai jalaya kisi ne, deepak ki bati aashyane may,
tab se hi shuru hui, yeah beraham barsaat hai,

jo bandhe they pile dhage, in suni kalaio may,
aaj kyun tute her woh dor, jhute her woh jasbaat hai,
jab milna hi hai, gum judai ka kal ko,
to hoti hi kyun, aaj unse mulakat hai.

ruthe hai her woh 'dost' humse,
jane aisi bhi kahi humne kya baat hai,
fir bhi gila nahi hai dil ko, kismat ki is bewafai ka,
jab tak tere jaise yaaro ka saath hai.
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«Reply #13 on: March 30, 2006, 03:05:32 PM »
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Quote from: "BHONDU"
Quote from: "BeNam"

Dil se dil tak pahunchana mushkil hai bahot,
Ek nahi hazar koshish karate hai bahot,
Aaj bhi dil ko chhu jati hai sachhi chahat,
Kash her dil main ho bus itani hi mahobbaat!


mohabbat ke raste mein bahut khusiyan hai... bahut gum hai.
koi mahfil mein hasn raha hai, kisi ki tanhayee mein ankhe num hai.
aapne pass dekhker humko khusi sharma gayi.
us din se gum meri zindgani mein aa gayi.


...oye koi gal nahi oo badshaho...

chak de fatte, nap de gilli,
thori pani aur milale,
pi gai jo thora dudh, paros ki billi

......................aaj agar hai tere jahan may tanhayee, to kal dekh lena bajengi tere gher may shahnayee... kuki...

     jindagi ke is afsane me yaaro,
     kabhi hai khushi, to kabhi hai gum,
     fir bhi jamti hai yahan mehfiley dilo ki, aur
     kabhi pitey hai lassi, to kabhi pitey hai rum.
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«Reply #14 on: March 30, 2006, 11:06:16 PM »
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Good going all..Noor and friends threads ko agge badao....Yun hi josh se likho..Naye ideas atte rehte hain aap logo ko padke..
Excellent mate...
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