Teri muhobbat - Shikha

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Teri muhobbat mai hum kuchh is kadar kho gaye,
Ki ek nazar jo dekha or dil mai hi aap utar gaye.
Na raha koi dar is duniya ka ab hume koi shikha,
Ishq e samunder mai bas hum dubte hi chale gaye.


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«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2016, 09:23:58 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 15, 2016, 09:27:43 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 15, 2016, 11:32:28 PM »
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Teri muhobbat mai hum kuchh is kadar kho gaye,
Ki ek nazar jo dekha or dil mai hi aap utar gaye.
Na raha koi dar is duniya ka ab hume koi shikha,
Ishq e samunder mai bas hum dubte hi chale gaye.   Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shikhaa jee bahut hee umda ehsaas aur Rubaai hai jo aapne likhi hai. Lekin ek baat kaa dhyaan rakhiye ke shayari mein aakhri 2 teen word hote hain jinhein milaanaa zaroori hai.
Aap iss sher ko kuchh aise likhein......

Teri mohabbat mein hum kuchh iss qadar kho gaaye
Ek nazar jo humein dekhaa aap nazron mein kho gaaye
Naa dar bhi koi rahaa duniya kaa teri shikhaa ko
Ishq-e-samunder mein hum doobte doobte kho gaaye...







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«Reply #4 on: November 16, 2016, 01:11:39 AM »
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