Teri Tasveer

by Pooja on April 25, 2006, 03:19:22 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 27, 2006, 03:18:18 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Aryaan ji and RockIndia!!
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«Reply #16 on: April 27, 2006, 09:02:25 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai ROCKY BHAI, ARYAAN JI  aap dono ne.... very nice
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«Reply #17 on: April 27, 2006, 11:25:35 AM »
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thanx... :D
bohat khoob Aryaan & rocky :D
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«Reply #18 on: April 27, 2006, 11:31:57 AM »
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wow kia poems hain.. Pooja ji, Aryaan ji n rockindia ji.. Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #19 on: April 27, 2006, 01:59:51 PM »
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thanks jalpari
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mehek
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«Reply #20 on: April 27, 2006, 07:00:38 PM »
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jis ke aane se khil jaata hai mann..
labon par basi woh khushi ho tum..

tum ho jiske liye saansien chati hain..
dil ke dhadakne ki kahani ho tum..

sooni aankhon mein base khwaabon ki kasam..
khizaana-e-khushi ki tabeer ho tum..

daudte lahoo mein rawani tere pyar se..
jeene ki justuju jisse.. woh tishnagi ho tum..

tasveer aankhon mein..
naam dhadkan par hai saja..
kaise na kahein meri Zindagi ho tum..
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«Reply #21 on: April 28, 2006, 01:42:19 AM »
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Bohat shukriya Pooja, Vicky, Mehek & Jalpari...

Bohat khoob Mehek... Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: April 28, 2006, 05:48:23 AM »
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Mat puch muje is tasveer mai kaya rakha hai
Bholi si ankhon mai, sansaar rucha rakha hai
In ankhon se jhalkaty sawalo mai, main hu
Tumne khud mai, kahin mujko chupa rakha hai

Jab bhi laati hu AKS tera khud ke khayalo mai
Pa jaati hu her taraf raah, ghane kale badlo mai
Muskuan teri ,Mujko bahoot suhaati hai,
jameen meri kahin thum si jaati hai

yah honth tere, kuch na bol kar bhi bol jaaty hai
sunana chahti hu jo main, wo ras kano mai ghol jaaty hai
dekhty ho is tarah ki, bad kar utha logy mujko
jab bhi hogi preshan, seene se laga logy mujko

jab bhi tasveer teri ankhon ke samne laati hu
band kar ke ankhon ko, bahoot skoon paati hu
Mat puch muje is tasveer mai kaya rakha hai
Teri aks ne, mere khayalo mai, mera  khawab saja rakha hai!!!


pooja ji jawaab nahi aapka.. aaj bahut dino baad aaye yoindia.. maza aa gaya padh kar... excellent...
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«Reply #23 on: April 29, 2006, 07:38:26 AM »
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Mat puch muje is tasveer mai kaya rakha hai
Bholi si ankhon mai, sansaar rucha rakha hai
In ankhon se jhalkaty sawalo mai, main hu
Tumne khud mai, kahin mujko chupa rakha hai

Jab bhi laati hu AKS tera khud ke khayalo mai
Pa jaati hu her taraf raah, ghane kale badlo mai
Muskuan teri ,Mujko bahoot suhaati hai,
jameen meri kahin thum si jaati hai

yah honth tere, kuch na bol kar bhi bol jaaty hai
sunana chahti hu jo main, wo ras kano mai ghol jaaty hai
dekhty ho is tarah ki, bad kar utha logy mujko
jab bhi hogi preshan, seene se laga logy mujko

jab bhi tasveer teri ankhon ke samne laati hu
band kar ke ankhon ko, bahoot skoon paati hu
Mat puch muje is tasveer mai kaya rakha hai
Teri aks ne, mere khayalo mai, mera  khawab saja rakha hai!!!


bhut hi accha likha Pooja ji ... ek koshish meri taraf se bhi...  shayad pasand aaye

Goongi tasveerein  jo bole
Bholi juban se woh izhar nahi hota

Jo baat khamoshi se byan ho jaye
usse lafzon ka sahara nahi hota

baand aakhein jo khawaab sajjaien
usse pyara koi duniya ka nazara nahi hota

bin badal,barsaat  mein jab koi deewana bheege
uske liye woh pal,kissi khaazane se kam nahi hota

Door Hi sahi tum,lekin ehsaas toh mujhe bhi hai
Ab tanhai mein bhi main kabhi, tanha nahi hota

bolti toh teri bhi tasveerien hain Ashiq se bhut kuch
lekin Uss se woh shayari mein kalam nahi hota...!!!



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Teri Tasveer Bas chuki hai mann mein iss tarah
Ser jhuka kar abb tera deedar hota hai
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«Reply #24 on: April 29, 2006, 07:47:46 AM »
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BHONDU, mrkotians, Aryaan, Rocki and BD

Very nice work by all of you !  :D

Keep going !

Rajbir
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«Reply #25 on: April 29, 2006, 02:43:32 PM »
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Thanks Rajbir... & Good One BD...Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: April 29, 2006, 02:53:25 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne pooja ji.bahut aam shabdon me bahut kuch bayaan kar diya aapne.kaafi ahcha laga aapko padh kar.bas yunhi likhti rahiye.
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«Reply #27 on: April 29, 2006, 04:37:26 PM »
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Thanks Rajbir... & Good One BD...Usual Smile


Thanks Rajbir ji & Aryan ji
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«Reply #28 on: April 29, 2006, 05:23:20 PM »
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Wah SubhanAllaah Sabne bahut accha likha hai.......

Tasveer teri humne Mandir me sajayi hai.....
Tu dekh toh sahi teri khushion ke liye.....
Humne apne Khawabon ke Chilman me aag lagayi hai......!!!!!!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #29 on: April 30, 2006, 08:23:29 AM »
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Thanks GS AND BD JI!!!
BD JI bahoot hi acha likha hai apne!!
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