Teri Tasveer

by Pooja on April 25, 2006, 03:19:22 PM
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«Reply #345 on: June 08, 2007, 02:48:11 PM »
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Thanks Majid ji!!

Good One!!!

Ahsaas tera her pal, mere sath rahta hai
Socho mai dooba, tujhko dekhta rahta hai
Ankhon mai basi tasveer, rooh mai ghool jaati hai
her pal milne ki jo payaas, jagaye jaati hai...
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«Reply #346 on: June 08, 2007, 02:50:47 PM »
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Quote from: "_Vicky_"
Wah Kya baat hai.. Kya Khoob Kahi.. Bahut Khoob.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Meri Zindgi me Bas Sanam, Teri Hi kami Raha Jati Hai,
Teri Tasveer bhi Yeh Kami, Kahan Poori Kar Paati Hai....

Kabhi Tadpaati Hai aur Kabhi Rulaati Hai Yeh Mujhko,
Par Har Koshish Mujhe Hansaane Ki Iski Bekaar jati Hai... !!!!


Wah Vicky ji.. bahoot khoob.. magar last line thori Sad ho gai..

Hue khata tasveer se, jo apko hansa na saki
Yaad humari shayad apka dil behla na saki
Laye louta de humari is bakaar se tasveer ko
Aise tasveer ka kaya karna, jo hansa na sake humari preet ko!!!
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«Reply #347 on: June 09, 2007, 08:12:13 AM »
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Sahi Kaha Pooja jji.. Thoda Sad hogai Last Line.. Par Likhte Samay kuch Aur Nahi Soojha.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Bahut Pyaara Jawab Likha Hai Pooja ji... Bahut Khooob.. !!

Kaise Lauta De E-Sanam, Yeh Khubsoorat Nazraana Aapka,
Iske Deedaar se Hi Har Lamha khushnuma Guzarta hai Mera,

Kahane ko To Yeh Ek Kaagaz Ki Tasveer Hi Sahi Auron ke Liye,
Par Mere Liye to Yahi Mandir Hai, Aur Yahi Khuda Hai Mera........ !!! Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #348 on: June 12, 2007, 02:59:26 PM »
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bahoot khoob Vicky ji!!

Payar main teri her ek baat bhool gai
Kab hua din, kab dhali raat bhool gai
Ek teri Tasveer hai bas ankhon mai
hum to ab apni pahchan bhi bhool gai!!!
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«Reply #349 on: June 12, 2007, 07:02:16 PM »
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Wah ji Wah Kya Baat hai.. Bahut Khooooooob Pooja ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Pyaar Tujhse Tha, Ikraar Teri Tasveer Se Kar Gaye,
Hum Sada Tere Rahenge, Yeh Wada usse Kar Gaye.......

Ek Kasak Si Jagi Ki Pyaar Kar Loon Tujhse Zara Sa,
Rooh Tak Utar Ke Sanam, Mohabbat Usse Kar Gaye......!! Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #350 on: June 12, 2007, 07:31:46 PM »
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wowow!! wah wah wah kaya baat hai...

kamal ka likhte hai app Vicky ji...

bahoot khoob!! kaya jawab likha hai!!


Pyar humse aor ikraar tasveer se hota hai
Kyun yah zulam sanam, apka hum per hota hai

Apni kasak to app humari tasveer se mitate hai’
Suna kar phir humko app, kyun itna state hai

Mana haya ka parda hum apse hamesha karte hai
Magar kasak Apki,
apni ankhin se dekhain, yah armaan bhi rakhte hai!!!
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«Reply #351 on: June 12, 2007, 07:41:31 PM »
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Wah Is baar 3 Wah mil gaye.. tongue3 tongue3.. Matlab Main accha Likha hai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
behad khubsoorat Jawab Likha hai Pooja ji.. Bahut Khoob.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



Tasveer Teri Sanam Mujhe, Tujhse Pyaari Lagti Hai,
Tujhse Kahin Zyada Yeh, Mujhe Mohabbat Karti Hai....

Tu Kahati Hai Zulm Karta Hoon Main Tujh Par Sanam,
Aur ek Teri Tasveer hai, kabhi Shikayat Bhi Nahi Karti hai... !! Usual Smile Usual Smile_
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«Reply #352 on: June 12, 2007, 07:52:21 PM »
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ha ha ha.. I knew you are coming with this last line tongue3

apka andaz-e-bayan kuch kuch samjh aane laga hai....

bahoot acha jawab likha hai..

Humari tasveer jo apko jayada pyar karti hai
Phir kyun apki chithi, humse milane ki zid karti hai

Izhaar hai to ikraar bhi hoga
Ikraar hai to takraar bhi hoga

Takraar humari per apko kyun phir yah inkaar hai
Lagta hai humse nahi, humari tasveer se hi bas apko pyar hai
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«Reply #353 on: June 12, 2007, 08:04:54 PM »
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Accha to aapko pahale hi pata tha Ki main Last Line kya hogi.. great.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
Jawab Nahi aapka Pooja ji.. Great Job.. Bahut Khoooooob.. !!



Jise Chahe wo Milta Nahi, yeh Duniya Ka Dastoor Niraala hai,
isliye Humne Teri Tasveer ko, Jaan se zyada Sambhala Hai...

Kabhi Jo Rota Hoon, To Aankhon se Hansaati hai Mujhko,
Yaad Teri Tadpaane Par E-Sanam, Bahalaati Hai Mujhko.......

Phir Kaise Mohabbat na Karun Tujhse Zyada Main Is Ko,
Isi ne Zindgi Di Hai Sanam, Tu to Ek Din Chod Gai thi Mujhko.. !!
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«Reply #354 on: June 12, 2007, 08:35:34 PM »
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apki last line nahi maloom thi,
magar meri shikayat per apki shikayat maloom thi..

Vicky ji apka mood khumar se dard per kaise chala gay... yah poem bhi sad kar di apne...

Jab tak le nahi jaate apne ghar, mujhko to jaana hoga
Iska matlab roj apse, khud bewafa bhi kahlwana hoga

Wada hai sanam kabhi chor kar tumko na hum jayege
Kiya hai pyar tumse, umarbhar apna pyar nibhayege

Ladte hai tumse, ki tumko apna maana hai
Is bhari dunia mai ek tujhko apna jaana hai

Tasveer teri se hum bhi her ek baat karte hai
Phir bhi tujhko milne ko din raat hum tarste hai!!!
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«Reply #355 on: June 17, 2007, 12:46:04 PM »
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Areeeee Pooja ji.. Likhte Likhte Kush sad Ho gaya tha Shayad Isliye Poem Sad Ho gai..!!!

Bahut Khubsoorat jawab Diya hai aapne.. Bahut Khoob Pooja ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Bas Sochte-Sochte Tumko, Raah Me Chale ja Rahe The,
Aankhon me Teri Tasveer Liye, Yaad Kiye Ja Rahe The........

Tabhi Thokar Lagi Sanam, Aur Gir Pade Zameen Par,
Kyunki Aankhen Band Kar Deedar Tera Kiye Ja Rahe The.....

Aake Dekhte Ki Kitni Mohabbat Karta Hoon Main Tujhse,
Ki Gir Kar Bhi Palken Band Thi, Aur Pyaar Kiye Ja Rahe The......!!!
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«Reply #356 on: June 19, 2007, 08:26:21 PM »
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wah wah kaya baat hai.....

Meri tasveer se kaya kaya apne armaan bayan karte ho
Hume bhi batlao kaya usko pyaar humse jayada karte ho

Band palko mai qaid kar ke, khayalo mai doobein baat karte ho
Taras rahe hai hum yahan, kyun hum per itna zulam app karte ho

Jis tarah karte ho tasveer se baat, kyun humse nahi ussi bekhudi se baat karte ho
Bathein hai ban kar tasveer khud ki, kyun dil ko mere, app itna bekraar karte ho!!
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«Reply #357 on: June 26, 2007, 08:22:46 AM »
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Wah Wah Kya Baat hai Pooja Ji.. bahut Khooob Jawab Diya Aapne.. !!
jawab me Deri ke Liye Maafi chahata hoon.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



Teri Tasveer Tujhse Kahin Zyada Haseen Nazar Aati Hai,
Kyunki Ek Tak Nazar Bhar Ke Yeh Mujhe Dekhe Jati Hai.......

Phir Kyun Na Mohabbat Karen Hum, Ise Tujhse Zyada,
Jo Choomta Hoon Ise, Lab se Lab Bhi Apne Nahi Hataati Hai......

Aur Kyun na Baat karen Hum Bekhudi me Teri Tasveer se,
Tu To Bahakne se Pahale Hi Sanam, Sharma Si Jo Jati Hai....... !!!!
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«Reply #358 on: July 06, 2007, 01:51:47 AM »
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lijiye likh diya ji.....\

Teri Tasveer rahati hai ankhon mai
Phir bhi teri tasveer ka deedar karati hu

Her dhadakn gaati gai geet tere
Phir bhi teri Tasveer se payaar ka ikraar karti hu



Wahhh Pooja di...
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«Reply #359 on: July 06, 2007, 01:57:34 AM »
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Dil main tum base ho Tasveer bankar..
Humne dil ko rakh diya hai samne aaina banakar..
Najuk hai dil, na tes lagana isse kahi..
Gam se bhara hai ye mere ghamwar dekhna..[/color]
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