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meetas labo pe aai hai.. dil mea tune halchal machai hai kya kahe dil ka haal sanam,... Aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai.... pakar tujhe mujhe ak ehsaas hua mano dil mea pyar ki lehar aai hai na so pao na chain dil ko aaye aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai
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CoolGirl
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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2007, 07:07:20 AM » |
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guzren lamhon ki baatein aaj phir kisi ne durayi hai bechain hua yeh dil phirse aaj teri yaad bahut aai hai
kuch purane khagaz pe adhori si koi likhayi hai padke jisko bheeg gaye alfaaz aaj teri yaad bahut aai hai
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«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2007, 08:47:03 AM » |
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jhoom kar yea bahaar bhi fir mohabbat ki rut laai hai bechain ho raha hi man aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai
woh mast gadi fir laut aai hai saj dajh k beti hun sanam labo pe fir muskarat chai hai aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai
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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2007, 09:07:56 AM » |
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koi paigham na aaya hai jaane kaisi yeh fizaa aai hai labon pe dabi hai bas ek baat aaj teri yaad bahut aai hai
lutke sab gher ko hi jaate hain phir kyun teri yeh ruswayi hai ke her pal yehi kahe RANI aaj teri yaad bahut aai hai
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«Reply #4 on: November 02, 2007, 11:13:49 AM » |
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Neend nahi aati ab tho khawab mea bhi teri parchai hai dunde nazare har taraf tujhko aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai
kanakne lagi chudiyan pyal ne saugaat sajaai hai aakar laga le ak baar gale aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai
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«Reply #5 on: November 03, 2007, 03:58:02 AM » |
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Neend nahi aati ab tho khawab mea bhi teri parchai hai dunde nazare har taraf tujhko aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai
kanakne lagi chudiyan pyal ne saugaat sajaai hai aakar laga le ak baar gale aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai very nice divya ji acha likha hai aapne kuch koshish kartaa hao mai bhee tum yaad karte ho yaha ham yad me tadafte hai waha n nikal pate hao tum dil se hame bhulane ko tumhe ab ham jaye kaha
netra...
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«Reply #6 on: November 09, 2007, 03:31:23 AM » |
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Neend nahi aati ab tho khawab mea bhi teri parchai hai dunde nazare har taraf tujhko aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai
kanakne lagi chudiyan pyal ne saugaat sajaai hai aakar laga le ak baar gale aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai very nice divya ji acha likha hai aapne kuch koshish kartaa hao mai bhee tum yaad karte ho yaha ham yad me tadafte hai waha n nikal pate hao tum dil se hame bhulane ko tumhe ab ham jaye kaha
netra...very good Divya and Netra
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«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2007, 06:27:38 AM » |
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Thank u Roja...
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«Reply #8 on: November 13, 2007, 06:53:19 AM » |
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her pal bechain rehte hain her soo hamare tanhayi hai kabhi aake tu dekh hamari halaat aaj teri yaad bahut aai hai
aashqon ka darya itna bana hai ke dasti mujhe raat ki parchayi hai aa gale laga le mujhe ek baar aaj teri yaad bahut aai hai
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«Reply #9 on: November 15, 2007, 06:44:16 AM » |
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chup chup muskarata dekh sakiyan mujhe satane aai hai unki baato se meri nazre sarmai aaj dil ko teri yaad bahoot aai hai
yea pal pal ki bechaini badne lagi sanso se tej dhakkan badne lagi meri ruh ki bhi ankh bar aai hai aaj dil ko teri yaad bahoot aai hai
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«Reply #10 on: November 17, 2007, 02:22:07 PM » |
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meetas labo pe aai hai.. dil mea tune halchal machai hai kya kahe dil ka haal sanam,... Aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai.... pakar tujhe mujhe ak ehsaas hua mano dil mea pyar ki lehar aai hai na so pao na chain dil ko aaye aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai Oye Hoyeee.. Kya Baat hao ROJA ji.. !! Bahut bahut Khooooob..!! Behad Mohabbat Bhari Lines Likhi hain Aapne... Mazaa Aa gaya Padh kar.. Vicky
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«Reply #11 on: November 18, 2007, 01:49:29 AM » |
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meetas labo pe aai hai.. dil mea tune halchal machai hai kya kahe dil ka haal sanam,... Aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai.... pakar tujhe mujhe ak ehsaas hua mano dil mea pyar ki lehar aai hai na so pao na chain dil ko aaye aaj teri yaad bahoot aai hai Oye Hoyeee.. Kya Baat hao ROJA ji.. !! Bahut bahut Khooooob..!! Behad Mohabbat Bhari Lines Likhi hain Aapne... Mazaa Aa gaya Padh kar.. Vicky Ailaaa... mera naam??? Magar upper quote wala sher Divya ka hai. Kya sote sote likha kya?? :?
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«Reply #12 on: November 18, 2007, 01:54:58 AM » |
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Tujhe doondthi hu bata kahan tum ho yaara Zindagi tum ho meri jismon jaan tum ho
Meri saanson main sanam teri hi khushboo hai Meri dhadkanon ki daastan tum ho
Tere sivai, ab mai pukaru kisko? Meri aaj ka astitwa tum ho
Teri chahat hai aur aarzoo hai teri Meri diwangi ki intehan tum ho
Diware todkar aajaungi mai pass tere Mujhko awaaz de yaara jahan tum ho..
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«Reply #14 on: November 19, 2007, 03:35:48 AM » |
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Vicky ji.. kahan koye hue ho.. Roja k khayalo mein.. :D thanku Vicky JI... Well written Roja...
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