Teri Yaad

by mask on December 19, 2007, 02:50:09 AM
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sard hawa ke sang, nanhi bunde taptapai hai
aaj fir mujhe teri yaad aayi hai..

pee virah-k-jahar ka pyala, paate bhi murjhaye hai
ritu ki nirdayta dekh, daali bhi akulaaye hai

ruth gaye  panchi saare, bagecha chod chale hai
apni yaado ki hasti, in bundo me piro chale hai

hoti thi jahan, subah sham shor-gul ki holi,
chai virani aur sirf sannate ki boli hai

dekh ke khel saara, dhari bhi muskaye hai
ambar ke ashkon main, kisiki yaad chali aaye hai
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prmchawla
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2007, 03:39:19 AM »
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very nice
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2007, 03:53:47 AM »
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sard hawa ke sang, nanhi bunde taptapai hai
aaj fir mujhe teri yaad aayi hai..

pee virah-k-jahar ka pyala, paate bhi murjhaye hai
ritu ki nirdayta dekh, daali bhi akulaaye hai

ruth gaye  panchi saare, bagecha chod chale hai
apni yaado ki hasti, in bundo me piro chale hai

hoti thi jahan, subah sham shor-gul ki holi,
chai virani aur sirf sannate ki boli hai

dekh ke khel saara, dhari bhi muskaye hai
ambar ke ashkon main, kisiki yaad chali aaye hai


Bahut umda likha hai aapne Mask ji...
accha laga padkar..
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mask
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2007, 03:58:40 AM »
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shukriya chawla ji
very nice
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mask
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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2007, 03:59:48 AM »
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thank you Roja ji.

sard hawa ke sang, nanhi bunde taptapai hai
aaj fir mujhe teri yaad aayi hai..

pee virah-k-jahar ka pyala, paate bhi murjhaye hai
ritu ki nirdayta dekh, daali bhi akulaaye hai

ruth gaye  panchi saare, bagecha chod chale hai
apni yaado ki hasti, in bundo me piro chale hai

hoti thi jahan, subah sham shor-gul ki holi,
chai virani aur sirf sannate ki boli hai

dekh ke khel saara, dhari bhi muskaye hai
ambar ke ashkon main, kisiki yaad chali aaye hai


Bahut umda likha hai aapne Mask ji...
accha laga padkar..

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kudrat
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«Reply #5 on: December 19, 2007, 01:56:53 PM »
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nice mask ji
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: December 19, 2007, 02:21:13 PM »
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Mask, you have written very beautiful ! good one..........but why Khmar-e-ishq ? Better suits in Dard-e-judai Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: December 19, 2007, 04:23:40 PM »
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Waaah kya paryog kia hai aapne Hindi ka...really fantastic..!!
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mask
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2007, 06:45:37 AM »
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Shukriya kudrat ji, talat ji aur shayar ji.
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2007, 07:02:02 AM »
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shukria talat ji.
bilkul sahi  kaha apne..yeh dard-e-ishq hai

magar voh ish

Mask, you have written very beautiful ! good one..........but why Khmar-e-ishq ? Better suits in Dard-e-judai Usual Smile
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