Teri ye ankheN.." ParwaaZ"

by ParwaaZ on December 24, 2010, 06:52:15 PM
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Ahel e Bazm ko Aadaab O tasleem.....

Bade dino se shayari aur yo se door rahkar hum kalaam ka
istemaal karna hi bhool se gaye hai... Kuch tute ashaar
aapki nazar...... Usual Smile
          


Mere Band Palkon ka Khawab hai teri ye ankheN
Meri mohobbat ka Jawaab hai teri ye ankheN

Aye gul ruu aye gul badan, Kia tareef karuN maiN
JahaaN meiN sab se la jawab hai teri ye ankheN

Tu ruthe to dozak ki aag, Tu hase to jannat ka bagh
Mere hashr ka hisab kitab hai teri ye ankheN

Har shaam kayiN khaboN ke charaagh jalte haiN inse
Meri ummidoN ka aaftaab hai teri ye aankheN

Yeh jheel se bhi gehri hai aasmaaN ko sametti hai
Aakhari Parwaazi ka Khitaab hai teri ye aankheN
          
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«Reply #1 on: December 24, 2010, 06:57:44 PM »
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Lovely ceation Parwaaz ji bahut baddiya.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause:
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«Reply #2 on: December 24, 2010, 07:00:05 PM »
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parwaz ji.......dil me bht gehre utar gaye aapke ye aasahaar.......har ek lafz me sirf bht sara pyaar chhalak raha hai aapka...aur ek atut yakeen ...jiske liye bhi likhi hain waakai wo bht hi dilkash hongi.....aur bht hi lucky bhi.....

ispar kuch likhna chhaenge par abhi nahin likh pa rahe...kal subah zarur kuch likhungi ji.......
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«Reply #3 on: December 24, 2010, 07:19:26 PM »
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Waah kya Mohabbat bhara Tareef kari aapne Ankhon ki.
khubsurat alfazon ka bakhubi istemal.
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  jhukti palkon ke saath uske
        jhukta aasmaan hai
doob jaun aankho ki gehrai me uske
     ke unn aankhon me hi saara jahaan hai 
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«Reply #4 on: December 24, 2010, 07:54:33 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob Parwaaz jee..
mujhe bahaut maza aya parr kar..
bahaut mohobat hai isme..
Sada Khush rahiye..
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«Reply #5 on: December 24, 2010, 09:11:03 PM »
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Bahut khoob Parwaaz Ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 25, 2010, 07:04:01 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 25, 2010, 08:07:10 AM »
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parwaaj ji bht bht sweet likha he apne.....esi ankho wali ko me janta hu apne uski ankho ki puri tasveer bana di he shabdo se superb
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«Reply #8 on: December 25, 2010, 08:11:33 AM »
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Aye gul ruu aye gul badan, Kia tareef karuN maiN
JahaaN meiN sab se la jawab hai teri ye ankheN

Tu ruthe to dozak ki aag, Tu hase to jannat ka bagh hai
Mere hashr ka hisab kitab hai teri ye ankheN

Bahut Hi Umdaa Khayaal ....... Parwaaz Ji !

Bahut romaantic aur touching ehsaas ... dil ko gudgudaa dene waali peshkash rahi aapki ... ishq par kahe sabhi ashaar bahut khoob bane hai ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

SuperBBBBBBBBBBBBBB Creation ........ !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #9 on: December 25, 2010, 04:27:25 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 24, 2010, 06:52:15 PM
Ahel e Bazm ko Aadaab O tasleem.....

Bade dino se shayari aur yo se door rahkar hum kalaam ka
istemaal karna hi bhool se gaye hai... Kuch tute ashaar
aapki nazar...... Usual Smile
         


Mere Band Palkon ka Khawab hai teri ye ankheN
Meri mohobbat ka Jawaab hai teri ye ankheN

Aye gul ruu aye gul badan, Kia tareef karuN maiN
JahaaN meiN sab se la jawab hai teri ye ankheN

Tu ruthe to dozak ki aag, Tu hase to jannat ka bagh hai
Mere hashr ka hisab kitab hai teri ye ankheN

Har shaam kayiN khaboN ke charaagh jalte haiN inse
Meri ummidoN ka aaftaab hai teri ye aankheN

Yeh jheel se bhi gehri hai aasmaaN ko sametti hai
Aakhari Parwaazi ka Khitaab hai teri ye aankheN
         



Behetreen parwaaz ji bahut hi behetreen likha hai...
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«Reply #10 on: December 25, 2010, 06:13:37 PM »
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bahoooooot sunder likha hai parwaz ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: December 26, 2010, 09:43:31 AM »
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Bahut Khub Parwaaz JI Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Aapne Padh Kar Accha laga Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: January 08, 2012, 01:01:44 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 24, 2010, 06:52:15 PM
Ahel e Bazm ko Aadaab O tasleem.....

Bade dino se shayari aur yo se door rahkar hum kalaam ka
istemaal karna hi bhool se gaye hai... Kuch tute ashaar
aapki nazar...... Usual Smile
          


Mere Band Palkon ka Khawab hai teri ye ankheN
Meri mohobbat ka Jawaab hai teri ye ankheN

Aye gul ruu aye gul badan, Kia tareef karuN maiN
JahaaN meiN sab se la jawab hai teri ye ankheN

Tu ruthe to dozak ki aag, Tu hase to jannat ka bagh hai
Mere hashr ka hisab kitab hai teri ye ankheN

Har shaam kayiN khaboN ke charaagh jalte haiN inse
Meri ummidoN ka aaftaab hai teri ye aankheN

Yeh jheel se bhi gehri hai aasmaaN ko sametti hai
Aakhari Parwaaz ka Khitaab hai teri ye aankheN
          




bahut khoob................!
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«Reply #13 on: January 26, 2012, 10:33:30 AM »
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Bahut Umda Parwaaz bhai
kya likha hai aapne ...Daad Daad Daad
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«Reply #14 on: January 26, 2012, 02:15:45 PM »
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MashAllah Kya Umda peshkash Ki hai aapne.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Parwaaz ji.. Kahan Gayab hai aajkal aap ?
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