Terre sang muskurana acha lagta tha...

by brokenbyluv on November 02, 2010, 06:07:38 PM
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Jab kabhi tu pyar se mujhe dekha karta tha,
mujhe terri ankho se ankhe milana acha lagta tha,

jab kabhi tu merri kisi baat per halke se muskura diya karta tha,
mujhe terri muskan mein kho jana acha lagta tha,

jab kabhi merre sath baithe baithe tu apne baalo ko sanwarta tha,
us mahol ka terre geysuo ki khushbu se mehek jana acha lagta tha,

jab main tujhe didar k liye tarsati thi aur tu ruth jata tha,
tab terra mujhe chhup chhup kar satana acha lagta tha,

jab hum milte the har faasle ko mita k,
tab terra mujhse tadap k lipat jana acha lagta tha,

yu tou main aam insan hu merre ajnabi,
per terra mujhe khaas hone ka ehsas dilana acha lagta tha,

rahe hum door hamesha bandhisho k dayre mein,
phir bhi terra mujhse pyar nibhana acha lagta tha,

sach keh rahi hu merri jaan bahut yad aati hai terri..
mujhe bus terre hi sath apna waqt bitana acha lagta tha,

laut aa ab tou intezar bhi nhi hota mujhse..
terre sang mujhe dard mein bhi muskurana acha lagta tha.........
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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2010, 06:18:16 PM »
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Shukriya shihab ji.........
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«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2010, 06:30:00 PM »
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waoooo waooo kya khoob likha hai....Geet-di.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mujhe ye tere pyaar bhare geet padhna achha lagta hai
Likhti raho tum Geet mujhe tera likhna achha lagta hai

Kisi ke liye ye teri tadap aur waffa mujhe achhi lagti hai
Khatm ho tera ye intezaar ye DUA karna achha lagta hai


Quote from: brokenbyluv on November 02, 2010, 06:07:38 PM


Jab kabhi tu pyar se mujhe dekha karta tha,
mujhe terri ankho se ankhe milana acha lagta tha,

jab kabhi tu merri kisi baat per halke se muskura diya karta tha,
mujhe terri muskan mein kho jana acha lagta tha,

jab kabhi merre sath baithe baithe tu apne baalo ko sanwarta tha,
us mahol ka terre geysuo ki khushbu se mehek jana acha lagta tha,

jab main tujhe didar k liye tarsati thi aur tu ruth jata tha,
tab terra mujhe chhup chhup kar satana acha lagta tha,

jab hum milte the har faasle ko mita k,
tab terra mujhse tadap k lipat jana acha lagta tha,

yu tou main aam insan hu merre ajnabi,
per terra mujhe khaas hone ka ehsas dilana acha lagta tha,

rahe hum door hamesha bandhisho k dayre mein,
phir bhi terra mujhse pyar nibhana acha lagta tha,

sach keh rahi hu merri jaan bahut yad aati hai terri..
mujhe bus terre hi sath apna waqt bitana acha lagta tha,

laut aa ab tou intezar bhi nhi hota mujhse..
terre sang mujhe dard mein bhi muskurana acha lagta tha.........
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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2010, 06:32:15 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 02, 2010, 06:30:00 PM
waoooo waooo kya khoob likha hai....Geet-di.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mujhe ye tere pyaar bhare geet padhna achha lagta hai
Likhti raho tum Geet mujhe tera likhna achha lagta hai

Kisi ke liye ye teri tadap aur waffa mujhe achhi lagti hai
Khatm ho tera ye intezaar ye DUA karna achha lagta hai



Thnx alot sweetu...bahut pyara likha hai aur khuda kare terri dua jald kubul ho...take care...Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2010, 06:57:05 AM »
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 icon_salut :clapping:thankyou so much
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«Reply #5 on: November 03, 2010, 07:01:01 AM »
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wah geet di dil chhu liya..

bahut achha likha hai..

u know wat i most like abt your post is the cute girl pics those you embed above the lines..pic dekh ke hi achha sa feel hone lagta hai...

nice one di..
dher sarii daaaad~
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«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2010, 08:51:34 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on November 02, 2010, 06:07:38 PM


Jab kabhi tu pyar se mujhe dekha karta tha,
mujhe terri ankho se ankhe milana acha lagta tha,

jab kabhi tu merri kisi baat per halke se muskura diya karta tha,
mujhe terri muskan mein kho jana acha lagta tha,

jab kabhi merre sath baithe baithe tu apne baalo ko sanwarta tha,
us mahol ka terre geysuo ki khushbu se mehek jana acha lagta tha,

jab main tujhe didar k liye tarsati thi aur tu ruth jata tha,
tab terra mujhe chhup chhup kar satana acha lagta tha,

jab hum milte the har faasle ko mita k,
tab terra mujhse tadap k lipat jana acha lagta tha,

yu tou main aam insan hu merre ajnabi,
per terra mujhe khaas hone ka ehsas dilana acha lagta tha,

rahe hum door hamesha bandhisho k dayre mein,
phir bhi terra mujhse pyar nibhana acha lagta tha,

sach keh rahi hu merri jaan bahut yad aati hai terri..
mujhe bus terre hi sath apna waqt bitana acha lagta tha,

laut aa ab tou intezar bhi nhi hota mujhse..
terre sang mujhe dard mein bhi muskurana acha lagta tha.........








"Yuh To Main Aam Insaan Hoon Mere Ajnabi
Par Tera Mujhe Khaas Hone Ka Ehsaas Dilana Acha lagta Tha"

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob!!! bahut Hi vadhiya Likheya Hai Geetji..

Just Toooooooooo Gooooooooood!!! Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: November 03, 2010, 09:26:01 AM »
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Naughty abhi thank u so much...

Khwaish ji dilo shukriya tuada ki tuanu merri koshish pasad aayi...
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«Reply #8 on: November 03, 2010, 09:37:03 AM »
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O-kudiye mainu bhi taudi koshish changi lagdi hai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause
Ab return gift vich hik tight jhappy de de reeeeeeee Giggle Giggle Giggle
Mainu terre naal muskuraana achha lagda hai.... Winking Winking Winking Winking
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«Reply #9 on: November 03, 2010, 09:44:00 AM »
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Hmm..thnx alot sweets..n here's a jadu ki jhappi for uuuuuu.. love8 love8..ab jhappi wala icon hai nhi isliye isise kaam chalana padega.. Winking  love5 love5 love5 love5  headbang headbang
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«Reply #10 on: November 03, 2010, 09:59:08 AM »
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lo chal gayaa kaam....Geet-di

Terre sang raat-raat bhar batiyana yaad aata hai
Un dilchashp kahaaniyo kee naayika yaad aati hai
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«Reply #11 on: November 03, 2010, 10:24:13 AM »
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Ok gud hai...jald hi vo vaqt laut aayega jab hum raat mein baat karenge...Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: November 03, 2010, 03:18:49 PM »
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BBL jee Aadaab!

Kafi masoom se aur pyaare se ahsaas kahe hai aapne..
Hume yeh ahsaas achche lage...

Likhate rahiye.......
Khush Rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: November 04, 2010, 07:23:17 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on November 02, 2010, 06:07:38 PM


Jab kabhi tu pyar se mujhe dekha karta tha,
mujhe terri ankho se ankhe milana acha lagta tha,

jab kabhi tu merri kisi baat per halke se muskura diya karta tha,
mujhe terri muskan mein kho jana acha lagta tha,

jab kabhi merre sath baithe baithe tu apne baalo ko sanwarta tha,
us mahol ka terre geysuo ki khushbu se mehek jana acha lagta tha,

jab main tujhe didar k liye tarsati thi aur tu ruth jata tha,
tab terra mujhe chhup chhup kar satana acha lagta tha,

jab hum milte the har faasle ko mita k,
tab terra mujhse tadap k lipat jana acha lagta tha,

yu tou main aam insan hu merre ajnabi,
per terra mujhe khaas hone ka ehsas dilana acha lagta tha,

rahe hum door hamesha bandhisho k dayre mein,
phir bhi terra mujhse pyar nibhana acha lagta tha,

sach keh rahi hu merri jaan bahut yad aati hai terri..
mujhe bus terre hi sath apna waqt bitana acha lagta tha,

laut aa ab tou intezar bhi nhi hota mujhse..
terre sang mujhe dard mein bhi muskurana acha lagta tha.........


Geet Ji Humesha Ki Tarah Behad Khubsoorat Jazzbaaton Ko Lafzon me utaara hai Aapne.. Har Alfaaz Dil Ko Chhoo Gaya.. Mohabbat Bhare Us Har Lamhe ko Aapne Bahut mohabbat Ke sath Likha hai..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Dher Sari Daad...   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Ek Tu Hi Tha Jiske Dum Pe Chalti Hi Saanse Meri,
Laut Aa Ke Zindgi Se Ab Wafa Nibhaai Nahi Jaati....!!



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«Reply #14 on: November 04, 2010, 09:03:38 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya mann ji n parwaaz ji...
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