Tishnagi-e-dil…………Sahal

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                   Tishnagi-e-dil…………Sahal

Duaein zaroor rang layengi,
Muhabbat tumhe bhi hojayegi.

Jaago ge tum bhi raat bhar,
Tumhe bhi neend na aayegi.

Akela hun main chand ki tarha,
Ye raat youn hi tanha guzar jayegi.

Thamlo hame kareeb aker tum,
Doori tum se bhi na sahi jayegi.

Kehne ko to hai jaam-e-sutoon”Sahal”,
Tishnagi-e-dil magar kaise bujh payegi.

Sutoon=sahara
Tishnagi=pyaas.

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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2013, 06:41:38 PM »
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bohat khoob ,..................
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bohat khoob ,..................
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wah bahut bhut  khoob sahal jee
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2013, 06:59:46 PM »
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                   Tishnagi-e-dil…………Sahal

Duaein zaroor rang layengi,
Muhabbat tumhe bhi hojayegi.

Jaago ge tum bhi raat bhar,
Tumhe bhi neend na aayegi.

Akela hun main chand ki tarha,
Ye raat youn hi tanha guzar jayegi.

Thamlo hame kareeb aker tum,
Doori tum se bhi na sahi jayegi.

Kehne ko to hai jaam-e-sutoon”Sahal”,
Tishnagi-e-dil magar kaise bujh payegi.

Sutoon=sahara
Tishnagi=pyaas.



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Waaaaaaaaaaah! Awesome composition. kya baat hai sahal bahut jyaada romantic nazar aa rahe ho. Duaen bhi qubool hogi aur mohabbat bhi ho hi jaayegi. But thoda sabr karna hoga.Lajawab tha. Har sher khoobsurat rahe.
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REALLY VERY NICE GHAZAL, BUHAT HI KHOOOB SAAHIL BHAI
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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2013, 08:10:40 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2013, 08:55:03 PM »
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                   Tishnagi-e-dil…………Sahal

Duaein zaroor rang layengi,
Muhabbat tumhe bhi hojayegi.

Jaago ge tum bhi raat bhar,
Tumhe bhi neend na aayegi.

Akela hun main chand ki tarha,
Ye raat youn hi tanha guzar jayegi.

Thamlo hame kareeb aker tum,
Doori tum se bhi na sahi jayegi.

Kehne ko to hai jaam-e-sutoon”Sahal”,
Tishnagi-e-dil magar kaise bujh payegi.

Sutoon=sahara
Tishnagi=pyaas.



achchcha likha hai Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2013, 10:48:35 PM »
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Duaein zaroor rang layengi,
Muhabbat tumhe bhi hojayegi.

Jaago ge tum bhi raat bhar,
Tumhe bhi neend na aayegi. Applause

Bahut khoob Sahal jee
bahut pyara likha hai aapne


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«Reply #9 on: March 02, 2013, 10:58:43 PM »
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behad khub sehal miya  behad khoob

arz kiya hai :
chand akela nahi hota
uske karib tare bohot hote hain  

 unhe k khwaboo,n mai khoye rahe
hum to raat-o-dinn soye pade hote hain  



shukriya shukriya

behot khoob likhte rahe
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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2013, 11:34:38 PM »
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                   Tishnagi-e-dil…………Sahal

Duaein zaroor rang layengi,
Muhabbat tumhe bhi hojayegi.

Jaago ge tum bhi raat bhar,
Tumhe bhi neend na aayegi.

Akela hun main chand ki tarha,
Ye raat youn hi tanha guzar jayegi.

Thamlo hame kareeb aker tum,
Doori tum se bhi na sahi jayegi.

Kehne ko to hai jaam-e-sutoon”Sahal”,
Tishnagi-e-dil magar kaise bujh payegi.

Sutoon=sahara
Tishnagi=pyaas.



good poem,sir
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                   Tishnagi-e-dil…………Sahal

Duaein zaroor rang layengi,
Muhabbat tumhe bhi hojayegi.

Jaago ge tum bhi raat bhar,
Tumhe bhi neend na aayegi.

Akela hun main chand ki tarha,
Ye raat youn hi tanha guzar jayegi.

Thamlo hame kareeb aker tum,
Doori tum se bhi na sahi jayegi.

Kehne ko to hai jaam-e-sutoon”Sahal”,
Tishnagi-e-dil magar kaise bujh payegi.

Sutoon=sahara
Tishnagi=pyaas.




Bahut Bahut Khooob Sahal Ji...

Khoobsurat Andaaz-e-bayaan

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wah bahut bhut  khoob sahal jee
Thankyou ! suman ji
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