Tishnagi-e-dil…………Sahal

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Waaaaaaaaaaah! Awesome composition. kya baat hai sahal bahut jyaada romantic nazar aa rahe ho. Duaen bhi qubool hogi aur mohabbat bhi ho hi jaayegi. But thoda sabr karna hoga.Lajawab tha. Har sher khoobsurat rahe.
Thankyou ! Aqsh ji ....kuch nai bas aise hi likhi hai,,,
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REALLY VERY NICE GHAZAL, BUHAT HI KHOOOB SAAHIL BHAI
Thankyou ! farhan sohail bhai..
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Duaein zaroor rang layengi,
Muhabbat tumhe bhi hojayegi.

Jaago ge tum bhi raat bhar,
Tumhe bhi neend na aayegi. Applause

Bahut khoob Sahal jee
bahut pyara likha hai aapne



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Quote from: roy on March 02, 2013, 10:58:43 PM
behad khub sehal miya  behad khoob

arz kiya hai :
chand akela nahi hota
uske karib tare bohot hote hain 

 unhe k khwaboo,n mai khoye rahe
hum to raat-o-dinn soye pade hote hain 


shukriya shukriya

behot khoob likhte rahe
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Sahal Ji...

Khoobsurat Andaaz-e-bayaan

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bahut khoob Sahal ji.....!!!
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bahut khoob Sahal ji.....!!!
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                   Tishnagi-e-dil…………Sahal

Duaein zaroor rang layengi,
Muhabbat tumhe bhi hojayegi.
na babaa aisi doa nahin chahiye. tumhein hi mohabbat mubaarak. mujhe mere haal pe chhod do. main aise hi khush hoon ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Jaago ge tum bhi raat bhar,
Tumhe bhi neend na aayegi.
mujhe abnormal si zindagi jeene ka koi shauq nahin. raat bhar jaag kar dil jigar gurde kharaab karne hain kya icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
Akela hun main chand ki tarha,
Ye raat youn hi tanha guzar jayegi.
acha per chand aur tum mein zayada kaun chamakta hai. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Thamlo hame kareeb aker tum,
Doori tum se bhi na sahi jayegi.
na baabaa na. tum ne bina soche samjhe dariya mein chalaan lagaai hai to khud hi niklo. maine apna haath nahin dena warna mujhe bhi dubaa do ge Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Kehne ko to hai jaam-e-sutoon”Sahal”,
Tishnagi-e-dil magar kaise bujh payegi.
dariya ke kinaare rah kar bhi payaase. ye to phir qismat ki baat hai.koi kya kar sakta hai icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Sutoon=sahara
Tishnagi=pyaas.



good...............!
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