TO BAAT BANE........soudagar

by soudagar on September 27, 2012, 05:50:44 AM
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Wo mere dil ki mehfil mein aayein to baat bane.
Apni adaon ka jadu bikhraaye to baat bane

mehfil mein chahne wale ki koi kami nahi hai unke
Wo bas dekh mujhe muskraye to baat bane

najron mein se to kai bar gujre hain unki
najron se dil mein utar jayein to baat bane

khawabon mein to roj lag jate hai seene se
haqeeqat mein wo gale lagaye to baat bane

mehfil mein izhar to kar de hum mohabbat ka
mohabat ko meri aakhon se samjh jaye to baat bane

mana unhe maharath hai ishq ki gazal sunane me
unki gazal mein naam apna aaye to baat bane

apni adaon se dil ki dhadkan churana to aasan h
 mujh deewane ko apne dil ki dhadkan banaye to baat bane

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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2012, 05:53:46 AM »
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waah waah beta bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2012, 06:07:33 AM »
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Wo mere dil ki mehfil mein aayein to baat bane.
Apni adaon ka jadu bikhraaye to baat bane

mehfil mein chahne wale ki koi kami nahi hai unke
Wo bas dekh mujhe muskraye to baat bane

najron mein se to kai bar gujre hain unki
najron se dil mein utar jayein to baat bane

khawabon mein to roj lag jate hai seene se
haqeeqat mein wo gale lagaye to baat bane

mehfil mein izhar to kar de hum mohabbat ka
mohabat ko meri aakhon se samjh jaye to baat bane

mana unhe maharath hai ishq ki gazal sunane me
unki gazal mein naam apna aaye to baat bane

apni adaon se dil ki dhadkan churana to aasan h
 mujh deewane ko apne dil ki dhadkan banaye to baat bane



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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2012, 06:12:43 AM »
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Bahut shaandaar ghazal pesh kee hai Karan
kya baat hai. har ashaar bolta hua.
bahut bahut khoob Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2012, 06:20:00 AM »
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Wah Wah!!!!! Bohat hi umda!!!!! Very Very Romantic!!!! Loved it!!!!!


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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2012, 06:38:34 AM »
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very good  saudagar jee achche khayalat haiN,
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2012, 07:05:49 AM »
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Wo mere dil ki mehfil mein aayein to baat bane.
Apni adaon ka jadu bikhraaye to baat bane

mehfil mein chahne wale ki koi kami nahi hai unke
Wo bas dekh mujhe muskraye to baat bane

najron mein se to kai bar gujre hain unki
najron se dil mein utar jayein to baat bane

khawabon mein to roj lag jate hai seene se
haqeeqat mein wo gale lagaye to baat bane

mehfil mein izhar to kar de hum mohabbat ka
mohabat ko meri aakhon se samjh jaye to baat bane

mana unhe maharath hai ishq ki gazal sunane me
unki gazal mein naam apna aaye to baat bane

apni adaon se dil ki dhadkan churana to aasan h
 mujh deewane ko apne dil ki dhadkan banaye to baat bane



come on soudagar! very nice post
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2012, 07:55:09 AM »
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bahut umda, dhero dad
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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2012, 08:16:12 AM »
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Bahut khoob lazwab creation Soudagar sahab ..!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2012, 09:35:15 AM »
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Niiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaacccccccceeee
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«Reply #10 on: September 27, 2012, 10:30:25 AM »
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Bahut  khoob , Soudagar ji . Tabiat  khush  ho gai .
Mubarakbaad  aur  duaaein !
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«Reply #11 on: September 27, 2012, 10:33:34 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Saudagar Jee Aadaab!


bahut khoob janab achchi kalama kahi hai... sabhia shar aik se badhkar aik
rahe... waaH jee waaH bahut khoob...

huamri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: September 27, 2012, 01:28:14 PM »
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 Applause Applause beautiful creation  Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: September 27, 2012, 02:29:28 PM »
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Karan ji bahut khubsurati se likha aap ne......
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«Reply #14 on: September 27, 2012, 03:25:36 PM »
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Wo mere dil ki mehfil mein aayein to baat bane.
Apni adaon ka jadu bikhraaye to baat bane

mehfil mein chahne wale ki koi kami nahi hai unke
Wo bas dekh mujhe muskraye to baat bane

najron mein se to kai bar gujre hain unki
najron se dil mein utar jayein to baat bane

khawabon mein to roj lag jate hai seene se
haqeeqat mein wo gale lagaye to baat bane

mehfil mein izhar to kar de hum mohabbat ka
mohabat ko meri aakhon se samjh jaye to baat bane

mana unhe maharath hai ishq ki gazal sunane me
unki gazal mein naam apna aaye to baat bane

apni adaon se dil ki dhadkan churana to aasan h
 mujh deewane ko apne dil ki dhadkan banaye to baat bane




OFooooo...Kya baat Hai Karan ji..

Umda Peshkash...Bahut Bahut khooob....

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