to kaise nind aayye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by Pooja on July 27, 2005, 10:24:39 PM
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yah raat, yah dil ki dharkan, yah barati hui batabi
ek jaam ki khatir jaise bachain ho koi sharabi!!!!
najdik bahoot hai manjil, bhir bhi gazab ki doori
A dil yah tu hi batla de, yah kon si hai majboori!!!!

Jab soch mai ho insaan to kaise nind ayye
sholo mai ghiri ho jaan, to kaise nind ayye!!!!
ho dil mai jab hanseen mahmaan, to kaise nind ayye
jab jaag uthy armaan, to kaise nind ayye!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2005, 09:01:53 AM »
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waah waah .... bhoot khob pooja ji !!!


Husn se aj chand bhi sharmaya hai
tere chehre ne kuch aisa gazab dhaya hai
maang lete tujhe aaj uss khuda se
par woh bhi tera gulam nazar aya hai!!!

Hum hawa ke jhonke hain guzar jayenge
Khamoshi se tumhare dil mein uttar jayange
Paake tumhare Pyaar koi ye hua ehsaas
tumse bichad kar hum mar jayenge !!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2005, 09:21:11 AM »
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Neend udh gayi meri usse paake
na chain aaya phir kabhi bhi mujhko
aaya phir chain mujhe unke karib jake
paay sukun dil ne unhe sine se lagake
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2005, 11:03:47 AM »
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Waah bahi Hum kya likha hai.

Very good. But please don't die we will help you get back Tum. :lol:
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2005, 11:09:52 AM »
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"Tum" ke bina ab iss "Hum" ka guzara nhi
ik "Tum" hi hai apni baqi koi hamara nhi
jaldi se dund ke lao meri "Tum" ko ja kar
"Tum" ke bina mere dil ka koi shara nhi !!

well anamika Thanks for helping me n welcome to yoindia !!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2005, 11:19:45 AM »
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waah waah .... bhoot khob pooja ji !!!


Husn se aj chand bhi sharmaya hai
tere chehre ne kuch aisa gazab dhaya hai
maang lete tujhe aaj uss khuda se
par woh bhi tera gulam nazar aya hai!!!

Hum hawa ke jhonke hain guzar jayenge
Khamoshi se tumhare dil mein uttar jayange
Paake tumhare Pyaar koi ye hua ehsaas
tumse bichad kar hum mar jayenge !!!


Wahhhhh HumTum Kya Likha hai...........................

Husn se aaj chand bhi sharmaya hai......................
Woh dekho majnu Paan kha ke aaya hai................
Lagta hai Aaj phir G.F. se pit ker aaya hai...............
Chehre per eik naya mausam chhaya hai...............
Lal hue gaal ko paan se chupaaya hai....................
Ishq ka khumaar gaal se bahar aaya hai.................lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
(This Is The Practical Story :lol:  :lol: )
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2005, 11:28:24 AM »
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waah waah Natural .... bahoot khoob byaan kiya hai ik asihq ka haal .... badey hi zarf ki baat hoti hai jab ik ashiq ka yeh haal hota hai ..... byaaan to hum bhi ker de kuch practical story par phir yeh thread khumar e ishq ki jagah hazal mein dhal jayega aur pooja ji mind krengey ..... so kuch khumar e ishq pe hi likhta hoon !!!

badloon ke peechey se chandni muskurai hai
lagta hai kissi dewane ne phir bansuri bjai hai
woh chand sa chehra woh jeel se neele ankhein
mere yaar ko bnaker khuda ne ik apsra bnai hai !!
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«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2005, 11:45:27 AM »
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Wow.........humtum........................
Achha Likha hai....................
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«Reply #8 on: July 28, 2005, 11:57:24 AM »
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badloon ke peechey se chandni muskurai hai,
Itnay dino ke baad Aaj unki yaad aayi hai.............
Yaad to pehley bhi the wo hamein..........
Per ab unki yaadon ne aankhon se Ganga-Yamuna Bahai hai..............

Dont' mind yaar agar tumhe lagey ki maine tumhaari shayari ka kabara kar diya............................. sad5
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«Reply #9 on: July 28, 2005, 12:06:12 PM »
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waah natural ... bahoot khoob ... aree yaar mind kya karna ... even mein to khush hoon ke mere likhe chend ashaar ko aap ne modified kiya aur kuch apni traf se likha !!

uski yadoon ka silsila dil se jata nhi
uske siwa ab dil ko kuch bhi bhata nhi
ik bas uske aane ka intzaar reh gya hai
bin uske ab ik pal bhi aur jiya jata nhi !!
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«Reply #10 on: July 28, 2005, 02:59:01 PM »
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waah waah .... bhoot khob pooja ji !!!


Husn se aj chand bhi sharmaya hai
tere chehre ne kuch aisa gazab dhaya hai
maang lete tujhe aaj uss khuda se
par woh bhi tera gulam nazar aya hai!!!

Hum hawa ke jhonke hain guzar jayenge
Khamoshi se tumhare dil mein uttar jayange
Paake tumhare Pyaar koi ye hua ehsaas
tumse bichad kar hum mar jayenge !!!


Wahhhhh HumTum Kya Likha hai...........................

Husn se aaj chand bhi sharmaya hai......................
Woh dekho majnu Paan kha ke aaya hai................
Lagta hai Aaj phir G.F. se pit ker aaya hai...............
Chehre per eik naya mausam chhaya hai...............
Lal hue gaal ko paan se chupaaya hai....................
Ishq ka khumaar gaal se bahar aaya hai.................lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
(This Is The Practical Story :lol:  :lol: )


HAHAHA..lolz... khool yar Winking
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«Reply #11 on: July 28, 2005, 05:14:10 PM »
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yah raat, yah dil ki dharkan, yah barati hui batabi
ek jaam ki khatir jaise bachain ho koi sharabi!!!!
najdik bahoot hai manjil, bhir bhi gazab ki doori
A dil yah tu hi batla de, yah kon si hai majboori!!!!

Jab soch mai ho insaan to kaise nind ayye
sholo mai ghiri ho jaan, to kaise nind ayye!!!!
ho dil mai jab hanseen mahmaan, to kaise nind ayye
jab jaag uthy armaan, to kaise nind ayye!!!!!


Bohat khoob pooja ji.

NIce work humtum and natural.
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«Reply #12 on: July 28, 2005, 05:41:58 PM »
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yah raat, yah dil ki dharkan, yah barati hui batabi
ek jaam ki khatir jaise bachain ho koi sharabi!!!!
najdik bahoot hai manjil, bhir bhi gazab ki doori
A dil yah tu hi batla de, yah kon si hai majboori!!!!

Jab soch mai ho insaan to kaise nind ayye
sholo mai ghiri ho jaan, to kaise nind ayye!!!!
ho dil mai jab hanseen mahmaan, to kaise nind ayye
jab jaag uthy armaan, to kaise nind ayye!!!!!


Bohat khoob pooja ji.

NIce work humtum and natural.


wow  pooja................very  nice  wordings................too good  hum tum  ....natura........


jab shaam  ke  saaye  dhalte hain to yaad tumhari  aati hai
har  jakham  kanwal  ban  jaata hai har dard ko  need aa jaati hai......nm
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«Reply #13 on: July 28, 2005, 07:33:40 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob HumTum ji.........bahoot hi acha likha hai apne!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: July 28, 2005, 10:00:05 PM »
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wah kya baat hai!!!
u guys r really cool especially humtum i simply loved ur shers!!!
here's one frm me,

pyaar ka ehsaas ajeeb hai,
woh door hote hue bhi kareeb hai,
tha jo ajnabee kal tak,
aaj yun lagta hai jaise mera naseeb hai!!!
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