toh bekhudi mein unke liye kuch gaaun kaise..

by lovely_charan on July 17, 2013, 12:09:41 AM
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uljhan mein hun ki dil se muskuraun kaise..
bekhudi mein unke liye kuch gaaun kaise..

udhti huyi julfon mein bandha tha unhe..
ab uljhe huye hain woh, suljhaun kaise..

titliyan ishare karti hain,bulati hain mujhe..
tanha magar us baag mein fir jaun kaise..

chidiyon ke chehchahane mein ab laiy nahi..
gaano mein toh apne main sur laun kaise..

kayi lamhe jo beete hain bin unke, judai ke..
jala hai dil, main iss aag ko bujhaaun kaise..

koi keh do ki mulaqat unse meri hogi jaldi hi..
khumaar-e-ishq ko qaabu mein ab laun kaise..

yun toh barti thi ehtiyat khata hone na paye..
ab jo ho gayi qurbaan toh jhuthlaun kaise..

ahl-e-dil se kehte hain apse mohabbat hai..
bin aapke, phoolon ko bhi sehlaun kaise..

abhi doori hai darmiyan itni ki raha jata nahi..
toh bekhudi mein unke liye kuch gaaun kaise..
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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2013, 12:31:22 AM »
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uljhan mein hun ki dil se muskuraun kaise..
bekhudi mein unke liye kuch gaaun kaise..

udhti huyi julfon mein bandha tha unhe..
ab uljhe huye hain woh, suljhaun kaise..

titliyan ishare karti hain,bulati hain mujhe..
tanha magar us baag mein fir jaun kaise..

chidiyon ke chehchahane mein ab laiy nahi..
gaano mein toh apne main sur laun kaise..

kayi lamhe jo beete hain bin unke, judai ke..
jala hai dil, main iss aag ko bujhaaun kaise..

koi keh do ki mulaqat unse meri hogi jaldi hi..
khumaar-e-ishq ko qaabu mein ab laun kaise..

yun toh barti thi ehtiyat khata hone na paye..
ab jo ho gayi qurbaan toh jhuthlaun kaise..

ahl-e-dil se kehte hain apse mohabbat hai..
bin aapke, phoolon ko bhi sehlaun kaise..

abhi doori hai darmiyan itni ki raha jata nahi..
toh bekhudi mein unke liye kuch gaaun kaise..

bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2013, 12:41:11 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya adil ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2013, 12:47:56 AM »
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literally by far one of ur best creations till date....

khaas taur pe is sher ke liye to ek rau banta hai....!!
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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2013, 12:57:20 AM »
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thanks a lot taish ji.. seriously happy to see your reply.. m learning from u.. Usual Smile thanks for being a good teacher sir ji Usual Smile Usual Smile
thanks alot once again.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2013, 01:00:41 AM »
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maam dont say that I may have suggested you a few things, but i am not at all ur teacher juz a frnd, n I myself wanna remain a student all my life.... Usual Smile keep writing blossoming n njoying dear...!! Usual Smile
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Usual Smile thanks for being there to help me sir Winking as a fren..
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thank  u rohan ji
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«Reply #9 on: July 17, 2013, 03:04:34 AM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Lovely ji... bahut din baad aapkaa likhaa kuch padhne ko milaa, aur bahut mazaa aayaa padh ke.. msssstt likhaa hai aapne...!!!


tumhaari yaad humein muskuraane nahi deti
tumhaari judaai humein ab gaane nahi deti

raat bhar jaagte hain tumhaari yaad mein
tumhaari baatein tumhe bhulaane nahi deti
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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2013, 03:18:00 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: July 17, 2013, 03:51:25 AM »
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uljhan mein hun ki dil se muskuraun kaise..
bekhudi mein unke liye kuch gaaun kaise..

udhti huyi julfon mein bandha tha unhe..
ab uljhe huye hain woh, suljhaun kaise..

titliyan ishare karti hain,bulati hain mujhe..
tanha magar us baag mein fir jaun kaise..

chidiyon ke chehchahane mein ab laiy nahi..
gaano mein toh apne main sur laun kaise..

kayi lamhe jo beete hain bin unke, judai ke..
jala hai dil, main iss aag ko bujhaaun kaise..

koi keh do ki mulaqat unse meri hogi jaldi hi..
khumaar-e-ishq ko qaabu mein ab laun kaise..

yun toh barti thi ehtiyat khata hone na paye..
ab jo ho gayi qurbaan toh jhuthlaun kaise..

ahl-e-dil se kehte hain apse mohabbat hai..
bin aapke, phoolon ko bhi sehlaun kaise..

abhi doori hai darmiyan itni ki raha jata nahi..
toh bekhudi mein unke liye kuch gaaun kaise..
nice

hai pada aankho pei parda uske
dard  apna usko dikhau kaise

phase hai jaane kis uljhan mei
uljhane uski mei suljhau kaise

chaaro tarah hai bus paani mere
majhdhaar se baher mei aau kaise

rahnuma haiger tu to inta bata de
apni zindgi ko apna banau kaise

na dil toodu aur na hi jhoot  bolu
sach bol ker bata paisa kamau kaise
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«Reply #12 on: July 17, 2013, 08:29:37 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2013, 11:11:58 AM »
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«Reply #14 on: July 17, 2013, 11:54:34 AM »
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Behad khoobsurat peshkash hai lovely jee..

I liked the flow of ur ghazal..

Dhero daad wid rau..happy9
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