torey baavrey, sey nainon mein ........

by mudassirali on December 13, 2007, 03:35:33 PM
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torey baavrey, sey nainon mein aaj neer sa kahey bhara hai
tori baavri kaali aankhiyaan aaj itni geeli kyon hain?

laagey hai tujhko birha kaaa koi dukh tarhpaayey
jaaisey kati ho nanhi si ungli honton mein usko aapney chupayey
neend naa aayey raat naa jaayeey
piya ki tujhko yaad saataey

torey baavrey, sey nainon mein aaj neer sa kahey bhara hai
tori baavri kaali aankhiyaan aaj itni geeli kyon hain?

do din tujhko baaras lageey hain ankhiya kyon tapkati hai
khud roti hai apney sang mein sakhiyon ko tu rulaati hai
sakhiyan hasaaein hans na paayey
sakhiyaa hansey to ro ro jayey

naina pagal hain badra key jaisey neer giraein
palkein uthein to piya ko sochein, aas laagaein

torey baavrey, sey nainon mein aaj neer sa kahey bhara hai
tori baavri kaali aankhiyaan aaj itni geeli kyon hain?


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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2007, 03:48:09 PM »
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nice with krishana
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«Reply #2 on: December 14, 2007, 12:30:15 PM »
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Nice work.. really beautiful mudassir ji. keep writing
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«Reply #3 on: December 15, 2007, 12:26:27 AM »
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very nice ji
very nice comparison/analogy impressive..

laagey hai tujhko birha kaaa koi dukh tarhpaayey
jaaisey kati ho nanhi si ungli honton mein usko aapney chupayey

torey baavrey, sey nainon mein aaj neer sa kahey bhara hai
tori baavri kaali aankhiyaan aaj itni geeli kyon hain?

laagey hai tujhko birha kaaa koi dukh tarhpaayey
jaaisey kati ho nanhi si ungli honton mein usko aapney chupayey
neend naa aayey raat naa jaayeey
piya ki tujhko yaad saataey

torey baavrey, sey nainon mein aaj neer sa kahey bhara hai
tori baavri kaali aankhiyaan aaj itni geeli kyon hain?

do din tujhko baaras lageey hain ankhiya kyon tapkati hai
khud roti hai apney sang mein sakhiyon ko tu rulaati hai
sakhiyan hasaaein hans na paayey
sakhiyaa hansey to ro ro jayey

naina pagal hain badra key jaisey neer giraein
palkein uthein to piya ko sochein, aas laagaein

torey baavrey, sey nainon mein aaj neer sa kahey bhara hai
tori baavri kaali aankhiyaan aaj itni geeli kyon hain?


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