tu bas ja..........

by manzil-e-ishq on October 19, 2010, 11:54:15 AM
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tu bas ja meri saanso me
thujhe zindagi banayenge
ye chahato ke pal ab hum,
 tere saath hi beetayenge
 
thujhe paa kar muskurate h,
kho ke na hum jee paayenge
jaoge jo humse dur
yaad banke thumhe satayenge
 
mere rang me tu bhi rang ja sanam,.
tere rang me hum rang jayenge
rooth jaoge jo humse..
na tum ko manane aayenge
 
tere noor se chamkte hai
thujhe khawishe batayenge
tere zindagi me aake hum
tera aashiya sajayenge
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2010, 07:41:03 AM »
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Bahut khoobsurat pashkash hai aap ki Ji
Bas yuun hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2010, 09:31:43 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai Manzil ji...

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tujhse judi hain saanse meri,
tu meri zindagi ban chuki hai,
tujhse hi jude hain sapne mere,
tu meri aashiqui ban chuki hai,

tujhe hum yaad kaise banaayenge,
tu aankhon me tasveer ban chuki hai,
khone ka tujhe hum soche bhi kaise,
tu meri muskaan ban chuki hai,

tere rang me to main rang chuka tha,
ab tu mere rang me satrangi ban chuki hai,
roothna na kabhi bhool ke bhi humse,
tu to meri jeene ki wajah ban chuki hai,

hothon pe bas naam tera hai,
tu meri geet ban chuki hai,
aaja mere baahon me tu ab,
tu meri chaahat ban chuki hai....
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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2010, 11:51:45 AM »
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shukria jiii....
aate rahiye...
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on October 20, 2010, 07:41:03 AM
Bahut khoobsurat pashkash hai aap ki Ji
Bas yuun hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2010, 11:56:07 AM »
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thanx alot hriday ji.....
aapne bhi kamal likha hai...
bahut bahut khoob
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 21, 2010, 09:31:43 AM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai Manzil ji...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


tujhse judi hain saanse meri,
tu meri zindagi ban chuki hai,
tujhse hi jude hain sapne mere,
tu meri aashiqui ban chuki hai,

tujhe hum yaad kaise banaayenge,
tu aankhon me tasveer ban chuki hai,
khone ka tujhe hum soche bhi kaise,
tu meri muskaan ban chuki hai,

tere rang me to main rang chuka tha,
ab tu mere rang me satrangi ban chuki hai,
roothna na kabhi bhool ke bhi humse,
tu to meri jeene ki wajah ban chuki hai,

hothon pe bas naam tera hai,
tu meri geet ban chuki hai,
aaja mere baahon me tu ab,
tu meri chaahat ban chuki hai....
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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2010, 01:40:19 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Manzil ji...!!!

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thanx alot hriday ji.....
aapne bhi kamal likha hai...
bahut bahut khoob
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BAHUT PYAARA Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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bht bht shukria adil ji...
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«Reply #8 on: May 04, 2011, 11:46:01 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on October 19, 2010, 11:54:15 AM
tu bas ja meri saanso me
thujhe zindagi banayenge
ye chahato ke pal ab hum,
 tere saath hi beetayenge
 
thujhe paa kar muskurate h,
kho ke na hum jee paayenge
jaoge jo humse dur
yaad banke thumhe satayenge
 
mere rang me tu bhi rang ja sanam,.
tere rang me hum rang jayenge
rooth jaoge jo humse..
na tum ko manane aayenge
 
tere noor se chamkte hai
thujhe khawishe batayenge
tere zindagi me aake hum
tera aashiya sajayenge



naaaaaaice one MEI
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«Reply #9 on: May 04, 2011, 01:16:54 PM »
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shukria khamosh ji....
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Mast poem Priya madam....lagta hai invitation hai ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause




Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on October 19, 2010, 11:54:15 AM
tu bas ja meri saanso me
thujhe zindagi banayenge
ye chahato ke pal ab hum,
 tere saath hi beetayenge
 
thujhe paa kar muskurate h,
kho ke na hum jee paayenge
jaoge jo humse dur
yaad banke thumhe satayenge
 
mere rang me tu bhi rang ja sanam,.
tere rang me hum rang jayenge
rooth jaoge jo humse..
na tum ko manane aayenge
 
tere noor se chamkte hai
thujhe khawishe batayenge
tere zindagi me aake hum
tera aashiya sajayenge
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«Reply #11 on: May 04, 2011, 01:26:19 PM »
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shukria anaam ji.....


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Mast poem Priya madam....lagta hai invitation hai ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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