tu bata de ki tujhe pyaar karu ....***

by ranjana on August 26, 2006, 06:54:21 PM
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apne dil ke armaano per bas toh nahi hai mera
aaj ek baar tu baata de ki main tujhe pyaar karu ya na karu

saja rakhe hain meri aankho ne tere liye khawab kai
tu baata de ki main in khawabo mein rang bharu ya na bharu

kabhi aata hai tu mere dil ke kareeb ek saaya ban ke
kabhi dur chala jaata hai aise jaise koi leher chali jaaye sahil chhoo ke
tu baata de ki aaj main teri lehero ki rawaani banu ya na banu

teri khushbu se mehekete hain din raat mere
teri palko per bhi sajate hain kai sapane mere
tu baata de ki teri raato ki main mehek banu ya na banu

abhi is waqt mein yeh haqikat nahi ek afsaana hai
pal do pal hame milana hai fir kahi kho jaana hai
agar tu haan kahe toh teri zindagi ki sachaai banu ya na banu

bas ek baar baata de ki main tujhe pyaar karu ya na karu...



yeh nazm Sahir ji ke ek gaane se inspired hai...
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phoenix
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2006, 06:58:17 PM »
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gud one
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2006, 07:04:31 PM »
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shukriya Nitesh .....

teri awaz kyu mujhe apni si hone ka ehasas dila jaati hai
yeh dil mein kyu ke kasak si jaga jaati hai
dur se aati hai teri yeh sada mujhe kyu diwaaana sa bana jaati hai
tu baata de ki main teri is awaz ki khanak banu ya na banu
ba sek baar baata de ki main tujhe pyaar karu ya na karu....
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2006, 07:23:28 PM »
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Ranju

Bahut khoob !

Bas ek baar mujhe bata de ki main teri shayari main dooboon ya na dooboon :D

Rajbir
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2006, 07:42:18 PM »
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Wah Ranju ji!

Nasiba kya rang laya hai kisika,
Husn taras raha hai, woh kare izahar mahobat ka!

Na chum le woh tere mathe ko toh kahena,
Intazar hai, teri surat dekhe uske dil ka aina!

BENAM
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Dekha hai teri ankhon main izahar mahobat ka,
Rang laya hai nagama her mera teri ibadat ka!
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2006, 07:49:57 PM »
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BeNam bhai

Aap ko yahan dekh kar khumar ka sahi mayana samajh aata hai !

Wah ! wah !

Rajbir
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2006, 02:21:13 AM »
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Ranju

Bahut khoob !

Bas ek baar mujhe bata de ki main teri shayari main dooboon ya na dooboon :D

Rajbir


shukriya Rajbir ....

likh dete hain hum kuch lafaz apne dil ki jubaan se
inhe bas aap yun hi padate jaaiye

doobo dete hain yadi yeh  bhi aapko khushi aur dard ke saaye mein
toh inmein doobane se na khud ko bachaaiye ... :D  :D
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2006, 02:28:54 AM »
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Wah Ranju ji!

Nasiba kya rang laya hai kisika,
Husn taras raha hai, woh kare izahar mahobat ka!

Na chum le woh tere mathe ko toh kahena,
Intazar hai, teri surat dekhe uske dil ka aina!

BENAM
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Dekha hai teri ankhon main izahar mahobat ka,
Rang laya hai nagama her mera teri ibadat ka!


bahut khub BeNam ji ............shukriya ....

bas gayi hai is dil ke aaiene mein ab tasveer unki
sirf unke  khyaalo se mera tasvur mehekata hai

chum lete hain hum apni hatheli ko
jab naam unka wahan hame dikhata hai

liye bethe hain hum bas ek aarzoo dil ki
dekhe ab kab uska dil mere dil ki jubaan padta hai
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2006, 05:10:31 AM »
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apne dil ke armaano per bas toh nahi hai mera
aaj ek baar tu baata de ki main tujhe pyaar karu ya na karu

saja rakhe hain meri aankho ne tere liye khawab kai
tu baata de ki main in khawabo mein rang bharu ya na bharu

kabhi aata hai tu mere dil ke kareeb ek saaya ban ke
kabhi dur chala jaata hai aise jaise koi leher chali jaaye sahil chhoo ke
tu baata de ki aaj main teri lehero ki rawaani banu ya na banu

teri khushbu se mehekete hain din raat mere
teri palko per bhi sajate hain kai sapane mere
tu baata de ki teri raato ki main mehek banu ya na banu

abhi is waqt mein yeh haqikat nahi ek afsaana hai
pal do pal hame milana hai fir kahi kho jaana hai
agar tu haan kahe toh teri zindagi ki sachaai banu ya na banu

bas ek baar baata de ki main tujhe pyaar karu ya na karu...



yeh nazm Sahir ji ke ek gaane se inspired hai...


Lajawaab Ranju..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2006, 05:12:19 AM »
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Wah Ranju ji!

Nasiba kya rang laya hai kisika,
Husn taras raha hai, woh kare izahar mahobat ka!

Na chum le woh tere mathe ko toh kahena,
Intazar hai, teri surat dekhe uske dil ka aina!

BENAM
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Dekha hai teri ankhon main izahar mahobat ka,
Rang laya hai nagama her mera teri ibadat ka!


Wah Andaaz hee alag hai aapka BeNam bhai......Really Fantastic
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2006, 05:16:37 AM »
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Kya batayein tujhe ab......
Aur kya khud ko Samjhana hai......

Mahobbat ki hai tujhse humne......
Toh marte dum talak isko Nibhana hai.....

Bhala kabhi Sarhadein bhi IShQ ko juda kya karengi......
Pehchan le mera naya Aks meri Yaad me hee tera Beeta Zamana hai......

Pyar karunga tujhse aur fakat IShQ me mujhe jal jana hai.....
Qurbaan tujhpar Jaan bhi apni phir na kehna tum thehro mujhe abhi laut ke jana hai...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2006, 06:43:25 AM »
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nice work ranjana,gaurav bhai,benaam ji & u to rajbir ji..........

 sayad yaadein rahengi dil ki dhadkan bankar
 per rukna to ek din dhadkan ko bhi hai sanam

.................@fahi@....................
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«Reply #12 on: August 27, 2006, 08:41:04 AM »
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Ranju ji and BeNam ji bahoot khoob.... Ranju ji app kamal ka likhati hai....
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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2006, 02:22:44 PM »
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nice work ranjana,gaurav bhai,benaam ji & you to rajbir ji..........

 sayad yaadein rahengi dil ki dhadkan bankar
 per rukna to ek din dhadkan ko bhi hai sanam

.................@fahi@....................


dil ki dhadkan toh ruk jaayegi
per tasveer teri meri aankho se mit na paayegi

dil ki baate khuda bhi toh samjhata hai
tujhse juda ho ke yeh rooh ek pal bhi chain na paayegi
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«Reply #14 on: August 27, 2006, 02:26:55 PM »
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Kya batayein tujhe ab......
Aur kya khud ko Samjhana hai......

Mahobbat ki hai tujhse humne......
Toh marte dum talak isko Nibhana hai.....

Bhala kabhi Sarhadein bhi IShQ ko juda kya karengi......
Pehchan le mera naya Aks meri Yaad me hee tera Beeta Zamana hai......

Pyar karunga tujhse aur fakat IShQ me mujhe jal jana hai.....
Qurbaan tujhpar Jaan bhi apni phir na kehna tum thehro mujhe abhi laut ke jana hai...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!


bahut khoob gaurav ........

in aankho mein kabhi chhip kar ke tum aa jaao
mere dil ki har baat ab tum nazaro se samajh jaao

har nazara yahan feeka hai tere bina
aaj is masum ki kuch toh rangeeni ban ke chaa jaao

na jaane kitni khwaishe.n mere dil mein dabi hai
mere likhe is khat ka jawab ban ke mere dil ka geet tum bhi gungnaao!!!
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