::Tu hi tu nazar aata hai::(for AMIT)

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«Reply #225 on: September 10, 2005, 02:16:03 PM »
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:oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops: Nidhu..........- Amit.........God bless...dos poems ver soooo touching n lovely nn..Hav no words Pals :oops: .......Just waana say...'meri ankh bhar aayi'................. :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:

{dedicating a fatichar shayeri tu my sweeti Nidhu Puzzled ! n amit glasses2 }

Pyar amaar rahen saada...
Taroon ki baarat ho saada..
khushiyon ki barsaat ho saada..
Rangeen saama ho saada...
us khuda se aaj dua mein kuch nahi maangungi mein..........
Ussne kab ka pura kiya hai aapna diya Waada :wink:
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«Reply #226 on: September 10, 2005, 03:06:17 PM »
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Quote from: "pyarikudi1983"
:oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops: Nidhu..........- Amit.........God bless...dos poems ver soooo touching n lovely nn..Hav no words Pals :oops: .......Just waana say...'meri ankh bhar aayi'................. :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:

{dedicating a fatichar shayeri tu my sweeti Nidhu Puzzled ! n amit glasses2 }

Pyar amaar rahen saada...
Taroon ki baarat ho saada..
khushiyon ki barsaat ho saada..
Rangeen saama ho saada...
us khuda se aaj dua mein kuch nahi maangungi mein..........
Ussne kab ka pura kiya hai aapna diya Waada :wink:
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lol, not fatichar shayari :p Puzzled !

it's so sweet of you, pyarikudi :D

Thanks !
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«Reply #227 on: September 12, 2005, 10:27:00 AM »
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thx waheed jii bohot accha likha hai appney

ap sabney bhi bohot accha likha hai
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«Reply #228 on: September 27, 2005, 05:00:59 PM »
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Thanx waheed,amit,sandhaya ji and sandeep and PK  Usual Smile .

Bohat acha likha hai waheed,ghazal,bhambhra and PK(mujhe to kisi angle se fatichar nahi lagi Puzzled ! infact its so sweet of u:) ).

Aaj bohat dino baad kuch likha hai tumhare liye amit,mood bohat acha thha na isliye :D :-

"Kya hai,kaise hai,kuch samajh nahi aata hai,
 par tere ehsaas se hi dil khush ho jaata hai,
 ek pal me itni khushiyan de dete ho tum mujhe,
 dooriyon ka ye ehsaas bohat mujhe sataata hai,
 tum meri zindagi me aisi khushi banke aaye ho,
 thham jaaye aise hi ye pal,dil chaahta hai,
 dua hai rab se tujhe har khushi main de sakoon,
 hadh se zyada tujhse mohabbat main kar sakoon,
 wafayein na badlengi rukh,wada hai ye mera,
 har janam tera saath de sakun,iraada hai mera,
 aaj meri ankhon me ek alag si chamak hai,
 tujhse jude khwaab hain,tu hi har taraf hai,
 tere saath ne aaj mujhe zindagi de di hai,
 itni khushi di hai tumne,maine zindagi jee li hai,
 na ab zindagi me kuch aur tamanna hai apni,
 bas tera saath rahe,bani rahe mohabbat apni,
 kami nahi duniya me duriyan paida karnewalon ki,
 jis tarah bohoton ne hame alag karne ki koshish ki,
 khushi hai mujhe har baar khilke ubhri ye mohabbat,
 vishwas me apne har pal aur bhi gehri hui ye chahat,
 rangon se saji,mehekti apni is chhoti si duniya me,
 har wo khushi hai jo milti nahi is badi si duniya me,
 paa liya hai maine aaj wo sab kuch teri mohabbat me,
 mushkilon se milta hai jo khuda ki ibaadat se........."
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«Reply #229 on: September 27, 2005, 05:19:04 PM »
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wowowow bahoot hi khoobsoorat likha hai nidhi!!!!!
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«Reply #230 on: September 27, 2005, 05:27:14 PM »
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Thank u sooo much Pooja ji :D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #231 on: September 27, 2005, 07:20:48 PM »
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omg nidhi...fine words!!! boht hi badhiya!!! keep writing i js luv readin ur shayri!!!
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«Reply #232 on: September 29, 2005, 06:30:35 AM »
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my pleasure dear,thanx a lot for reading and appreciating my words Usual Smile .
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«Reply #233 on: October 01, 2005, 04:41:59 AM »
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Thanx waheed,amit,sandhaya ji and sandeep and PK  Usual Smile .

Bohat acha likha hai waheed,ghazal,bhambhra and PK(mujhe to kisi angle se fatichar nahi lagi Puzzled ! infact its so sweet of you:) ).

Aaj bohat dino baad kuch likha hai tumhare liye amit,mood bohat acha thha na isliye :D :-

"Kya hai,kaise hai,kuch samajh nahi aata hai,
 par tere ehsaas se hi dil khush ho jaata hai,
 ek pal me itni khushiyan de dete ho tum mujhe,
 dooriyon ka ye ehsaas bohat mujhe sataata hai,
 tum meri zindagi me aisi khushi banke aaye ho,
 thham jaaye aise hi ye pal,dil chaahta hai,
 dua hai rab se tujhe har khushi main de sakoon,
 hadh se zyada tujhse mohabbat main kar sakoon,
 wafayein na badlengi rukh,wada hai ye mera,
 har janam tera saath de sakun,iraada hai mera,
 aaj meri ankhon me ek alag si chamak hai,
 tujhse jude khwaab hain,tu hi har taraf hai,
 tere saath ne aaj mujhe zindagi de di hai,
 itni khushi di hai tumne,maine zindagi jee li hai,
 na ab zindagi me kuch aur tamanna hai apni,
 bas tera saath rahe,bani rahe mohabbat apni,
 kami nahi duniya me duriyan paida karnewalon ki,
 jis tarah bohoton ne hame alag karne ki koshish ki,
 khushi hai mujhe har baar khilke ubhri ye mohabbat,
 vishwas me apne har pal aur bhi gehri hui ye chahat,
 rangon se saji,mehekti apni is chhoti si duniya me,
 har wo khushi hai jo milti nahi is badi si duniya me,
 paa liya hai maine aaj wo sab kuch teri mohabbat me,
 mushkilon se milta hai jo khuda ki ibaadat se........."


thank you so much nidhi, its beautifully expressed :D especially these lines :

" wafayein na badlengi rukh,wada hai ye mera,
 har janam tera saath de sakun,iraada hai mera, "




ab tumhari taareef mein jyada DIALOGUES to maarunga nahin  Puzzled !


teri mohabbat ne mujhe itni khushiyaan di hain,
tere aane se jindagi har pal khoobsoorat si lagti hai,
kuch aur nahin chaha kabhi tujhe chahne ke baad,
teri mohabbat mujhe khuda ki ibaadat si lagti hai......


keep writing, you're the BEST nidhi

btw, nice avatar  :oops: aur tumhari  saheli pagal kudi kahan rehti hai aajkal  Puzzled !
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«Reply #234 on: October 01, 2005, 05:49:46 PM »
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nice lines amit,

ajeeb hai ye mohobbat bada hi dilkash cheez hai pyaar
jaise phoolon ki khushbu chheen kar zindagi mein aayi ek bahaar
itni kashish bhari ismein kuch bhi mumkin hai yahaan
ek shaks lagne lage aapko jaise ho gaya mukammal sansaar
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«Reply #235 on: October 01, 2005, 09:06:23 PM »
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Waoooo Nidhi sis Kamaal kar ditta.....Too gud hearty(lucky u)
Sanya sis very true n nice.....
Keep writting all of u
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«Reply #236 on: October 01, 2005, 09:21:43 PM »
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thanx nikki... :hug:
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«Reply #237 on: October 01, 2005, 09:41:56 PM »
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:hug: welcome sis !!!!
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«Reply #238 on: October 02, 2005, 12:51:42 AM »
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Dear nidhi,
  actually i m new for this site but in whole site i like ur poem very much. I think i be your fan, Keep it up, All the Best[/i][/quote]
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«Reply #239 on: October 02, 2005, 06:14:51 PM »
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Thanx for liking it Amit glasses2 ,avatar pasand karne ka bhi shukriya aur meri saheli pagalkudi nahi pyarikudi Usual Smile hai Puzzled ! .Aur haan,tumne bhi bohat acha likha hai,thanx a lot :D .

Bohat khoob sanya and thanx a lot nikki sis Usual Smile .

Thanx Shashi ji,jo aapne meri poem padhi aur aapko pasand aayi,mujhe bohat khushi hai is baat ki,welcome 2 yoindia,enjoy ur stay here.Mujhse kahin zyada achche writers hain yahan,dheere dheere aap sabko jaan jaayenge,All the best 2 u 2 and once again thanx a lot Usual Smile .

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      kaisa ye ishq ka khumaar chhayaa hai mujhpar,
      dil karta hai zindagi bitaa dun teri ek nazar par."
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