::Tu hi tu nazar aata hai::(for AMIT) -Panna 6:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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«Reply #75 on: May 14, 2005, 11:40:13 AM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

Wow! Sandhya, very beautiful lines once again. Very well done...

Keep writing! Usual Smile

very well written fakharenaveed too.

One more for you, nidhi :

thaama hai jo haath ek baar, to kahin chhod na dena.
mujhse muh pher na lena, is dil ko mere tod na dena.
todna na vishwas ko mere, maine is dil mein tumhein basaya hai.
aaj jis taraf bhi dekha hai, bas tumhein hi paaya hai.

maine har pal ko jiya hai, tumhein apna maan ke.
kya kuch nahi diya hai, tumhaare saath ne mujhe.
tumhaare pyaar ne mujhse is kadar apnapan jataya hai,
aaj jis taraf bhi dekha hai, bas tumhein hi paaya hai.

tum bin jeevan soona sangeet, adhoore hain sab sapne.
aakar mujhe bahon mein bhar lo, mujhe seene se laga lo apne.
tumhaare ishq ka khumaar mujhpar is kadar chhaya hai,
aaj jis taraf bhi dekha hai, bas tumhein hi paaya hai...

not very good, but Puzzled !

you know what i mean, lol.

bahut achhe ..HEARTY , NIDHI ,SANDHYA N NAVED..................


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«Reply #76 on: May 14, 2005, 12:02:53 PM »

Quote from: "bond"

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

Wow! Sandhya, very beautiful lines once again. Very well done...

Keep writing! Usual Smile

you know what i mean, lol.

bahut achhe ..HEARTY , NIDHI ,SANDHYA N NAVED..................

sukhriya bond ji ............


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«Reply #77 on: May 14, 2005, 12:15:32 PM »

Wah! Bohat khoob Amit, Sandhaya & Naveed........


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«Reply #78 on: May 14, 2005, 09:18:58 PM »

Thanx Bond and Aryaan

DIL KI LAGI NE KAR DIYA DONO KO BE-KARAAR
DOHRA KE DASTANE MOHOBAAT PHIR EK BAAR
MAJNU HUMIEN AUR AAP KO LAILA BANA DIYA
JUB KHUCH NA BAN SAKE TO TAMAASHA BANA DIYA


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«Reply #79 on: May 17, 2005, 06:55:06 AM »

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very beautiful lines, sandhya. especially first two lines are very well written. Usual Smile

keep writing. sad to see you're not online today. sad5

lol nidhi, jaisa bhi hun, tumhara hi hoon

anyways, one more for you...

ek dooje ke liye jiyein hum, bas pyar hi pyar ho,
saagar se bhi gehra, aisa humaara pyaar ho...

hothon pe ho hansi, aur palkein ho jhuki,
kaali ghata ho aur ho barsaat ka mausam.
tumhaara haath ho mere haath mein,
sang bheegein barsaat mein, main aur tum.

ek dooje mein kho jayein is kadar,
tod dein is duniya ki sab rasmein.
milke bitayein do pal ki ye jindagi,
nibhayein pyaar ke vaade aur kasmein.

sang bitaane ko ek dooje ke, waqt beshumaar ho,
saagar se bhi gehra, aisa humaara pyaar ho...

baithein hum tum ek dooje mein khoye,
jaise jindagi ho ek doosre ki saugaat.
baithein hum tum bahon mein daale bahein,
humaare sang ho sitaaron ki baaraat.

khilke phoolon si, mehke humaare jindagi,
humaare hothon par ho ek dooje ka naam.
sach ho jayein humaare sapne sunehre,
sang sang beetein humaare subah aur shaam.

hum tum hon, aur khushiyon se bhara sansaar ho,
saagar se bhi gehra, aisa humaara pyaar ho... :hug:

wow.....gr8 amit,Thanx a lot Usual Smile

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"Saagar se bhi gehra,aisa apna pyaar hai,
tu saath hai jo,zindagi ye abaad hai....,
teri har baat par mujhe hota naaz hai,
khushkismat hun main,jo tu mera pyar hai."

Excellent work SANDHAYA & Naveed.
Thanx Bond.


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«Reply #80 on: May 17, 2005, 06:57:29 AM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

Wow! Sandhya, very beautiful lines once again. Very well done...

Keep writing! Usual Smile

you know what i mean, lol.

Acchi to hai,so nice,i really liked it a lot.

One more for u:- :oops:

"Chodna bhi chahoon agar to chod nahi sakti,
tujhe khud se door main ab dekh nahi sakti,
kya reh gaya hai tere siva meri zindagi me.,
tujhe ab main kabhi bhi bhool nahi sakti...,

todna hi hota agar dil tumhara...,
to apne dil me na basaati tumhe..,
tod k tumhara dil dard to mujhe hi hoga,
khud to chot na pohanchaati main,

apni har saans me tumhe sanjoya hai..,
apne har khwab me tumhe sajaaya hai,
saanso aur khwabon ka tumse rishta na hota,
toh tumse rishtaa naa banaati kabhi..,

har taraf aaj maine bhi tumhe hi paaya hai....,
tumhare hi pyar me to jeevan mera samaya hai,
pyaar me tumhare maine zindagi apni paayi hai,
kuch pal ka intezar......kuch pal ki judaai hai,

sach honge sapne apne vishwas hai mujhe,
teri tanhaai,tere dard ka ehsaas hai mujhe,
saare jahan ki khushiyaan hain tere liye...,
is jahan ko ek din main bataa doongi...
....tum bane ho sirf aur sirf mere liye."


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«Reply #81 on: May 17, 2005, 08:00:29 AM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

Wow! Sandhya, very beautiful lines once again. Very well done...

Keep writing! Usual Smile

you know what i mean, lol.

Acchi to hai,so nice,i really liked it a lot.

One more for you:- :oops:

"Chodna bhi chahoon agar to chod nahi sakti,
tujhe khud se door main ab dekh nahi sakti,
kya reh gaya hai tere siva meri zindagi me.,
tujhe ab main kabhi bhi bhool nahi sakti...,

todna hi hota agar dil tumhara...,
to apne dil me na basaati tumhe..,
tod k tumhara dil dard to mujhe hi hoga,
khud to chot na pohanchaati main,

apni har saans me tumhe sanjoya hai..,
apne har khwab me tumhe sajaaya hai,
saanso aur khwabon ka tumse rishta na hota,
toh tumse rishtaa naa banaati kabhi..,

har taraf aaj maine bhi tumhe hi paaya hai....,
tumhare hi pyar me to jeevan mera samaya hai,
pyaar me tumhare maine zindagi apni paayi hai,
kuch pal ka intezar......kuch pal ki judaai hai,

sach honge sapne apne vishwas hai mujhe,
teri tanhaai,tere dard ka ehsaas hai mujhe,
saare jahan ki khushiyaan hain tere liye...,
is jahan ko ek din main bataa doongi...
....tum bane ho sirf aur sirf mere liye."

wow excellent written.............nidhi..............heart..... ....................


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«Reply #82 on: May 17, 2005, 08:05:32 AM »

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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

Wow! Sandhya, very beautiful lines once again. Very well done...

Keep writing! Usual Smile

you know what i mean, lol.

wow excellent written.............nidhi..............heart..... ....................

thank u waheed Usual Smile


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«Reply #83 on: May 17, 2005, 08:11:31 AM »

hmmmmmmmm ur always welcome..........................................


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«Reply #84 on: May 17, 2005, 09:34:03 AM »

nice Heart and nidhi .......good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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«Reply #85 on: May 17, 2005, 12:08:10 PM »

thank you everyone, waheed, thelostworld, aryaan. thanks a lot Usual Smile

xxx

about your poem nidhi, it's so beautifully written. sabhi lines mein tumhara pyar, aur mujh par vishwas jhalakta hai. v.v.v. good poem! thanks infact, for so much sincere love and affection Kiss

something for you, aaj dopahar mein likhi hai, coffee peete hue, lol. kaisi lagi batana.

tumhaare pyaar ne aaj mujhko di hain,
is jahaan ki saari khushiyaan...
mere jeevan ki aakhiri saans tak,
tumko bhool paana nahi hoga aasaan...

tumhaare pyar ne jataya hai jo apnapan,
kaafi hai ye jindagi jeene ke liye...
ek din jindagi tum khushiyon se bhar dogi,
philhaal ye aansu hi sahi peene ke liye...

apna sab kuch maana hai tumhein,
doosra hissa samjha hai tumhein apna...
hadh se bhi jyada chaha hai tumko,
aankhon mein basaya hai, jaise ek sapna...

tumhein hi paaya hai har disha mein,
deewanapan mujhpe chaya hai is kadar...
jab bhi dekha hai aaine mein maine,
tumhaara hi chehra aaya hai nazar...

tumhaare pyaar mein is tarah khoya hun,
tumse door jaun bhi, to jaun kahan...
dil mein tum bas gayi ho aise,
jidhar bhi jaun, tumhein paun wahan...

kabhi lagta hai ke tum yahin ho,
jism ke nahi, to dil ke paas hi sahi...
kabhi lagta hai tum door kahin ho,
tum nahin, tumhaara ehsaas hi sahi...

jab se tum meri jindagi mein aayi ho,
sang laayi ho apne, khushiyon ki bahar...
tum bin ik pal bhi chain nahin ab,
ye dil dekhne laga hai sapne hazaar...

ye jindagi tum bin jindagi nahin hoti,
saath jo tumhaara kabhi choot jaata...
bikhar jaate sab sunehre khwab mere,
ye dil mera maano phir se toot jaata...

meri jindagi mein yunhi rehna tum,
jaise raat ke sang rehta hai din...
tum se hi mera sab kuch hai,
ye jindagi meri, adhoori hai tum bin...

nahi chahiye is jahan se kuch bhi mujhe,
bas tum mil jao, khwahish hai yahi...
yunhi chahunga tumhein main hamesha,
tum hi to ho meri jindagi, "meri nidhi".

ab ye mat kehna, sari poems coffee peete hue hi likha karo Puzzled !


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«Reply #86 on: May 17, 2005, 02:51:44 PM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

thank you everyone, waheed, thelostworld, aryaan. thanks a lot Usual Smile

xxx

about your poem nidhi, it's so beautifully written. sabhi lines mein tumhara pyar, aur mujh par vishwas jhalakta hai. v.v.v. good poem! thanks infact, for so much sincere love and affection Kiss

Thank u lostworld Usual Smile

Excellent amit,so heart touching words,very very nice.Sab to tumne keh diya,ab main kya kahoon:roll:

Another one for u:-

"Saagar si gehraayi hai,aasmaan si oonchaai hai,
tere pyar me dilbar maine zindagi apni paayi hai,
tumne hi to sikhaya hai mujhe kya hai ye pyar,
tumse seekha maine kise kehte hain aetbaar...,
tere pyaar ki madhoshi is kadar mujhpe chhai hai,
jaanti hoon tum door ho mujhse aaj bohat.......,
mera saath deti lekin harwaqt teri parchhai hai,
ye pyar hi to hai tumhara jispe jee rahi hoon..,
bhagwan se pehle ab tujhe main yaad karti hoon,
wo khuda bhi tujhe dekh ye jaan chuka hai...,
kaise nibhaate hain pyar,kise kehte khudaai hain,
tere masoom chehre ka tez hai meri in ankho mein,
wo roshan aasmaan tak pheeka lagta hai raato mein,
khiza ke phool bhi tujhe dekh machal uthte hain,
tere intezaar me ham kabse aise hi baithe hain..,
dil me pyaar ke phool aise khile hain aaj.........,
mujhe lagta hai mere haath me hai aaj ye sansaar."


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«Reply #87 on: May 17, 2005, 07:20:06 PM »

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Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

thank you everyone, waheed, thelostworld, aryaan. thanks a lot Usual Smile

xxx

about your poem nidhi, it's so beautifully written. sabhi lines mein tumhara pyar, aur mujh par vishwas jhalakta hai. v.v.v. good poem! thanks infact, for so much sincere love and affection Kiss

Thank u lostworld Usual Smile


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«Reply #88 on: May 18, 2005, 06:00:25 AM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

thank you everyone, waheed, thelostworld, aryaan. thanks a lot Usual Smile

xxx

about your poem nidhi, it's so beautifully written. sabhi lines mein tumhara pyar, aur mujh par vishwas jhalakta hai. v.v.v. good poem! thanks infact, for so much sincere love and affection Kiss

Thank you lostworld Usual Smile

Excellent amit,so heart touching words,very very nice.Sab to tumne keh diya,ab main kya kahoon:roll:

Another one for you:-

"Saagar si gehraayi hai,aasmaan si oonchaai hai,
tere pyar me dilbar maine zindagi apni paayi hai,
tumne hi to sikhaya hai mujhe kya hai ye pyar,
tumse seekha maine kise kehte hain aetbaar...,
tere pyaar ki madhoshi is kadar mujhpe chhai hai,
jaanti hoon tum door ho mujhse aaj bohat.......,
mera saath deti lekin harwaqt teri parchhai hai,
ye pyar hi to hai tumhara jispe jee rahi hoon..,
bhagwan se pehle ab tujhe main yaad karti hoon,
wo khuda bhi tujhe dekh ye jaan chuka hai...,
kaise nibhaate hain pyar,kise kehte khudaai hain,
tere masoom chehre ka tez hai meri in ankho mein,
wo roshan aasmaan tak pheeka lagta hai raato mein,
khiza ke phool bhi tujhe dekh machal uthte hain,
tere intezaar me ham kabse aise hi baithe hain..,
dil me pyaar ke phool aise khile hain aaj.........,
mujhe lagta hai mere haath me hai aaj ye sansaar."

wow! that's so beautiful! . now won't i feel so special?

thank you so much nidhi :hug: so much! Kiss


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«Reply #89 on: May 18, 2005, 06:29:01 AM »

for you nidhi... Usual Smile

tumhari yaad mein tumhein dhoondti har pal nazar,
wo masoom saa chehraa apna, dikhaa jao na ek din...
sadiyon se tumhein dil se pukara hai maine,
apne dil ki baat mujhe bhi, sunaa jao na ek din...

tumhaare sang jeevan bitana... meri hai khwahish,
mere sang reh kar meri is ruh ko mehka jao na ek din...
tumhaare bin ye jindagi hai bas kuch hi pal ki,
main tumhaare liye hun banaa, ye dikha jao na ek din...

bechain ye dil tarse pal pal pyaar ko tumhaare,
apne hothon se wo pyar ki bahar, barsa jao na ek din...
is mehki fiza mein meri khwahishein hain bikhri,
saare jahaan ki khushiyan dene, aa jao na ek din...

jindagi bhar saath nibhaane ka wada kiya jo tumne,
sang jeene marne ka wo wada, nibha jao na ek din...
dil ka dil se rishta, dil mein basa naam tumhara,
tum bhi apne dil ki har baat, bata jao na ek din...

tum bin jindagi ki sab khushiyan hain adhoori,
har khushi ko meri jindagi mein, basa jao na ek din...
tumhari aakhon se dekhe, jo khwab ab tak maine,
meri palkon pe wo sunehre khwab, saja jao na ek din...

har phool mein basi jaise tumhaari hi khushboo,
meri bagiya mein bhi ek phool khila jao ek din...
har sitaare mein hai tumhari choodiyon ki chamak,
apne haathon ki wo choodiyan, khanka jao ek din...


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