**Tu jaan meri **

by vimmi singh on February 06, 2013, 07:38:11 AM
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Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Ye dil tera , tu maan le

Har ghadi ye dil sune
Aahaten , teri aahaten
Awaaz sunu teri har pahar
Kaano me ghulti rahe

Tere paas hun, jab door hun
Apne darmiyan kaise faasle
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Mera ishq ab pahchaan le

Khalne lagi ab dooriyan
Mere paas aa, mujhe thaam le
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Ye dil tera , tu maan le
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2013, 07:44:48 AM »
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waah waah bahut hee khoobsoorat
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2013, 07:45:58 AM »
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 Applause

  nice !
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2013, 08:10:05 AM »
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nice lines
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2013, 08:20:23 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on February 06, 2013, 07:44:48 AM
waah waah bahut hee khoobsoorat

dhanywaad saini sir ji......  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2013, 08:50:16 AM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on February 06, 2013, 07:38:11 AM
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Ye dil tera , tu maan le

Har ghadi ye dil sune
Aahaten , teri aahaten
Awaaz sunu teri har pahar
Kaano me ghulti rahe

Tere paas hun, jab door hun
Apne darmiyan kaise faasle
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Mera ishq ab pahchaan le

Khalne lagi ab dooriyan
Mere paas aa, mujhe thaam le
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Ye dil tera , tu maan le



very good composition,ma'am
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2013, 08:53:59 AM »
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bohutkhub vimi ji bohut pyar bhari rachna hai yeh
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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2013, 09:13:27 AM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on February 06, 2013, 07:38:11 AM
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Ye dil tera , tu maan le

Har ghadi ye dil sune
Aahaten , teri aahaten
Awaaz sunu teri har pahar
Kaano me ghulti rahe

Tere paas hun, jab door hun
Apne darmiyan kaise faasle
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Mera ishq ab pahchaan le

Khalne lagi ab dooriyan
Mere paas aa, mujhe thaam le
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Ye dil tera , tu maan le


waah bohat khoob vimmi ji ,......bohat c daad,.......
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«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2013, 09:32:50 AM »
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Bohat Khub!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2013, 10:58:41 AM »
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Very very nice lines.
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«Reply #10 on: February 06, 2013, 11:42:26 AM »
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beautiful lines vimmi jee
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«Reply #11 on: February 06, 2013, 12:15:33 PM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on February 06, 2013, 07:38:11 AM
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Ye dil tera , tu maan le

Har ghadi ye dil sune
Aahaten , teri aahaten
Awaaz sunu teri har pahar
Kaano me ghulti rahe

Tere paas hun, jab door hun
Apne darmiyan kaise faasle
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Mera ishq ab pahchaan le

Khalne lagi ab dooriyan
Mere paas aa, mujhe thaam le
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Ye dil tera , tu maan le



very soft very delicate..................!
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«Reply #12 on: February 06, 2013, 12:53:48 PM »
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Vimmy Jee Aadaab!


Behad pyaare aur khoobsurat ahsaasoN ko khoob lafz diye haiN aapne..
bada achcha kalaam rahaa aapka... Usual Smile

Bahut khoob jee.. Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhati rahiye... aati rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: February 06, 2013, 12:55:02 PM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on February 06, 2013, 07:38:11 AM
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Ye dil tera , tu maan le

Har ghadi ye dil sune
Aahaten , teri aahaten
Awaaz sunu teri har pahar
Kaano me ghulti rahe

Tere paas hun, jab door hun
Apne darmiyan kaise faasle
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Mera ishq ab pahchaan le

Khalne lagi ab dooriyan
Mere paas aa, mujhe thaam le
Tu jaan meri , tu jaan le
Ye dil tera , tu maan le

Woow very very romantic shayari likha hai aapne vimmi jee. bahut bahut daad
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«Reply #14 on: February 06, 2013, 02:04:30 PM »
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bahut khoob bahut khoob
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