Tu Mujhe Mai Tujhme Basta Hoon...!!..Miru

by Miru;;;; on March 28, 2013, 08:02:58 AM
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Teri zindagi ke sabse hasin khab jab mere sath hogi,
Jab teri aankhe mere aankhon ke pass hogi,

Sab puchenge sabalat me riste apni,
Tu mujhme mai tujhme basta hu aaisi jajbat hogi,

Kya kasis hai SANAM in hawaon main,
Aesi meri bhi sare khayalat hogi,

Teri zindagi ke sabse hasin khab jab mere sath hogi,
jab teri aankhe mere aankhon ke pass hogi,

Pighal rahe honge HUM TUM apni madhoshi main,
jab apni sari hasraton ki barsat hogi,

Kitane din bite Hai judayi main,
Inki bhi kuch khayalat hogi,

Teri zingadi ke sabse hasin khab jab mere sath hogi,
Jab teri aankhe mere aankhon ke pass hogi..!!


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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2013, 10:06:12 AM »
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acha likha hai ek do lafz mein thodi problem hai . Jaise jis ashar mein pighalna hoga wahan barsaat nai aag word chahiye . Baaki apne kuch aur socha to .may be theek hoga . Plz dont mind just advice
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bahut khoob...
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2013, 01:11:56 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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So Nice.
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2013, 06:44:39 PM »
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bahut khoob
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut khoob ji. dheron daad.
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