tu Na Mile Kya rakkhu'n mai

by arifuddin on September 21, 2010, 02:02:19 PM
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Apni Mulakato'n ka Hisaab Na Rakkhu'n
Jisme Naam Naho tera Qareeb Wo Kitaab Na rakkhu'n

Shab Me Teri Zulfo'n Se Khelu'n aur HaarjAau'n Mai
Tere Shabaabse Badhkar Koi Sharaab Na Rakkhu'n

Tu Mujhko Yaad Kare to Chehra Khil Uthe tera
Kabhi Apni Sifat ko Tujh me Kharaab Na Rakkhu'n

Tu Kaliya'n Kahe Aur Me Phool likhdu Unhe
Tere Sawalo'n K Koi Adhure Jawaab Na Rakkhu'n

Koi Puche Dunya Me Takleef Kya Kya Hai ?
Tere Intezar se Badhkar Koi Azaab Na Likhu'n

            sad10
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2010, 05:00:41 PM »
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Quote from: arifuddin on September 21, 2010, 02:02:19 PM
Apni Mulakato'n ka Hisaab Na Rakkhu'n
Jisme Naam Naho tera Qareeb Wo Kitaab Na rakkhu'n
Very Touchyyy

Shab Me Teri Zulfo'n Se Khelu'n aur HaarjAau'n Mai
Tere Shabaabse Badhkar Koi Sharaab Na Rakkhu'n
nice one ..

Tu Mujhko Yaad Kare to Chehra Khil Uthe tera
Kabhi Apni Sifat ko Tujh me Kharaab Na Rakkhu'n
hehehhe ... good one

Tu Kaliya'n Kahe Aur Me Phool likhdu Unhe
Tere Sawalo'n K Koi Adhure Jawaab Na Rakkhu'n
wow ... nice one par .. bahot se sawaal adhure hi rahe jaate hai ...

Koi Puche Dunya Me Takleef Kya Kya Hai ?
Tere Intezar se Badhkar Koi Azaab Na Likhu'n
Mind Blowing ....puri rachanaa mai sab se jyaada ye sher pasand aaya hume .. Dil ko Chhoo gaya .. ye sher dil ke bahot kareeb raha .. Amazinggggg .. just too good .... Thumbs UP

            sad10

Ji .. bahot hi achchha likha hai aap ne .. aap ki rachanaa ke ehsaas dil ke bahot kareeb rahe ... itane pyaare dil chhoo lene waale shabdo se ru-baroo karwaane ke liye aap ka shukariya ... yunhi likhate rahiye

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aap ki Dost: Gudia

Khuda Hafiz, Jay Ambe
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2010, 07:55:42 PM »
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Aadaab Arif Sahab..!

Shayad aapko paheli martaba padh raheN hai...
Aapki kalaam kafi achchi lagi hume.. Daad kabool kijiye..

Chaliye aapki kalaam dil se dekhte hai... Usual Smile         


Quote from: arifuddin on September 21, 2010, 02:02:19 PM
Apni Mulakato'n ka Hisaab Na Rakkhu'n
Jisme Naam Naho tera Qareeb Wo Kitaab Na rakkhu'n

Behad khoob kaha hai janab Daad bahut umdaa.. Usual Smile         


Shab Me Teri Zulfo'n Se Khelu'n aur HaarjAau'n Mai
Tere Shabaabse Badhkar Koi Sharaab Na Rakkhu'n

Sher ka khayaal behad khoob hai janab aadaab, par rabte meiN hume kuch thik nahi lag raha hai...           


Tu Mujhko Yaad Kare to Chehra Khil Uthe tera
Kabhi Apni Sifat ko Tujh me Kharaab Na Rakkhu'n

Hmm achcha sher hai bahtu khoob daad.. Usual Smile         


Tu Kaliya'n Kahe Aur Me Phool likhdu Unhe
Tere Sawalo'n K Koi Adhure Jawaab Na Rakkhu'n

Waah kia baat hai janab behad umdaa daad hi daad... Usual Smile           


Koi Puche Dunya Me Takleef Kya Kya Hai ?
Tere Intezar se Badhkar Koi Azaab Na Likhu'n

Kia baat hai janab... Dil se daad bahut khoob... behad umdaa... Usual Smile daad daad daad         


            sad10

Is behad umdaa kalaam per humari dil se daad o mubarakbad kabool kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush o aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2010, 08:06:20 PM »
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Gudiya Coment padhne me bhi Maza Aaraha hai
Bohat Bohat shukriya

Quote from: Gudiaa on September 21, 2010, 05:00:41 PM
Ji .. bahot hi achchha likha hai aap ne .. aap ki rachanaa ke ehsaas dil ke bahot kareeb rahe ... itane pyaare dil chhoo lene waale shabdo se ru-baroo karwaane ke liye aap ka shukariya ... yunhi likhate rahiye

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aap ki Dost: Gudia

Khuda Hafiz, Jay Ambe
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2010, 08:11:58 PM »
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parwaaz bhai, pehle is Khubsurti se Padhne  ka Shukrya
Aur mai shayer nahi hu,Yuhi Kisi ko yaad Karliya jata hai aur likhdiya jaata  hai.....

Aapne kaha k ek sher me Raabta Samj hnahi Aaya, uske Baad mujhe Laga Yaar Ha'n sahi hai Iske liye Mafi chaahta hu

InshaAllah next time durst likhun ga. Padhne k liye shukrya janaab thanks Jaza kumullah

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 21, 2010, 07:55:42 PM
Aadaab Arif Sahab..!

Shayad aapko paheli martaba padh raheN hai...
Aapki kalaam kafi achchi lagi hume.. Daad kabool kijiye..

Chaliye aapki kalaam dil se dekhte hai... Usual Smile          


Is behad umdaa kalaam per humari dil se daad o mubarakbad kabool kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush o aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile          
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2010, 08:20:57 PM »
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Quote from: arifuddin on September 21, 2010, 08:11:58 PM
parvez bhai, pehle is Khubsurti se Padhne  ka Shukrya
Aur mai shayer nahi hu,Yuhi Kisi ko yaad Karliya jata hai aur likhdiya jaata  hai.....

Aapne kaha k ek sher me Raabta Samj hnahi Aaya, uske Baad mujhe Laga Yaar Ha'n sahi hai Iske liye Mafi chaahta hu

InshaAllah next time durst likhun ga. Padhne k liye shukrya janaab thanks Jaza kumullah

Aarif Sahab Aadaab!

Jee hum mazrrat chahte hai... Hum bhi koi shayar nahi hai... Bus aise hi tabadla e khayaal se sikhte rahte hai...

Aapke sher meiN behad gehra rabta hai... par misre ek dusre se alag hi rah raheN hai isliye hume aisa laga...

Aap likhate rahiye, behad umdaa likhate hai aap..
Aate rahiye....
Khush o aabaad rahiye.... Usual Smile
Khuda hafez..... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2010, 08:45:37 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 21, 2010, 08:20:57 PM
Aarif Sahab Aadaab!

Jee hum mazrrat chahte hai... Hum bhi koi shayar nahi hai... Bus aise hi tabadla e khayaal se sikhte rahte hai...

Aapke sher meiN behad gehra rabta hai... par misre ek dusre se alag hi rah raheN hai isliye hume aisa laga...

Aap likhate rahiye, behad umdaa likhate hai aap..
Aate rahiye....
Khush o aabaad rahiye.... Usual Smile
Khuda hafez..... Usual Smile         


parwaaz bhai Aaap jaise Azizo'n ka sath hoga to zaroor kuch na kuch sikhne ko milega inshaAllah umeeh hai Aap sath honge

Waise bohat dino baad yoindia Aana huva hai,
ek kalaam padha aur aapko dekha waha Aapke coment padhe laga yar chalo kuch maibhi likhta hu bas kisi ko yaad kiya likhdiya

Parwaaz bhai shukrya umeed hai ainda aap yunhi samjhate rahenge
Jaza KAllahu Khair
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2010, 06:17:17 AM »
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very nice bro, bhout pyari shayari hai..!!!! Applause
 sad10
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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2010, 06:40:39 AM »
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Bujhi Hui Shama Se
               Roshani Ki Arzoo Kya Karte Ho,

Na Mumkin Mohabbat ka
               Intezaar Kya Karte Ho,

Chode Hue Mom Ki Tarah
                Tumhara Pyar Adhura Reh Jayega,

Tho Phir Kisi Shama Se
                Mohabbat Kya Karte Ho..
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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2010, 08:09:15 AM »
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arif sahab bahut khoob bahut sundar likha he apne

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