Tu rakeeboN ki janib sarakti rahi

by harashmahajan on March 09, 2008, 04:06:45 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 10, 2008, 07:21:25 PM »
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Bhot bohot shukriya Harash, is taareef ke aage hum to sharmsaar ho gaye hain...  Dard likhne main maahir to nahin, par hume dard likhna achcha lagta hai..Khumar-e-ishq likhen to usmain bhi kahin na kahin dard chalak hi jata hai !

Aapne bohot hi achcha likha hai !!



Chhaar lafz keh gaye wo mohabbat bhare
Aur hum raat bhar khwaab bunte rahe

Jaane kitne samundar the in aankhon main
Ashk behte rahe, aur wo chunte rahe !!

NahiN talat ji...sharamsaar kyuiN?....aapko fakra hona chaiye ke aapne dard ko apni kalam  se apne anjaam  tak pahoonchaya hai..Dard likhti ho.....tabhi jawaab de lete ho......Verna Dard ko likhna  bahoot mushqil hai ......Mujhe dard likhte arsa beet gaya.......our shayad Dard ke soudagar hi haiN....HameiN  toh baaki sab murda parasti hi lagti hai Talat ji........Ek baar phir shukriyaa

Hamne mana ki JazboN se hi shayar ki hasti hai
Dard liye Goomte haiN  phir  bhi yahaaN masti hai
Wafa mohabbat, pyaar our qurbani ka hum kya kareiN
Ye khayaloN ki nahiN,lagta hai murda parastoN ki basti hai.
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«Reply #16 on: March 10, 2008, 07:28:12 PM »
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Shukriya pooja ji......

Quote from: Pooja on March 10, 2008, 03:00:46 PM
bahoot khoob Harsh and Talat!!!
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«Reply #17 on: March 11, 2008, 12:41:04 PM »
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Quote from: harashmahajan on March 10, 2008, 07:21:25 PM

NahiN talat ji...sharamsaar kyuiN?....aapko fakra hona chaiye ke aapne dard ko apni kalam  se apne anjaam  tak pahoonchaya hai..Dard likhti ho.....tabhi jawaab de lete ho......Verna Dard ko likhna  bahoot mushqil hai ......Mujhe dard likhte arsa beet gaya.......our shayad Dard ke soudagar hi haiN....HameiN  toh baaki sab murda parasti hi lagti hai Talat ji........Ek baar phir shukriyaa

Hamne mana ki JazboN se hi shayar ki hasti hai
Dard liye Goomte haiN  phir  bhi yahaaN masti hai
Wafa mohabbat, pyaar our qurbani ka hum kya kareiN
Ye khayaloN ki nahiN,lagta hai murda parastoN ki basti hai.
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Bohot bohot shukriya Harash...!! Usual Smile

Ek baar phir se bohot khoob...!  Applause

Khyaalon main hain veerane, nazar yunhi bhatakti hai
Ghum ke saaye odhe hain yoon, khushi door chalti hai
Koi shikwa nahin humko, na gila hai apni taqdeer se
Pooche koi to kehte hain, ye aankh yunhi barasti hai !!! tearyeyed
 
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Shikha12
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«Reply #18 on: March 11, 2008, 12:52:51 PM »
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Very Nice Work Harsh, Sayyid and Talat...
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punam
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«Reply #19 on: March 11, 2008, 01:06:10 PM »
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sab bahot hi acha likhe..
Harsh ji, Sayyid ji and Talat di...
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«Reply #20 on: March 11, 2008, 04:07:53 PM »
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harsh.,........this poem is amazing..........
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Roja
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«Reply #21 on: March 11, 2008, 04:11:17 PM »
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wah sab k sab bahut khoob likhe hai
Harash ji,Talat sis, siyyad ji
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #22 on: March 11, 2008, 06:45:52 PM »
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Adaab talat ji ,shikha ji,arawaynuts ji, punam ji our Roja ji.....maiN aap sabhi ka  mamnoon hoon ki aapne ....is tehreer peer tawazzo  di....Shukriyaa^h...


Talat wrote....

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Bohot bohot shukriya Harash...!!

Ek baar phir se bohot khoob...! 


Khyaalon main hain veerane, nazar yunhi bhatakti hai
Ghum ke saaye odhe hain yoon, khushi door chalti hai
Koi shikwa nahin humko, na gila hai apni taqdeer se
Pooche koi to kehte hain, ye aankh yunhi barasti hai !!! 


Ek behtareen soch hai tumhari Talat  ji....Ashq bahate bhi ho our chhupaate bhi ho...waah....Lagta hai Dard ka kaaro-baar khoob chal nikla  hai....meri taraf se daad kabool kareiN......

Apke sher ko samarpit ek sher talat  ji.........

KyuiN  saaye se  bhi ashqoN ko chhupate ho tum
Rote ho toh kyuiN charagoN ko bhujaate ho  tum
Kutchh kehne ko bhi aaj kutchh nahiN bacha yahaN
Dil se chahte ho toh kyuiN ashqoN ko sajate ho tum


Harash
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Pooja
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«Reply #23 on: March 11, 2008, 06:51:42 PM »
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bahoot khoob Talat aor Harsh ji!!
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #24 on: March 11, 2008, 07:00:34 PM »
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Bahoot bahoot shukriya Pooja  ji.....
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«Reply #25 on: March 11, 2008, 10:40:07 PM »
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Thanks a lot Shikha, Punam, Roja and Pooja Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: March 11, 2008, 10:56:30 PM »
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Quote from: harashmahajan on March 11, 2008, 06:45:52 PM

Ek behtareen soch hai tumhari Talat  ji....Ashq bahate bhi ho our chhupaate bhi ho...waah....Lagta hai Dard ka kaaro-baar khoob chal nikla  hai....meri taraf se daad kabool kareiN......

Apke sher ko samarpit ek sher talat  ji.........

KyuiN  saaye se  bhi ashqoN ko chhupate ho tum
Rote ho toh kyuiN charagoN ko bhujaate ho  tum
Kutchh kehne ko bhi aaj kutchh nahiN bacha yahaN
Dil se chahte ho toh kyuiN ashqoN ko sajate ho tum


Harash
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Zarranawazi ka bohot bohot shukriya Harash Usual Smile

Saaye ko jism se door hua dekha hai
Phoolon se aksar khushbu ko juda dekha hai
Dard ki tanhaiyon main ek hum hi to nahin yahan
Taaron ke beech aasman main, chaand tanha dekha hai
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«Reply #27 on: March 12, 2008, 01:42:31 AM »
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Quote from: Talat on March 11, 2008, 12:41:04 PM
Quote from: harashmahajan on March 10, 2008, 07:21:25 PM

NahiN talat ji...sharamsaar kyuiN?....aapko fakra hona chaiye ke aapne dard ko apni kalam  se apne anjaam  tak pahoonchaya hai..Dard likhti ho.....tabhi jawaab de lete ho......Verna Dard ko likhna  bahoot mushqil hai ......Mujhe dard likhte arsa beet gaya.......our shayad Dard ke soudagar hi haiN....HameiN  toh baaki sab murda parasti hi lagti hai Talat ji........Ek baar phir shukriyaa

Hamne mana ki JazboN se hi shayar ki hasti hai
Dard liye Goomte haiN  phir  bhi yahaaN masti hai
Wafa mohabbat, pyaar our qurbani ka hum kya kareiN
Ye khayaloN ki nahiN,lagta hai murda parastoN ki basti hai.
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Bohot bohot shukriya Harash...!! Usual Smile

Ek baar phir se bohot khoob...!  Applause

Khyaalon main hain veerane, nazar yunhi bhatakti hai
Ghum ke saaye odhe hain yoon, khushi door chalti hai
Koi shikwa nahin humko, na gila hai apni taqdeer se
Pooche koi to kehte hain, ye aankh yunhi barasti hai !!! tearyeyed
 
ahaa talat sis... bahut khoob
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«Reply #28 on: March 12, 2008, 03:10:09 AM »
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Talat wrote:-

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Zarranawazi ka bohot bohot shukriya Harash


Saaye ko jism se door hua dekha hai
Phoolon se aksar khushbu ko juda dekha hai
Dard ki tanhaiyon main ek hum hi to nahin yahan
Taaron ke beech aasman main, chaand tanha dekha hai

bahut-bahut shukriyaah Talat ji  jo aapko ye ashar pasaNd aaya....ummiid hai ye karam-farmaaii yooN hi inaayat hotii rahegii......khudaa aap ko salaamat rakhe...

sadaa khush rahiye..
 

lliijiye ek ashar our janaab mulaahiza farmaaiye...

 
jaane kyuiN Jalne lagi haiN tanhaiyaN teri hi yadoN se
Toote hue tere saaye  bhi sapnoN maiN raNg bharne lage.

Harash
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«Reply #29 on: March 12, 2008, 10:32:36 PM »
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Thanks Roja Usual Smile Bohot bohot shukriya Harash...ek baar phir se bohot khoob likha aapne.



Khwaabon ka silsila chalne laga hai
Ek rang aankhon main sajne laga hai
Chalo ab sajayen hum ye sooni kalai
Aaeene main mera aks nikharne laga hai !!
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