Tu rakeeboN ki janib sarakti rahi

by harashmahajan on March 09, 2008, 04:06:45 PM
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«Reply #45 on: March 17, 2008, 11:08:23 AM »
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Thanks Khwaish.....!

Shukriya Harash....nice peshkash...!!


Ishq ki raah hoti nahin sahal
Kanch ka dil, nahin koi mahal
Tootma muqaddar thehra, so toot gaya
Ranginiyon se phir na saka behal !!
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«Reply #46 on: March 17, 2008, 03:38:42 PM »
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Talat wrote:-
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Shukriya Harash....nice peshkash...!!



Ishq ki raah hoti nahin sahal
Kanch ka dil, nahin koi mahal
Tootma muqaddar thehra, so toot gaya
Rangiyon se phir na saka behal !!

Talat ji kya khoob jawaab dete hai Naap....Dard ko dard hi jaanta hai ki tees kahaaN se uthh.ti hai....

Kaash banaane waale ne yeh dil kaanch ke banaye hote
Kam se kam todne waloN ke haath maiN Zakhm toh aye hote


harash
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«Reply #47 on: March 17, 2008, 03:40:21 PM »
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bahoot khoob Talat and Harsh ji!!
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #48 on: March 17, 2008, 03:58:37 PM »
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Shukriyaa pooja ji
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Talat
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«Reply #49 on: March 17, 2008, 07:36:26 PM »
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Thanks Pooja Usual Smile
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«Reply #50 on: March 17, 2008, 07:43:09 PM »
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Quote from: Harash Mahajan on March 17, 2008, 03:38:42 PM


Talat ji kya khoob jawaab dete hai Naap....Dard ko dard hi jaanta hai ki tees kahaaN se uthh.ti hai....

Kaash banaane waale ne yeh dil kaanch ke banaye hote
Kam se kam todne waloN ke haath maiN Zakhm toh aye hote


harash

Shukriya Harash, bas aap likhte hi itna achcha hain ki jawab apne aap zuban pe aa jata hai Usual Smile



Wo dil ko khilauna samajhte rahe
Humne dil ko sada dair-o-haram samjha
Wo todte rahe, dil badalte rahe
Humne ta-umr bas Ek Khuda ko hai pooja !!!
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«Reply #51 on: March 18, 2008, 04:19:24 AM »
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Shukriya Harash, bas aap likhte hi itna achcha hain ki jawab apne aap zuban pe aa jata hai




Wo dil ko khilauna samajhte rahe
Humne dil ko sada dair-o-haram samjha
Wo todte rahe, dil badalte rahe
Humne ta-umr bas Ek Khuda ko hai pooja !!!
 


mamnoon hooN Talat ji....Bas aise hi haraf nikalte raheiN daastaaN chalti rahe...wah bahoot khoob....
 
na Khilaouna kaho mere dil ko sanam
Zark lagte ye hathoN se chhoot jaayega
Lout aao tum ab mere khwaboN maiN tum
Ab de de sakooN nahiN toh toot jaayega.

harash
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«Reply #52 on: March 18, 2008, 10:37:39 PM »
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Shukriya Harash...Koshish to yehi rehti hai.....Bohot khoob likha aapne....


Na raah na manzil koi, kis dagar chalen ae dil
Toofan main kashti-e-hyaat, milta nahin koi sahil
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«Reply #53 on: March 19, 2008, 05:02:04 AM »
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Talat Wrote:-
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Shukriya Harash...Koshish to yehi rehti hai.....Bohot khoob likha aapne....



Na raah na manzil koi, kis dagar chalen ae dil
Toofan main kashti-e-hyaat, milta nahin koi sahil

waah bohat hi umda bohat khooob,

aap ka mashkoor hoon Talat ji ke aapko ye pasand aaya. aap jaise kadr-daanoN ki vajah se hi mein yahaan hoon aour jab tak mere paas meri pasand hai haazaree lagaataa rahoonga lijiye ek aapke jazbatoN ko izzat bakashte hue jo mujhe to bahut pasand hai pesh kar rahaa hoon el sher shayad aapko bhee theek lage......

Chale bhi aao dil ke dareechoN se,
Dil ke Zakhmm abhi hare hi haiN


Harash
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«Reply #54 on: March 19, 2008, 05:48:51 AM »
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Bohat khoob Harash ji aur Talat sis nice going .. Applause
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«Reply #55 on: March 19, 2008, 06:06:24 AM »
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Dil ke bazaar mein,main sabse gareeb hoon
khwaabo ke duniya mein bhi,ek main hi badnaseeb hoon

jhoot ki duniya mein sach ka daaman thaam kar baitha hoon
jaanta hoon "main kuch ajeeb hoon"
par jo bhi hoon,aapka hi naseeb hoon....

yeh baat sach hai ke,aapke paas mere liye waqt nahi
phir bhi yeh kambakht log samajte hai
ke main aapke sabse kareeb hoon.....
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«Reply #56 on: March 19, 2008, 06:15:34 AM »
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Shukriyaa^h honey
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«Reply #57 on: March 19, 2008, 06:29:03 AM »
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Khwayiish wrote:-

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Dil ke bazaar mein,main sabse gareeb hoon
khwaabo ke duniya mein bhi,ek main hi badnaseeb hoon

jhoot ki duniya mein sach ka daaman thaam kar baitha hoon
jaanta hoon "main kuch ajeeb hoon"
par jo bhi hoon,aapka hi naseeb hoon....

yeh baat sach hai ke,aapke paas mere liye waqt nahi
phir bhi yeh kambakht log samajte hai
ke main aapke sabse kareeb hoon.....
 
 


manoon hooN khwaiish ji...itni sunder tehreer ko hameiN padne ka mouka diyaa....


NahiN ranj dil ko woh mere lagega
dil jab tire sang gungunane lagega
KyuiN dete ho Gareebi ki duhayii
'Naseeb' Gazal ki tarah suhana lagega.

Harash
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«Reply #58 on: March 19, 2008, 09:08:23 AM »
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Quote from: Harash Mahajan on March 19, 2008, 06:29:03 AM
Khwayiish wrote:-

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Dil ke bazaar mein,main sabse gareeb hoon
khwaabo ke duniya mein bhi,ek main hi badnaseeb hoon

jhoot ki duniya mein sach ka daaman thaam kar baitha hoon
jaanta hoon "main kuch ajeeb hoon"
par jo bhi hoon,aapka hi naseeb hoon....

yeh baat sach hai ke,aapke paas mere liye waqt nahi
phir bhi yeh kambakht log samajte hai
ke main aapke sabse kareeb hoon.....
 
 


manoon hooN khwaiish ji...itni sunder tehreer ko hameiN padne ka mouka diyaa....


NahiN ranj dil ko woh mere lagega
dil jab tire sang gungunane lagega
KyuiN dete ho Gareebi ki duhayii
'Naseeb' Gazal ki tarah suhana lagega.

Harash

Bohot khoob Khwaish and Harash..!!
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«Reply #59 on: March 19, 2008, 09:13:15 AM »
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Quote from: Harash Mahajan on March 19, 2008, 05:02:04 AM
waah bohat hi umda bohat khooob,

aap ka mashkoor hoon Talat ji ke aapko ye pasand aaya. aap jaise kadr-daanoN ki vajah se hi mein yahaan hoon aour jab tak mere paas meri pasand hai haazaree lagaataa rahoonga lijiye ek aapke jazbatoN ko izzat bakashte hue jo mujhe to bahut pasand hai pesh kar rahaa hoon el sher shayad aapko bhee theek lage......

Chale bhi aao dil ke dareechoN se,
Dil ke Zakhmm abhi hare hi haiN


Harash


Bohot hi khoobsurat sher hai Harash...!!! Applause


Ishq ki had se guzarte hue dekha usko,
Qatil ke hath main hi khanjar thama diya !!



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