tu samjh na hume....(nam)

by poonamA on September 22, 2011, 03:07:00 AM
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tu samjh na hume bas ek chota sa mitra
apna le mujhko aise jaise khushboo aur itra
utha khanjar dil cheer kar dekh le mera
dil me basa hai bas tera hi chitra
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«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2011, 06:21:12 AM »
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Poonam jee Aadaab!

Waah waah bahut khoob .. achcha kavita ki shuruaat ki hai
aage badhaiye... bahut khub kavita ban padeNgi.. Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2011, 06:55:30 AM »
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tu samjh na hume bas ek chota sa mitra
apna le mujhko aise jaise khushboo aur itra
utha khanjar dil cheer kar dekh le mera
dil me basa hai bas tera hi chitra
wowwww --kamaal ki post
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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2011, 06:58:53 AM »
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thanx
wowwww --kamaal ki post
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«Reply #4 on: September 22, 2011, 09:05:47 AM »
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tu samjh na hume bas ek chota sa mitra
apna le mujhko aise jaise khushboo aur itra
utha khanjar dil cheer kar dekh le mera
dil me basa hai bas tera hi chitra
tumne to dil apne hamari tasveer lagayee thi .

Humne to teri saansein apni saanson mein basayee thi .

Tumne hi bana lee thi duriyan humse .

Humne to dil se dil ki har dhoori mitayee thi
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