tuhe dekha ~~~~Raahi~~~~

by Rahi2001 on December 13, 2012, 09:06:00 AM
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tuhe dekha to yakeen aaya hamen
jaise kisi ne khuda banaya hamen
dil ke mandir me baithen hai aaram se
aur aanchakl ka takie pe sulaya hamen
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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2012, 09:47:50 AM »
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good one
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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2012, 10:32:38 AM »
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Thoda confusing  but I suggest that please do read your poem atleast twice before sharing so that you can fix mistakes or can improve it.
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2012, 11:24:32 AM »
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Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2012, 11:44:35 AM »
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mistakes bahut hain but koshish achi hai....pls jaldbaji na ker k aaram se post kiya kijiye ....
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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2012, 01:52:39 PM »
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waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2012, 12:55:53 AM »
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very nice
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