tuj per fida

by veenavarsha on March 19, 2011, 09:48:46 AM
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tuj per fida teri yaad pal pal aati rahi
karaar se bekarari badti hi badti gayi

yadoo ke pahre me din katte rahe
raat ko fir shama se bate chalti rahi

namumkin me bhi tadaf badti gayi
 ek aash  se nayi aash bandati rahi

koshishe parwaan chadti gayi
mod aaya na aur raah gujrati gayi

talash me khoi khoi udashi katti rahi
duriya khatam  na hui,lagan badti gayi


aane ko tha na aana jisko kabhi
ruh fir bhi aahate uski sunti rahi

jhalte bhujte deepak se roshan
Neelkamal ki kalam chalti rahi
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2011, 11:16:02 AM »
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“”“
wah
bahut achi soch
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2011, 12:44:25 PM »
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Bahaut ala soch hai iss kalam main..
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2011, 04:37:21 PM »
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“”“
wah
bahut achi soch
sukriya
 sarahana mili aapki aur khush hua man
 soch hamari bhi achhi pata chala ab
sukriya
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2011, 05:13:57 PM »
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Good poem.....VVji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aane ko tha na aana jisko kabhi
Adbhut uss ka intezaar ruh karti rahi....
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2011, 05:16:24 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2011, 07:32:32 PM »
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Bahaut ala soch hai iss kalam main..
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Applause
Khush rahiye..!


Thanks

ala darbaar ke ala darbari
sangat ka assar  tab bhari
Neelkamal kaha is layak
 ye to rab ki aur mahfil ki maharbani
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2011, 07:35:04 PM »
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very nice
tarif ke liye sukriya saahil ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2011, 07:37:59 PM »
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Good poem.....VVji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aane ko tha na aana jisko kabhi
Adbhut uss ka intezaar ruh karti rahi....

anaam se nikla inaam hai
 tarif me badla saar hai
Neelkamal sukriya  tha aam
usko kah diya khaas hai

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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2011, 02:29:33 PM »
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Yaar ye Neelkamal kaun hai ji....kya aapka "takhaloof" hai ji

Teri Parwaaz me he koi kami rahi hogi
Warnaa mohabbat ka aakaash khulaa tha
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«Reply #10 on: March 21, 2011, 03:01:37 PM »
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Bahut umda veena ji..
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«Reply #11 on: March 22, 2011, 06:35:38 PM »
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Bhut Khub Veena JI
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«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2011, 11:16:09 AM »
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Yaar ye Neelkamal kaun hai ji....kya aapka "takhaloof" hai ji

Teri Parwaaz me he koi kami rahi hogi
Warnaa mohabbat ka aakaash khulaa tha

Thanks
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kisi ki chahat me kami to kisi ki aadat buri
ilzam nahi, wo thi kasouti ki ghadi
gagan se preet ki barsaat hui bhari
chate wale big na paye, kismat ki mara mari
 

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kuch kam badal jate hai to kuch naam badal jate hai

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«Reply #13 on: March 23, 2011, 11:19:11 AM »
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Bahut umda veena ji..
dhanywad  broken by luv


 
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«Reply #14 on: March 23, 2011, 11:21:02 AM »
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Bhut Khub Veena JI
rishi ji dhanywaad
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