Tujh bin main kuch bhi nahin !!!

by Talat on March 03, 2007, 02:14:05 AM

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Talat

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Khuda kabhi bhi woh din na dikhaaye
Tum aur main jab Hum reh na jaayen

Bohot pathreeli hain yeh ulfat ki raahain
Chalte chalte kahin aable parh na jaayen

Saja to liye khwaab aankhon main lekin
Bikhar kar ye palkon par hi reh na jaayen

Main tera aaeena hoon, hai tu aks mera
Yeh sach ek jhoota bharam ban na jaaye

Yeh kaisi tadap uth rahi hai aaj dil main
Tujhe yaad karte, mera dam nikal na jaaye


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Bharat

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Tujh bin main kuch bhi nahin !!!

«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2007, 02:37:29 AM »

Hi Talat,
very impressive !!! Bohot achcha likha hai

I'm getting better at Urdu !!!
Aable means blister ( hindi mein chhale )
aks means reflection

for many words, I do not have to look for the meaning of the words on Google !!!


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Pooja

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Tujh bin main kuch bhi nahin !!!

«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2007, 03:50:24 AM »

wah kaya baat hai, bahoot acha likha hai Talat!!!


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pushp24

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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2007, 06:55:55 AM »

nice one TALAT ji

Mareeje_ishk ko mout badi mushkil se aati hai,
Mehfil me honthon pe khushi badi muskil se aati hai,
Unki hi aavaz suna_e deti hai har aavaz me,
Ki mujh tak meri aavaaz bhi badi muskil se aati hai…


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Talat

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Tujh bin main kuch bhi nahin !!!

«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2007, 04:42:27 PM »

Thanks a lot Bharat !!! Chalo Yoindia se tumhe ye faida to hua Winking

Thank you so much Pooja for your appreciation.

Thanks Pushp...a very nice from you ! Welcome to the beautiful world of Yoinia Usual Smile


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Dr.Saira999

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Tujh bin main kuch bhi nahin !!!

«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2007, 05:24:35 PM »

Talat ji nice.

And i wanted 2 ask u tht in 3rd line did u write bahut?

If it's bahut than correct da spellings glasses2


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angel4u

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Tujh bin main kuch bhi nahin !!!

«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2007, 05:49:27 PM »

That one was really beautiful talat ji...

loved it..


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waheed_rose2004

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Tujh bin main kuch bhi nahin !!!

«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2007, 05:51:12 PM »

wonderful Talat......... humesha ki tarah yeh bhi bahot acchi hai......... :lol:


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Aryaan

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Tujh bin main kuch bhi nahin !!!

«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2007, 10:11:02 PM »

Another Beauty Talat...


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Talat

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Tujh bin main kuch bhi nahin !!!

«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2007, 01:55:31 PM »

Thank you very much Saira for appraisal, and pointing out the spelling mistake !

Thank You Angel, Waheed, and Aryaan...thanks for reading the poem and liking it !


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Dr.Saira999

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Tujh bin main kuch bhi nahin !!!

«Reply #10 on: March 04, 2007, 04:11:23 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Thank you very much Saira for appraisal, and pointing out the spelling mistake !

Thank You Angel, Waheed, and Aryaan...thanks for reading the poem and liking it !

That's ok Talat ji :wink: